Hogwarts Blood Wizard

As a bookworm who has been reading for 10 years and is planning to revolt, I think this book is really good so far. I gave this book my first review... Each main character has basically no logical or behavioral bugs. This is the greatest respect and restoration of the original worldview and the formed original characters. And a stable and self-consistent worldview is the foundation of a novel. As for the relationship between the protagonist, his mother and Doggett, although it is a little deliberate, it is determined by the author's writing power and skills. Under the premise of certain writing skills and skills, there is no other way to use some deliberately arranged side plots in exchange for the development of the plot. The lesser of two evils. This kind of plot can become natural as the author's skill improves. (Regarding the issue of Doggett's three views on giving money to the protagonist, I think the author's description of the emotional and psychological changes of the protagonist is not clear enough, causing readers to think it is illogical? After brainstorming the plot, I personally feel that the description is suggestive...) As for the fact that the key plot has not changed much from the original work, it should not be a problem at all. The magic modification and the slight influence are two different styles of fan fiction, and the addition of a protagonist is a considerable change in itself. As of now, according to each character's own logic, it is inevitable that the plot will become less numerous. Lastly, regarding some minor bugs, they are more like cheating. They are minor errors that can be improved by modifying a certain point, rather than irreversible logical breakdowns. At least, they have no impact on my reading. I can only say that if something is wrong, then try to improve it Finally, come on, the author, this book so far is really the most in line with my taste among all the HP books I have read.

(Internet picture) A very rare HP fan art, the plot, characters and scenes are all great, the part about the time turner is so cool! "You can't change the past, you are just completing a period of history" The portrayal of Hermione and Luna is spiritual I feel that the story will be more exciting later The only problem with this book is the author's updates. There are often plots that are inconsistent if you read them a day later, but the stable two updates a day is quite conscientious. Come on author (ง •̀_•́)ง, all the votes are for you! （Add some details）

From the first chapter, word by word, to the latest in one breath. It's been a long time since Doupo entered the pit and I haven't tried to complete a novel. Not to mention that I, a fan of Harry Potter, felt elevated after seeing this exquisite fan novel. Unlike Shuangwen, where Shuangwen drives a train and welds the doors shut and can rip through several chapters a day, I have always thought that the subject of Harry Potter is relatively difficult to write. The movie took nearly ten years to present the world in the book, not only because of the plot structure, good actors, fantastic creatures, and all kinds of strange creations all need time to settle. So, I'm not afraid that the author will write slowly (one chapter/two chapters a day), but I'm afraid that he will stop halfway and there won't be many dazzling novels. (Traveling Through 99 Worlds at the Same Time) is a novel that I think is good in recent years. This is the second book. If you read too many cool articles, you will become picky!                                                               All I want to say to the author is this: write well, and you may be the J. K. Rowling from the beginning. Come on 🙏🙏

This novel is considered good among Harry Potter fan novels, and it doesn't have any of those mindless plots.

It's very well written. It's the first fully ordered book. I'll give you a monthly pass and recommendations.

Riddle: Ivan, when are you going to take me to the bank to withdraw the inheritance? Do you not love me anymore? Yifan: Tell me where you put your passbook, and I will take you there. Riddle: Huh, you and Harry are flirting with each other every day, and now you want to defraud me of my family property. You are sleeping with Harry, some mistress, you are just dreaming. Yifan: Don't say it as if I'm sorry for you. Do you think you go out to do your hair every day and cuckold me? Do you think I don't know? If you don't tell me where the bankbook is, I'll kill you right now. Riddle: You, you, you, don't come here. Even if you kill me, I won't tell you. If you kill me, you will never find my property. Yifan: Do you think there's nothing I can do about it? Just stay in the dark room. Riddle: You, you are so shameless, you use what I gave you to deal with me, you, you

Let me talk about my thoughts on reading this book: So far, I feel that the author's plot setting is very exciting and the plot is very compact. It seems very relaxed, and the relationship between the characters is not introduced in a large way, but the relationship between the characters can be understood through the dialogue. First grade, magic stone section. The plot of the original work was modified to a certain extent, but the author cleverly reconciled it in the end, making the modifications without going out of style. Personally, I suggest that the author maintains the current pace and does not overrate the word count. Although there is a fee for VIP chapters, the oversized word count can bring extra money to the author, but I personally suggest that if one person writes one update at a time, it is really worth it. It would be understandable if the author wrote half a chapter and a chapter three times a day, but too much water would really kill the enthusiasm for following the update. After all, readers' subscription money does not come from floods. It is not easy for the author to write articles. No matter how much you subscribe, at least support the author with an initial subscription. The author keeps updating at the current level, and I will subscribe until I feel that I can't afford the money (after all, if the author writes two to three million words, it will cost hundreds of dollars, which is unaffordable 😁) Come on, author! Also: The author would like to add a lot of detail!

