Start with a Small Broken Ship

Oh, another one died.

The writing is very nice, cheers for the author|˛˙꒳​˙)♡

Come on, I'm optimistic about you, and I will try to add more chapters every day. Do you need a monthly pass? Two recommendation tickets will be delivered on time every day. As long as you don't jump around and don't watch, I guarantee to subscribe and reward. There are too few stories without female protagonists nowadays, and there are even fewer good-looking novels without female protagonists.

The protagonist's personality is not very good. He smashed the family's treasure because he didn't like it. It felt a bit excessive. You said it was just to save his life. The protagonist doesn't want to save your murloc. Now you smashed the treasure just for the sake of one breath. The tribe can't go back. Fortunately, the treasure is gone. The way back is blocked by the protagonist. The heir of the race was kidnapped, enslaved and died. This racial hatred is basically unsolvable. Helen, the fish-man, easily believed what the protagonist said when they met for the first time. She foolishly stole her own treasures and destroyed them, betraying her own tribe. How did she know that the protagonist's side were all good people? She was immediately tricked into boarding the ship, and was actually sold to someone and even helped count the money. If there is a slave-catching spy on the protagonist's side, then she is nothing. She is just as silly and cute as the two fish-man princesses, but she has better luck. For the fishmen, the leader is not bad. He used to be stupid and didn't have any minions, and he could try to catch slaves with all his knowledge. Now he hates humans and at least he won't be deceived so easily. He also plays a role in suppressing slave traders. You can see that Helen is easy to catch as soon as he is deceived. The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that I don't like the protagonist's character.

It's very well written, why don't you update it?

The author writes very well, keep up the good work.

Here's a small suggestion: if the author wants to make some achievements, he should break out the chapters quickly first, at least to 100 chapters. Otherwise, it will only be over 20 chapters, which will make people uneasy to pay attention. If this is your first book, don't make the world view too big, otherwise it will be difficult to control and cannot be taken back, and don't make it too long. The most important thing is that you would rather have a bad ending than a eunuch. Insist on explaining everything completely, complete the book, and build a good reputation. Otherwise, people will think that your works are all from eunuchs and they will not dare to pursue them.

A very good book, but unfortunately there are too few.

My name is Zhou Hang 😰. Please support me. Ha ha

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It's a good start, I hope it will become a classic like Blood Boiled. Take your time, take your time, and do it slowly.

It's quite good-looking, with a very novel subject matter, the name Kunlun sounds nice, and the writing tone is comfortable and the translation is not obscure. However, since the protagonist is a ship, it is recommended not to have a female protagonist, otherwise it will feel too vulgar to become a human being, but it is okay to fall in love with another ship.

Your update speed is worrying.

Crying. The author is back. I burst into tears.

It's so beautiful. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

This book seems to be getting smaller and smaller. Why is this?

Emmm, dare I ask if there will be more updates?