Ninja's Armed Experience

The awkward love plot has begun again. What I want to read is a passionate martial arts novel, full of erotic love, ah, the passionate kind, not a romance novel! Even if you really want to write. . . How about you solve the male protagonist's single problem first? 😅 I'm reading a novel and stuffing myself with dog food. It's Double Eleven.

Why did Ah Fei come out? Minato hasn't grown up yet, and Obito hasn't appeared yet.

It's really beautiful ^_^ I like this style of book very much. Naruto fans prefer the character of Minato, but it would be more fun if the main character, Asuma, who leads the team, was written to be more funny.

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I really want to invest in you, but... Can you guarantee at least one update a week ಥ_ಥ

It took five years to write the 830,000-word Fairy Tail masterpiece. I would like to ask you, the author, if this book has the potential to surpass the previous one?

I waited for half a year and then finished 🤫. How to read this 5,000-word book?

Regarding the ideals of the protagonist, I think I can understand that people will always yearn for these. But it's childish, and even hard to accept. There is no justice in the world, only positions. The protagonist's ideal is to help the weak. Does being weak have to be right, and does being strong have to be wrong?

I think the author is a student. He started writing as soon as the summer vacation and winter vacation came. Did you find out?

Good guy, I don't know when it was added to the bookshelf. I looked through it and found that it was only updated two months ago. That's awesome.

Why write the protagonist as a Madonna? If you write it like this, the protagonist should not be a ninja. Sand ninjas are not evil. Sand ninjas also have families. The protagonist should not kill people on the battlefield. The protagonist should be a scholar and lobby countries not to go to war and live in peace. The protagonist only needs to protect himself and his family. Don't always take the safety of others on yourself. Killing is killing. Don't always find a moral point for the protagonist.

I was persuaded to quit in the middle of the chapter. I really couldn't stand the pig's feet. Time travel has proven that I have survived a lifetime. Although I don't know if he has seen One Piece. But this super evil pen is also convinced. Even a guy like Luffy knew he couldn't beat him and had to run away, but Pig's Feet didn't know that. The question is whether it's a pig's trotter or a navy. I don't know what combat capabilities the navy has? The most disgusting thing is that it's not that he offended himself, but that he doesn't like the Tianlong people, and he's still nagging Akainu about where he is. Does it make sense? The loser's bark? The cry of the incompetent? The most difficult thing to write about the subject of rebirth is the principles and methods of dealing with pig's feet, because it is related to the maturity of the pig's feet. After experiencing life and death, and experiencing the bizarre, if he is still immature, he is really a mess. The author is asked to write about the various shortcomings of pig's feet in the opening chapter. He has no thought and only thinks about self-righteous justice. He has no brains. He doesn't even know how to escape even if he can't beat him. There are many ways to kill people, but if he can't even run away after killing someone, it can only be said that pig's feet have no brains.

The image described here is so right! Many people like Hinata and say that her eyes are beautiful and have a strange sense of beauty. Then every time I think of the golden retriever Xie Xun's white eyes, and when I think about the serious protrusion of the surrounding veins when using the white eyes, I feel bad. I seriously suspect that Naruto has always known that Hinata likes him, but he just doesn't dare to face it!

From January 21 to now, you won't be infected!

Brother, why did you have your pigeon cut again? It's only been a few days. It's better to hold on to it one day at a time 😭

You might as well not write any emotional drama if you write two. Aren't you saying that the Nara family is the original heroine? Anyway, I feel that it is very inconsistent for two women to accept marrying a man at the same time or sharing the same lover. It makes people feel that the temperament of the male protagonist has suddenly changed from a very simple and righteous navy with a poisonous mouth to a scumbag. But you have written it, and I hope you can handle it so that it is not so inconsistent.

I only read one chapter and there are too many questions. The author is a newbie. I suggest the author read more books and lay a solid foundation before writing a book. The first point is that the author writes a novel, and it is not a high-quality literary work, but a niche fan fiction. The weakened sense of substitution will reduce a large number of readers. Many authors write a second rebirth to enhance the reader's sense of substitution when writing this kind of plot. The second point is that the first chapter shows that the protagonist is the Virgin, and she is still the Virgin after life and death. Normally, this plot is used to transform. The Virgin is a super poisonous point. If you write normally, no one with a bit of common sense will touch this poisonous point. I didn't read the rest of the content either. The first chapter was about a high-intensity effort to persuade people to quit. The rest of the content really didn't have any sense of expectation. I believe there should be many people trying to persuade people to quit in the first chapter.