Isn't Docter's darkening a bit abrupt? ! Or am I not understanding? Isn't that Docter? ! Also, it was a coincidence that my mother's accident happened. Why did it happen to be on this day? ! Was it because his mother went out to pick him up that the enemy found the opportunity? ! But my mother doesn't just sit at home and never go out. I feel like the author doesn't know how to deal with the relationship between mother and son, so the mother is forced to go offline. Let's boldly predict that the protagonist will really embark on the path of the Dark Lord later in order to save his mother or take revenge on his opponent, as if he was driven by fate. And didn't the werewolf promise to look after their home? ! Are there usually a few people around to help guard? There is no such big movement as the explosion? !

A long time HP fan, this book is well written and doesn't suddenly become outrageous or dark like some other HP fanfics. Bloodline This bloodline aspect is very novel. This book is probably the best among the HP fanfics I have ever read. Has the strength of 2 to 3 stars

The protagonist is no longer a straight man, he is one step closer to entering the realm of a scumbag. It's not that the protagonist doesn't understand, he knows everything, but he doesn't express any opinions. Hermione is taking the initiative in everything, and Hermione is pushing the emotional line forward. The protagonist keeps watching, not knowing whether to refuse or agree. However, the author also lets the protagonist know everything, knowing that Hermione is interested in him, and he is also interested in Hermione, but he just hangs on, hanging on Hermione and hanging on the readers. Even if the author wants to create a plot that is enjoyable to hear and see, the writing does not make people feel happy to hear and see it. Instead, it makes people feel stomachache. When the prom plot is written, whether Hermione takes the lead and establishes her position as the first heroine, or she quits and becomes a supporting actress, you, the author, must make a decision to completely reassure the readers. By then, the readership will be almost settled, and it is not an option to keep hanging on like this. After all, it's not like we can't write stories that we love to see and hear in the future. Why not if it can also make readers feel at ease?

Reading a single chapter is not interesting. Of course, it is interesting to read it all at once 🙂 Putting aside the rational logic and so on, this book is really good to read, although there is still a reasonable logic in the book~ (By the way, I will post my complete collection of mobile games, otherwise it will feel empty and empty~){"TopicId ":"575996645787959296","TopicName":"Harry Potter"}{"TopicId":"575996699491893248","TopicName":"Hogwarts"}

That's right, I'm just lusting after Emma's body! ! Luna has only met the protagonist a few times. She has no special experience. It feels like she has abandoned the foreplay and gone straight to the topic. (Of course some people will say that there are many couples like this in reality, but aren't I reading novels? I am still pursuing the same reality when reading novels, so why should I read novels? Don't I have a cat disease? Reading novels is about pursuing things that you can't get in reality, so novels can get everyone's pleasure, right?) The relationship between Luna and the protagonist was too sudden, as if they were forcibly controlled by some indescribable existence. (Well, it's a short, feeble, indescribable existence!) I don't really like this, and I don't want the author to play the role of a scumbag. (Suddenly I noticed that there are so many protagonists in books recently written by scumbag men, and I feel unimpressed!) As expected, I still like pure love! ! I hope the author never wants a harem! ! Finally, I bought all the Hermione shares! ! !

