Yun Yin Jingtian

See Chapter Seven. You said it was because of greed that you got into trouble. The girl gives you something and you can just walk away. Why are you running away with it? I saw so many people chasing after me. If you just throw it away and let people grab it, you will have a lot more chances to escape. Not thinking sharply at all

Where did the ancient sword I bought for my money go? Not even a single word?

There are too many adventures, and when you first enter the world of immortality, you are nosy, which is simply not suitable for survival.

The Five Holy Sons of Kunyun can build the foundation and destroy the golden elixir, which is a bit unbelievable! I hope that the protagonist and those evil demons will not kill enemies across levels at every turn. Do you think it's reasonable for a low-level monk to casually defeat someone who has worked so hard to break through to a great realm? It would be more reasonable if it were written that one can have a certain ability to protect oneself and escape in front of high-level monks!

Are there any books where the main character is sinister, selfish, and likes to kill enemies by sneak attacks?

Use less modern quantifiers, such as meter. Two meters high can be written as more than six or seven feet high.

After all, all immortals are equal. In real society, the gap between people is so big. No wonder the grades are not good.

Everyone is equal. Why are you cultivating immortality? If you don't cultivate immortality, are you not equal in your heart? This introduction is really poisonous to death. If you are a cultivator, you can become an immortal and be equal. I really believe it.

Introduction: Dissuade me, feel the feeling of the Virgin 😴😴😴

I have read Chapter 50 and would like to share my opinion. The author wanted to write a novel about cultivating immortality that is different from Xiaobai Shuangwen, but I felt that the poor performance was unfair. I read Chapter 50 for half a day today, and I feel that the author's literary talent is okay, but he was too deliberate in making the protagonist behave in an ordinary way at the beginning, and his skills were not special. Point, the resources are very scarce. Even if you get a few adventures, you won't get any great treasures. The key is that you don't even know how to give some nice names to the spiritual grass ore. Just summarize it with a few spiritual grasses. If you don't write a cool article, there is no need to treat all these resources that are necessary for cultivation and improvement as rubbish. A broken sword that looks like a golden finger has almost no sense of existence due to the author's deliberate play-and-play style. As the saying goes, toying with others is toying with oneself. No one left a message and few people collected these fifty chapters.

Did you say that news spread so fast in ancient times? He grabbed the token, ran away all night, spent a day and night on the road to another place, and then slept, and the whole world knew about it? The rogue came to see you the next day with his boss? You even informed the people in the original place that they were looking for someone to arrest you?

After reading dozens of chapters, it seems to be a casual and refreshing novel, but the writing style is not awkward and the story is not too bland. Can't stand it

The author writes very well, with the flavor of a fairy tale, rather than treating mortals as ants. Nowadays, the protagonists in many novels are robbed of their opportunity by powerful people, and they want to take revenge, but when it is their turn, they have to kill and silence them. Let's talk about the problem in real society. There are many people who don't follow martial ethics, but there are still many people who insist on their own principles. They may be ordinary, but how can people live without some pursuits?

Can Yu Ying only go to the Starry Sky Realm? I advise the author not to make the method of advancement to the realm too rigid. Compared with other novels about cultivating immortals, your method of conceiving a baby is extremely outrageous.

Everyone is equal. Why are you cultivating immortality? If you don't cultivate immortality, are you not equal in your heart? This introduction is really poisonous to death. If you are a cultivator, you can become an immortal and be equal. I really believe it.

This introduction is enough to persuade people to quit. In reality, it is impossible for everyone to be equal and return to the world of immortality. You are too imaginative.

To build the foundation, you have to seize the body to practice qi. Isn't this a disease?

Just your introduction, how many people can be persuaded to quit!

You should read the books written by great masters. The beginning of your book was okay at first, but the further you go, the worse it gets. The protagonist makes you look like a dick. Who can't beat him who keeps running? In the secret realm, two demon clans of the same realm cannot be killed. Then, the golden elixir is perfected and cannot even defeat the early stage of Yuanying. What the hell is this? Is this the protagonist? Is this a second degree? I succeeded in getting you to persuade me to quit.

It's as bland as water, with serious plagiarism and patchwork, and heavy traces of Wu Xian.