I’ll Fight My Way from West to East

The author intended to portray the protagonist as a powerful and ruthless figure, but the protagonist turned out to be nothing more than a reckless brute.

I won't go into the rest, but I'll mention three points. First, I don't understand why you have a blacksmith shop but don't even know how to make basic plate armor? And shields too. Second, your soldiers level up by killing, just like you, and they spend at least two years in training space.

I can accept everything else, but I really can't stand the power system. A novel about farming, development, and building up an army turns out to be a high-martial-world setting. Seeing things like "Innate Elixir Formation" makes me want to stop reading. I thought it would be about epic battles, but it turns out to be about one person fighting against an entire nation.

After reading dozens of chapters, I personally think that if a modern person were to transmigrate into the protagonist's body, the book would be much more successful!

Well, to put it simply, Lu Bu is actually the highest-ranking commander 😅, and the protagonist is a native killing a time traveler, which doesn't really make the story very immersive. Plus, the plot is too bland.

Are you sure you inherited a heavily modified Lu Bu? His strength is ridiculously weak compared to his other attributes.

The entire page is riddled with typos, and they haven't corrected them. It's infuriating to read! I can't even guess what it means! The density of typos is just too high.

There are so many typos in your work! Many sentences are incomprehensible and severely impact the reading experience. I hope the author will pay more attention to typos.

The author should really pay attention to typos; the entire article is riddled with them, making it difficult to read.

The whole family went to Beijing and thoroughly humiliated everyone's intelligence →_→