I’ll Fight My Way from West to East

The author wanted to write the protagonist as a hero, but the resulting protagonist was completely reckless.

I won't talk about the rest, but three points. First, I don't know why you have a blacksmith shop that doesn't even know the most basic plate armor? And the shield. Second, your soldiers can be upgraded just like you by killing people, and they stay in the training space for at least two years, and they can be exchanged with trash soldiers when they come out. They are all cannon fodder anyway, so why do they need to be upgraded? Wouldn't it be nice if the strength was constant? Besides, you don't even give them the most basic protective gear. Third, population is the key. Maybe you haven't written about what I've seen. I've read almost dozens of chapters and I've only seen two women. Are you considered a man? There is no next generation? After saying that women have the same money, it doesn't matter if you are single. If one force doesn't even have a basic male-to-female ratio, then you might as well just blast your troops and get a flat A! There is no need to write other things, but it is full of loopholes. It is not easy for you to read more information when you are still in school! In ancient wars before, there was no such party, nor was there such a force.

I can accept everything else, but I really can't stand the power system. The novel about farming and developing explosive weapons turned out to be in a world of high martial arts. I didn't want to read it when I saw the innate pills and the like. I thought it was a golden horse and an iron horse, but it turns out that one person is against the country, and there are martial arts masters behind it who can defeat ten thousand people. Is the army really that important? The national force no longer depends on the size and sophistication of your army, but on the level of your masters. Doesn't this become high-level martial arts? When I looked at the front, I thought there was at most a top-notch person who could defeat a hundred people with one but could still be killed by the army. But when I saw some super master who was born with an elixir, and Dagan was established by the founding emperor of Dagan with the help of invincible force, I was speechless. It doesn't matter if there is that level of force and army. One person is a country. Of course, I haven't read the rest of it. If the author changes the settings later, it's my fault. I haven't finished it. Brothers who have seen the rest can tell me.

After reading dozens of chapters, I personally feel that this book would have done much better if the protagonist had a modern soul.

How should I put it? Lu Bu is actually the highest commander 😅 The natives kill the time traveler as the protagonist, which doesn't give people a very high sense of immersion. Plus the plot is too bland

Are you sure you are inheriting the magically modified Lu Bu? A group whose strength is weaker than other attributes,

It's full of typos and won't be corrected. It's really exciting to read! I can't even guess what it means! The density of typos is too high

You must have too many typos. Many sentences cannot be read clearly, which greatly affects the reading experience. I hope the author will be more careful

The author should pay attention to typos. The article is full of typos and affects reading.

The whole family went to Beijing and rubbed everyone's IQ on the ground →_→