There aren't many high-quality HP fics, but this one is definitely one of them! Although there are still some small problems that need to be improved, the flaws are still outstanding! Especially the part about reversing time and space, with self-consistent logic and echoes, it is the biggest highlight of the book so far. It can also be seen that the author has worked hard to conceive the plot carefully. Without some writing skills and courage, he really can't write this kind of plot! Compared with the wonderful plot, there are some minor flaws in the characterization, but there are no obvious bugs, and overall it is quite full. Take Fudge, the Minister of Magic, for example. His image of a hypocritical, irritable, and power-obsessed villain is very vivid. In an instant, readers can feel Fudge's ugly face immersed in the story. The author fully portrays this. But Fudge also has another characteristic, that is, he is content with the status quo, so in my personal opinion, Fudge is unlikely to deliberately try to bring down Dumbledore, because Dumbledore is not only the most powerful white wizard, but also a banner that symbolizes justice. Dumbledore's downfall will do more harm than good to Fudge. This can be seen from the original book. When Lucius used the Buckbeak incident to drive away Dumbledore, Fudge's performance can be seen that he does not want Dumbledore to fall at all. The last plot I read was about the renovation of Knockturn Alley. The following are personal complaints and only my personal opinions. Knockturn Alley has been integrated by one force. This is definitely a scene that Fudge does not want to see. In his opinion, the most ideal state is for several pure-blood families to restrain and defend each other while being interdependent. This facilitates management and restraint, rather than allowing the protagonist's family to dominate. Fudge cannot tolerate the emergence of forces beyond his control, so the tit-for-tat confrontation between the protagonist and the Ministry of Magic is an inevitable result. There is no room for relaxation between the two, and someone as smart as the protagonist would not have thought of it. From the moment Knockturn Alley was integrated, the protagonist should understand that there is no way back except to compromise and surrender to Fudge. But the first thing the protagonist thinks of is to build a safe house to hide in... Also, the protagonist is too tolerant towards the dark wizards in Knockturn Alley. It is true that a big stick and sweet dates are the best way to treat these desperadoes, but don't forget that the effect of a big stick is far greater than that of candied dates. Only majesty and dictatorship can make those desperadoes obedient. Properly giving some sweetness is just to prevent those dark wizards from having unwanted thoughts. How does majesty come about? High strength is only part of it. The most important thing is the protagonist's sense of mystery and distance. The sense of mystery is to allow the dark wizards to recognize the gap in strength between themselves and the protagonist, and the sense of distance is to allow the dark wizards to position themselves so that they do not dare to have rebellious emotions. But the protagonist wants to get along with them... Also, after conquering the underground secret room of the Wizard Market, the protagonist's way of dealing with the inaction of several interlocutors is really not very good. Even if the protagonist is afraid of getting his hands dirty, he can just let the traitor Rozier do it for him! And it's not necessary to execute them all, leaving three to kill two can maximize the benefits. For example... Uh, a short description, which is embarrassing: Ivan strolled into the messy secret room, looked at the talkers who were kneeling on the ground under the weight of the werewolf wizard with a half-smile, took out his wand and waved it casually a few times, and a broken wooden board at his feet turned into a gorgeous seat in an instant. Ivan touched the armrest lightly, then lazily sat on the seat, tilting his head and looking at the remaining three speakers carefully. Ivan waved his hand, and the two werewolves pressing Rozier let go and stepped aside. Seeing Ivan's arrival, Rozier burst into tears, with his hair disheveled, lying on the ground, crawling to Ivan's hand on both hands and feet, like a puppy that had completed its task and expected a reward from its master. Ivan curled his lips, stroked Rozier's hair, and nodded slightly to him, indicating that he did a good job. Seeing Rozier's extremely shameless appearance, the other three speakers glared at him, but due to Ivan's strong aura, the three of them did not dare to go too far. After a moment of silence, Ivan spoke, but the content made the three speakers feel trapped. "Knockturn Alley is a good place. If you have money, everyone will naturally make money together, right? What you families did before is not authentic! Tell me, what should I do with it? What about you?" Without waiting for the reaction of the three prisoners, Ivan pursed his lips and chuckled, but he didn't know that his words turned into a devil's whisper in the ears of the three interlocutors. "I need three agents to properly handle some... Matters when I leave Knockturn Alley. . But it's a pity that Rozier has occupied a spot. In other words, one of the three of you is destined to be unable to get out of the secret room today! Mr. Foley, instead of trying to do some tricks under my nose, think about what you are of use to me and what you can do to me alive. What good will it bring? Give me a reason not to kill you!" With this approach, there will inevitably be dissatisfaction between the three people involved. The three of them will restrain each other, and the protagonist can control them more easily, without the occurrence of things like being obedient and insubordinate. There are also plots such as imagining monsters. Once or twice is fine and full of drama, but watching too much will really make readers question the protagonist's IQ. Finally, this is a rare high-quality HP fanfic with the potential to become a god. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better!

