Zhangmenxianlu

Um, how should I say it? This book has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it is a master-type farming novel, and the plot is okay. When the book is short, it is barely interesting, and I can only say that it is passable. But the shortcomings are definitely obvious. It is too poisonous. The author poisoned it many times. It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, I really felt that my IQ was insulted. For example, the inheritance space and the Yin soldiers were too perfunctory and dry. In fact, this was okay. I could bear it. But in the end, it was a bit unreasonable to suddenly give the protagonist two small magical powers to cheat. The article only expressed one sentence about a narrow escape, and then summarized it like this. It reminded me of the fear of being dominated by web games. The second time was when the protagonist called himself me, my seat, in some foundation-building occasions, and the protagonist was just practicing Qi. It was obvious that the author wanted to show the protagonist's leadership. What cultivation novels cannot change is that strength will always be respected. This is so unreasonable. Anyway, after seeing this, I was ready to abandon the book after finishing the review...

Am I the only one who thinks this is a masterpiece?

What a girly cultivation novel, Luo Liba has been trying to make up the word count, the fights are endless but she can't kill anyone, and the character setting is more capricious than the two or five boys in the Three Kingdoms...

Is Meng Zhang hypocritical? Of course, he is not only hypocritical but also cunning and difficult to understand, but to see if he is really such a person, I actually felt sorry for Meng Zhang when I first watched it. Meng Zhang originally had a high-grade spiritual root and a yin-yang constitution, which is also a good qualification in Middle-earth. However, the old boss was selfish and let Meng Zhang stay in Taiyi Sect. What was the situation of Taiyi Sect at that time? Only two or three big cats and kittens can only reach the sixth level of Qi training, and several of them have rebelled. Doesn't Meng Zhang know about these situations? He knew it, but Meng Zhang did not leave the Taiyi Sect. This was his greatest kindness. The author's writing skills were particularly good, and he successfully portrayed the difficulty of a small sect dealing with major forces. From here is where Meng Zhang began to change, leading this man full of calculations and the weak to the strong. In the world of food-eating cultivation, kind-hearted people are either low-level monks or dead, because the great monk who survived to the end has already changed. As for Meng Zhang's hypocrisy and hypocrisy, the author also emphasized it many times in the novel through supporting characters. In this environment, if no changes are made, waiting for Meng Zhang Zhang and the Taiyi sect can only perish, not to mention that Meng Zhang still has a very bottom line. His biggest bottom line is not to collude with the domain races and to resist the devil. Although there are interests, it is more about his own bottom line and Taoist heart. In this novel, it also shows that Taiyi The Yis can develop not only because of the halo of the protagonist Meng Zhang, but also because of the common progress and retreat of Meng Zhang and Taiyi. This also emphasizes that interests are paramount in the world of immortality in this novel, and interests are a stronger bond than friendship. Isn't this the case with Meng Zhang's change? If he was as happy as Shuang Wen, Taiyi Sect would not be able to develop at all. Finally, Meng Zhang is indeed a hypocritical person, but if Meng Zhang leaves Taiyi Sect and becomes a casual cultivator or a disciple of a major sect, he may be able to follow his heart more What I thought, but I will definitely not achieve the current achievements. After all, Taiyi Sect has made Meng Zhang, and Meng Zhang has made Taiyi Sect. The two are inseparable. There is no hypocrisy. After all, in the world of the jungle, you have to suffer if you are weak. If you are strong, you can do whatever you want.

This gave me the feeling that I was either fighting or on the way to a fight. The war was too compact.

I watch it every day, it's pretty good. Come on, author, don't be disturbed by trolls.

I endured reading nearly a hundred chapters, but I was really exhausted I was a little tired and couldn't stand it How should I put it, there is no main line The so-called sect's sense of participation is not strong

Hui Chang is good👍Come on💪First set a small goal, 100 million words! You dare to write! Oh, just dare to look!

In fact, the first two million words or so of this book are really well-written and beautiful, and then the storyline of the real immortals begins. To be honest, even the great god Wangyu is not very good at writing about real immortals. The author can definitely end this book and write another one.

Brother, the writing is good, please update as soon as possible!

Updates are so slow, it's hard for people to live

It's really a lot of nonsense.

Ten million words, thousands of mortals will flow, it has not collapsed yet, the plot is quite satisfactory, the upgrade system in the middle and late stages is my own original set, suitable for many recommendations

As for this book, you may have to try to read it with some temper. The plot of this book is very long, the number of words is also large, and it is easy to skip chapters. But in fact, if you slowly read it carefully, you can find a certain flavor. In fact, especially when you get to the later 3,000 or 4,000 pictures, especially Golden Immortal Level, in general, is actually very well written. In fact, this book does not have too many blocking points or very exciting points, but the characters and some plot choices are very good. In the storyline of this book, a lot of foreshadowings are constantly being laid. The plot is also interesting to read. This book is really suitable to keep and follow. If you are following it, you may actually feel a little uncomfortable reading it. The plot is indeed relatively slow, so you can save one stage of the plot, which will take about half a month.

