Pirate's Rescue

I'm really convinced, Ace can save the Yondaime couple, but not the fourth generation couple. Why don't you worry about Ace saving Luffy? Luffy has lost a source of power. Can he really only save the pirates? Then what's the point of going to Hokage?

Extremely poisonous, ***, he first cut off his left hand, and then protected Olaha's legs. I'm about to be poisoned.

The plot is mindless, like a running account, and the punctuation is inaccurate and there are many typos. If you read the book with your brain in mind, it is best not to read it, otherwise it will be more uncomfortable. I recommend reading it when you are bored and reading.

Abandoned! Bye-Bye! How come the current time travel and rebirth stories are basically like Naruto and nothing innovative? I've seen a lot of innovations that basically use Naruto as a golden finger.

Ace was meant to die.

I think Ace should die. What's wrong with it? It's very satisfying.

Personally, I feel that Ace is seeking death and there is no need to save him. Luffy is almost the same. If he didn't have a direct halo, he would have died long ago. The third brother is Sabo. Regardless of Ace or Luffy, apart from being worth watching for the crew, there is really nothing else. In reality, they are what the public calls naughty kids. I may be poking a hornet's nest among pirate fans by saying this, but I really don't agree with "his" point of view.

When I first looked at the top. Ace didn't leave quickly after he was rescued, but he even pretended to be brave and went to confront the general. He deserved to die.

The protagonist has no subjective consciousness of his own. When watching One Piece, he felt that their death was very regrettable. After time travel, he had to save them. To be fair, this was motivated by emotion without thinking about the consequences. The second thing is that the mother's heart is too heavy. If you write about saving the child in the dark bullet, I will applaud you with both hands. If you don't save it, you will not be a human being. This is justice.

The author is also a great critic. He wrote 2.35 Million words with 0 recommendation votes and 0 monthly votes.

Didn't Ace deserve to die? Any regrets? ? ?

Why did Ace die? If he doesn't die, the Whitebeard Pirates will never be destroyed. In the future, Whitebeard will make Ace the leader. Wouldn't this make him the Pirate King faster than Luffy? Then Luffy go fuck him

The biggest regret is why Luffy didn't die! ! !

Some can be saved and some cannot. If the two generals O'Hara cannot be destroyed, they will also destroy this place if they conquer the world and launch a war.

I rate this as a reader who has read the entire novel. First point, it is not suitable for the crowd. Those who like to watch conquest types can leave. If you don't like the depressing plot, you can leave. If you have a strong objection to pirates, you can leave. Second point, the author has a part of the plot that is too ups and downs to be repeated in the same plot, so it is not recommended for those who are impatient. Third point, if you don't like the protagonist paying too much for others, you can leave. Fourth, the writing style is okay. To be honest, I may not be able to read it if I am so literate. Fourth, if you hold the mentality that the existence of pirates is a mistake, or that it is a mistake not to follow navy regulations, you can change it. The navy of the pirate world cannot be compared with the army of the country we live in. The overall evaluation of the novel is three and a half stars. Toxic index, three stars. Everything is my personal opinion. Please do not disturb me. If you feel uncomfortable, please leave. Everything is evaluated from an objective perspective, and it also reduces the discomfort of the crowd. It also reduces meaningless quarrels for readers like me. Just choose to read the book written by the author. We only need to help the author find appropriate mistakes and correct some details. We need to treat the fruits of other people's labor rationally. Put yourself in someone else's shoes. For example, when you were in school and were belittled or ridiculed for doing your homework bit by bit, everyone would feel uncomfortable.

To be honest, the writing is really a running account 😅. I am in the I Can Do It series, and I am embarrassed and have cancer.

Rubbish book, the timeline is messy. According to O'Hara's demon-slaying order, Robin was 8 years old. Luffy went to sea and met Robin 20 years later. Robin was 28 years old. So Roger had already become the Pirate King at that time. But as you wrote, Shanks was only 10 years old at that time. No wonder so few people read it. It's really rubbish.

I didn't feel much about Ace's death. There were few scenes. I didn't feel it was a pity or moved him when he died.

Hail Mary? Save this, save that

Originally I was ready to give it a try when I saw that the introduction was about redeeming regrets, but when I saw this system I didn't want to read it. Personally, I feel that strength comes from practice. If that doesn't work, give the protagonist the entire Devil Fruit. If you give me the Naruto system, wouldn't that make you invincible?

The review of the 1000-chapter novel is too coincidental. Excuse me.

Just look at the title of the book, The Proper Nanny + The Holy Mother

Is Ace your real brother or is he boring... It feels like a pity that you want to save him.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

You save a hammer, you save it, you have so much time to spare

It's very beautiful. Everyone comes to see it.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see