I'm in the same class as Harry, and I also broke up with Rohe's CP. Like it 🤭 The story revolves around the original work, but under the influence of the protagonist, the butterfly, it has gradually deviated from the original route. I look forward to the subsequent development~

When I read Chapter 108, I just thought it was a bit strange and didn't go into too much detail. But there was a book review below saying that the protagonist's outlook on life was problematic. I thought about it carefully and I don't know if there was something wrong with outlook on life, but the plot was indeed a bit strange. 1. The protagonist initially refused Harry's help of a few gold galleons (single digits), but he accepted Doggett's nearly a hundred gold galleons (double digits, at least the bracelet was already 35) without any concern. Even if he emphasized [to himself] that it was a loan, does he have the peace of mind that "you have to pay a price if you want to chase my mother"? ! But the protagonist doesn't regard his mother as a relative at all? I've been on guard all the time, and I took other people's money. In the end, wouldn't my mother have to repay the favor? The protagonist can see how much Doggett cares about his mother, so he still wants to be an "assistant"? 2. This battle is 2v5, but this Doggett is a bit weak. He won completely by relying on the characteristics of the protagonist's unicorn. As a "mad dog", he can still jump to the present. He shouldn't be so weak. I feel that he can defeat two and a half by himself and then win with the assistance of the protagonist. He didn't kill any of these 5, which is not very reasonable. 3. The author's description said that the protagonist's magic power has bottomed out, and he does not even dare to make the final blow of the unicorn. He can strike at will and find the right time. In my understanding, he can only deliver the final blow and then he can do nothing but not faint. As a result, when he met the last magician, he had magic power to activate the bracelet, and magic power to cast the sleeping spell. He also said, "Magic power is like water in a sponge. If you squeeze it, it will be there." I felt that my previous nervousness was in vain and my feelings were deceived. This untrue description is too uncomfortable.

The book is very good, and you will become addicted after reading dozens of chapters. The only drawback is that it does not write about why the protagonist traveled through time, but only the origin of the system. As a result, it always feels weird to read the protagonist and his mother (after all, he has been deceived by the protagonist)

I like your work very much. Please update it. I don't want to be a eunuch. I love you.

This book is really interesting, but the author just adds a little more every day and I can't get enough of it ╮(╯-╰")╭

Big brother, you can't do this. I have been reading this chapter for almost half a year, and I finished it in two days. I couldn't even spend 12 yuan Hurry up and code to ensure quality and quantity

Update quickly. I'm rolling around asking for updates. Don't be short and quick. I'll give you all the votes.

It ranks first among the Harry Potter fanfics I've read, and it's pretty good.

Finished with flowers, this is really a delightful adventure

It's really beautiful. It's my first time to fully order 😍

Come on, author! It's well written, it would be better if it could write more.

I have a question, I haven't watched many Harry Potter movies, do the characters in them have to use wands to cast spells? Nothing else works?

Friends who buy Hermione shares come here~

Harry fandom without Hermione is soulless

One of the new HP books that I like the most

Let me tell you my feelings after reading it. Start low and go high. I missed this book several times. To be honest, the beginning was not very attractive. But I dare to say that this fanfic is the best-looking one. It may not have the best results, but it is the best-looking and the closest to the original text. There are a few pictures with more than a thousand pictures where the protagonist is a bit inexplicable. Everything else is perfect. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The time part is not good-looking, but the author has really worked hard and the closed loop is very reasonable. Voldemort's death wasn't particularly good, it felt a bit abrupt. So the advantages: it is extremely close to the original text, each magic has a very reasonable explanation and application, and the details are extremely exquisite. Just do what you are supposed to be at. You can't beat Snape in the first and second years, but the writing is a bit weak at the end. The plot development and turning points are so damn perfect. There are many fans who don't know what to do after killing Voldemort, and then either put off writing or write too much. The plot of this book is really NB. At the same time, the author has read a lot of the original work, and the magic props are extremely realistic and full of immersion. It's just that sometimes Kavin suddenly returns to the state he was in at the beginning. The best thing to say is, you can read it half-heartedly at the beginning, but it really looks good later on. Especially the last extra chapter, which fills in a lot of pitfalls perfectly, because I have always been fascinated by Dumbledore's operations. The extra chapter gives room for imagination and fills in a lot of pitfalls, which is nice.

A good HP fan, the plot is reasonable so far, and the IQ is online