A fantasy version of the road to entrepreneurship: from a small boss who collects scraps, to promotion step by step, and finally to the CEO of a group company. It takes an estimated 5,000 chapters to enter the system to achieve this!

Why does it have no readership if it is so well written?

The early stages of this novel were good, but after entering Yang Shen, it stopped working. Do you know why? There is no "dialogue" for the "characters" in the article. Only the male protagonist occasionally speaks a few words. The rest is "said" and "explained" by the author himself (all are narrations). Are you angry or not? 😵

The book is still a very good person. The protagonist's IQ is online 🌹

Not bad. The plot is the same as the road to become the leader of the cultivation sect.

I'm very lucky to see another article that I like. At this point, the author would like to remind you not to use modern words (kilometers, tons, meters, percents) and avoid using online words.

Does anyone still read this book? I have ordered and read more than 1,000 chapters. I just can't stand it anymore. Even if the protagonist is weak, he also has a weak IQ. He will always seek refuge with others. If he is weak, he will find a place to immerse himself in cultivation. When he is strong, he will turn back to take revenge. What do you think if you just want to seek refuge with others? The purpose of cultivating immortals is to be carefree and do whatever you want, but what about you? Why do you have to compromise for the sake of the sect? The special code is an excuse. Compromising once or twice is justifiable. The whole article is a compromise. Who cares who you are? There is also a whole group of Immortal Cultivators who force you to start a dynasty to compete for hegemony. Can you just quietly cultivate to be an Immortal? Even if you want to seize resources, don't engage in a mortal dynasty struggle for hegemony, right? In a world of cultivators, don't you feel awkward blending into a dynasty? Just like in the ordinary world, what sect force can compete with a dynasty? What's more important is that this dynasty is a dynasty that treats the sect forces extremely excessively. So the protagonist should still be a grandson by the end of the book. If you haven't fully subscribed to watch it, don't come here to comment. It's a pity that I lost thousands of points.

I'm giving you a reward. Update more. You're too thin.

Finally, there is an unsystematic sect cultivation text. I will save it and vote for it first. Come on, author, develop quietly, don't develop too fast, and don't be too cruel.

1. Someone else spends a lot of money to hire the protagonist to get an item at a premium, but the protagonist turns around and deliberately leaves a trap in the item to trick the employer; 2. The elders of the sect who have helped the protagonist through several crises of annihilation, sent secret methods, and clones to save their lives want to break through, and ask the protagonist to help guard the treasures used for the breakthrough. The protagonist complains for a while, but after the protagonist gets the treasure, he gets greedy and watches the elders die because they cannot break through; 3. The boss invites the protagonist to fight off the barbarians from outside the territory. The threatening high-end combat power on the opposite side has been arranged. The reward given to him may not be available even if the whole sect has been busy for two to three hundred years, which makes the protagonist feel unhappy.

This protagonist is really a double-standard hypocrite, bullying the weak and afraid of the strong. He feels disgusted when others associate with foreigners, and he wants to draw a clear line with them. When he cooperates with foreigners, he no longer feels disgusted, and he rushes to lick them.

The advantage of this book is that it is large and filling, but the disadvantage is that it is a mess. People who don't mind Akaashi can read it.

The most shameless and despicable 25-year-old protagonist since the existence of Qidian. Considering that the protagonist is usually an incarnation of the author, the author will not be a good bird.

