The True Lord's Great Dao

The writing is too piecemeal, every key point is included.

What is the use of the protagonist? He was defeated and fled, but he didn't hide his name. Telling his real name was too risky for his life. I don't know what the so-called meddling in other people's family affairs is, just because the protagonist has a big face? Without seeing any main line, the book collapsed and slipped away!

Speaking of luck novels, the author can consider Jing Keshou's Yi Ding, which I personally think is okay, and The Great Way of God, which has good content, and the human and immortal aspects of luck are also okay. Because the main god Dao likes to use China as a chicken, killing the chicken to scare the monkeys and so on. First he was asked to type and revise the content, then he was asked to force the ending, and finally the book was sealed directly. Not many people have this ability. . Master Gu seems to just modify the content and then seal the book. The starting point is violent and lustful and likes to show off too much. You can look at the top 100 and analyze it. What do readers like to read? It is recommended to open a new author account. The results of three books of this account are not satisfactory, and it will be difficult to open another one.

The plot collapsed at the beginning of Chapter 8 and I didn't understand what was going on.

😵😵😵 After reading more than twenty chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist is doing! After all, I was an expert in spirituality in my previous life. To transform my cultivation in this world, I didn't seek out the true method or modify the method in my previous life. As a result, I kept wandering leisurely in the mortal world without getting any benefits. 😅😅😅 Doing things that have nothing to do with your goals is also a weird thing.

The naming of counties in ancient times was too hasty and confusing. I would like to share the map of counties and counties in the Han Dynasty. I hope it will be useful

The main line is unclear, the purpose is unclear, the purpose of cultivation is unclear, and chaos

The power system is unclear, the main line is unclear, and it is chaos.

The writing is sparse, writing here and there, then suddenly the scene changes, and there is no main line.

What the hell, you didn't want to join the army at first, but you insisted on joining the army, and then it was a matter of family affairs in the cottage. When you see there is a problem, shouldn't you make it clear and get out? Others don't believe you, so leaving as soon as possible is the right way. This protagonist is too indecisive, how can he cultivate the way?