This book is a rare master book. It is actually well written and worth reading. I strongly recommend that you skip the bad points and try to read later. There are not many books like this, and it is a rare masterpiece during the book shortage period. I have read more than 160 chapters so far, and I don't know if the author can see some suggestions. The first suggestion is to take less risks and participate less in things beyond your own capabilities. The protagonist must grasp the overall situation and direction, walk his own path, and find his own needs. It is reasonable to encounter enemies in the process of growing up. It is taboo for the protagonist to become a magnet, and all bad things will come to his door. In particular, the fewer plots where the protagonist is unable to resist or takes risks, the better! Because being pushed away means that one's destiny is in the hands of others, which is taking risks. If others don't follow the plan you specified, wouldn't the protagonist be doomed? Once everyone realizes this when they are studying, they feel uncomfortable. When they find that their IQ is -1, they vote with their feet. Therefore, the plot design must be reasonable and reasonable. In order to save people, the protagonist forcibly provokes an enemy with many foundation-building monks when his own sect has no one to build a foundation. This is a poisonous point. Cross-level challenges and encounters with enemies cannot become the norm. Many authors make mistakes on this issue. This book does not make too many mistakes, but there are some similar problems. The second suggestion is that the author should not be pretentious. If the description of the protagonist's growth process is not rigorous, and he often makes mistakes and then reflects on them, and then makes the same mistakes again, this is called hypocrisy. The author knows that this is not good, but he just writes it. It seems that the protagonist is not smart enough, and the readers are unhappy after reading it. For example, write a little about the protagonist's thoughts on how to hide and package yourself reasonably, because no one else can see through the book, only the protagonist and us readers know about it. Isn't it secretly cool? No one wants to see the protagonist's growth and development. We only want to see a courageous, persevering, and un-Mother-like protagonist who should be perfect from the moment he is born. As a cheater, the third protagonist naturally upgrades very quickly, and it is naturally difficult for his subordinates to keep up with the protagonist. This is a test of the author's writing skills. In the past, the protagonist's qualifications in "The Road to the Leader of the Cultivation Sect" were average, so naturally there is no such problem. The protagonist of this article is a genius. When he drags his teammates along, he accidentally writes that he is carrying a lot of drag bottles, which can easily cause readers to feel uncomfortable. It is important to remember that it is fundamental for the protagonist to improve his own strength, and no one likes it as a gift.          ，， There are a few that I remember very clearly. For example, there was a time when the protagonist called himself "this seat", which was obviously a Qi practitioner. He called himself "this seat" many times during foundation building occasions, thinking that it reflected his identity. This poisonous point was disgusting and inconsistent with the main line of the protagonist's low-key development. Many of them were mentioned in this chapter, but the author did not modify them. The protagonist never calls himself this way again in the following chapters. He has obviously corrected himself, but is he not going to correct it if he already has some bad points? The fifth thing is to avoid abusing the protagonist or forcibly increasing the difficulty of the protagonist. In Chapter 164, the protagonist removes the evil spirit from Lao Zhuji, who was deeply troubled by the evil spirit. It is written that after the incident, Lao Zhuji's foundation was solid, but the protagonist's vitality was damaged and it took twenty or thirty years of cultivation to recover. The author writes that the protagonist "didn't pay much attention to it, since he was still young anyway, so delaying twenty or thirty years of cultivation was not a big deal." This is really a huge poison that drives away readers. It would be great if the author weighed the pros and cons and wrote about helping Lao Zhuji because he needed a helper and paid the price of one or two years of cultivation in exchange for a helper and rich experience in fighting against evil spirits. In this place, the author forcibly made the protagonist more difficult, and many people left. Be careful not to abuse the protagonist! My suggestion is that the author can refer to it to see if it is reasonable and try to avoid making repeated mistakes. At the same time, I once again strongly recommend that the author revise a few poisonous points. Some of them are barely readable for me. After all, I am a bookworm for ten years, but it will affect newcomers very much. Books have to be revised. For example, Jin Yong's novels have been revised countless times. There should be multiple ways to revise, and there should be no taboos. If you don't revise, it will be difficult to accumulate reputation and readers. Especially nowadays, chapter reviews have amplified the influence of poisonous points. I didn't notice it at first, but I discovered it after reading the chapter reviews, so we must pay attention to it.

In the next battle, all opponents were wiped out. Taiyi Sect's top-notch combat power, which belongs to the main characters, is not dead but can cause multiple injuries. This kind of scene will pass if you tolerate it three or five times. Do you have to do it again? Is it possible that this group of characters needs to advance to the Yuan Shen stage with the protagonist? I really have to give up my brain to pursue it! I still remember it was mentioned in the book that Meng Zhang's upper-middle-quality spiritual root qualifications are not outstanding among the golden elixir monks. Aren't those Taiyi Sect golden elixir disciples whose spiritual root qualifications cannot reach the high-grade spiritual roots belong to the bottom of the golden elixir monks (to be honest, it is unreasonable that they can all form elixirs. Really You're awesome, are you trying to express that the success rate of Taiyi Sect's alchemy formation is 100%? ), So they have to abandon logic to advance to the middle stage of the golden elixir. Why did the author really want to write that they advanced to the Yuanshen stage? I really have to thank you for being so serious!

I read it several times, and I couldn't bear to read it until I had no novels to read. The protagonist is dark, hypocritical, and has double standards. He is even more hypocritical than Yue Buqun. Every time he does bad things, he must think that he is doing it for justice. It is really hypocritical.