The Ordinary Road of the Xiuzhen Family

I originally thought it was a work of fairy grass for cultivating immortals, but suddenly some spiritual light realm appeared... I wanted to vomit. Is it possible to die if you write about the Qi training period and the foundation building period? There is so much innovation now. Just follow Feng Fanren Zifu and write more new stories. If this path is wrong... You can vote.

The writing is good. It would be better to add some treasure hunting in secret realms and methods to increase spiritual awareness.

No matter how high the mountain is, you will feel safe if you have a home. The spring is not in the abyss, but the entrance is sweet. When he is free, he grows flowers and grass and sits in the Huangting Garden. When he is busy, he walks barefoot in the fields and stands on the edge of the ridge. Everyone is in sight of becoming an immortal and attaining enlightenment, and the cultivating family is exhausted. This is a fairy tale about family life. There is no intrigue within the family. The overall main line is that the family helps each other and makes progress together. The protagonist is a time traveler. Although he has a golden finger, it is definitely not big. After all, the rhythm is slow and steady. The protagonist is a spiritual planter who cultivates plants, leading his family to grow up step by step. Another feature of the novel is that after the protagonist's time travel, the family has not yet risen. It is a newly developed family, truly starting from scratch.

I feel that the overall plot is not very big and stays at a certain point. To put it bluntly, it is not that exciting. There are also some details in the early stage that I personally feel are not explained clearly and need to be improved.

Nowadays, few of them have actually read Huanzhu Louzhu's "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman" and a series of surrounding fairy tale novels. However, its influence on fairy tale works continues to this day, second only to famous works such as Journey to the West and Fengshen Yanyi. There are almost no fairy tale works that have not been affected.

I would like to make a suggestion and write about the family. Four types of people, old, young, middle-aged and young, are indispensable. There is a lot of sedimentation in old age, a lot of ups and downs, and little freshness, beauty and purity. The middle-aged and young people have hard work and can add emotional drama...

The most important thing to avoid in novels about cultivating immortals is to be flashy. The author should use less modern witticisms, and don't make fun of jokes, which may look awkward.

It's just a small thing, I hope the author will write better and better!

The opening summary: Chen Yuze is 75 years old, Chen Yongnuo is fifteen, Yong Pan is 20, Yong Jing is 9, Guang Huan is 8, Five years (15 years old): 1 year of spiritual enlightenment, 1 year of cultivation to Lingguang 1, 3 years of spiritual cultivation to Lingguang 3. He left Beijifang City at the age of 15 Opening chapter One year (16 years old): practicing at home. The trees are enlightened for half a year and moved to Yunluo Mountain for half a year (late spring). In the 5880th year of the Holy Yuan Dynasty, Yunluo Chen was founded (16 years old). Yong Jing (10 years old) and Guang Huan (9 years old) have just started practicing. Thank you for your luck. Two years (18 years old), cultivating tea leaves at home, etc., And returning to Beiqi at the age of 18 (excerpt from Chapter 37) 5886 Shengyuan Year (22 years old): I have been practicing for almost 12 years and reached the seventh level of spiritual light. Four years (26 years old): Baiyang Diagram builds the foundation. Sevenfold limit. In order to break through and return to the fairy city, he was attacked. Chen's father was dismissed. Half a year later, he took over as the mountain master and already had the ninth level of aura. Half a year later, I was preparing to participate in the Red Lotus Dharma Ceremony and quit tea soup. Guang Liang had his inspiration at the age of 9. Sheng Yuan 5892 (28 years old): Ling 9, Yong Jing 23 Ling 5, Guang Huan 21 Ling 4, Guang Ming 16 Ling 4, Yong Wang 37 Ling 3, Yong Peng 15 Ling 3, Guang Yin 13 Ling 2, Yong Pan 34 Ling 2, Xie Yun 30 Ling 1, Guang Liang 9 has not practiced. (Excerpt from Chapter 69) Back then, Yongnuo advanced to virtual form. Two years: Master two thunder techniques in 3 months. 2 Years flew by. After changing to the third level formation, the Five Elements Fruit has also matured. Guangyin is 16 years old (Excerpt from Chapter 90) Three years: Obtain the seal blank, engrave a prohibition, and the first refinement lasts for about 3 years. It took 2 years to cultivate Lingcha trees and nearly 3 years to build the foundation of Yongjing. Zhen Qinglin and Lei Yin depict the second prohibition. Two years: The second refining, thunder seal refining, practicing the integration of man and sword (excerpt from Chapter 114), practicing with Zhen Qinglin and others in clear water. Guang Yin disappeared when he returned, and when he came to the Immortal Mansion in the village outside the mountain, he was almost taken away from his body and learned the skills. Yong Jing advanced to virtual form. Open the secret eye and mysterious thunder. One year: Half a year to prepare for the establishment of the school. During this period, the third prohibition was carved on Zhen Qinglin's Taomu Sword. Half a year later, the transformation of the technique was completed. Year 5900 of the Holy Yuan Dynasty (36 years old): Participated in the Baiyang Secret Realm and the Baiyang Grand Meeting. Refining the Immortal Mansion Town Monument, killing ferocious beasts in Feiyun Ridge and discovering the bloodthirsty orb. One year (): Guangliang returned home in virtual form after 10 years, consolidated his realm in 2 months, and broke through the middle stage of virtual form in half a month. Five years (): 2 years to complete the three stages of condensing evil, condensing the Ten Thousand Transformations of Thunder Evil Dao body, basically reaching the mid-term peak, half a year to refine the second-level fire date, and refining the spiritual fruit for four months to reach the peak of mana. After advancing to the later stage, he portrayed Lei Jin for the third time, became familiar with Ruyi Golden Hook for half a year, and spent more than half a year on a trip to Dinghu to kill the White Bone Lady. 1 Year to prepare to participate in the Song Family Fruit Competition.

The reward is 1,000, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I passed by and found this book to be interesting. I'll give it a read and hope to read more. I'll keep voting for it in the future.

Finished reading! Collect! Invest! Add finesse😡

The author writes well, keep it up. It has a lot of feeling, unlike other novels which are just empty stories. There is no core idea at all. It's all routine after routine, and it doesn't look good at all.

I have been cultivating for many years before I made the golden elixir. You insist on saying that it is a stone. There is also a 16-year-old girl in the obstetrics and gynecology department downstairs who has become a Yuanying at a young age. You insist on removing him. The most outrageous thing is the great gods in the morgue who are in the out-of-body period. You actually want to burn their skins! There are two great masters in the combined stage in the hotel next door, but you insist on saying that they are prostitutes. Our world of immortality is really depleted of talent.

I suggest you continue this book~~~ This book is actually really good

This book is well written. The only regret is that the author did not write according to the level of strength that readers are familiar with. He wanted to write his own settings. It was too difficult to write this way and it was also troublesome for readers to read. Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul. Everyone is used to this kind of stratification of strength.

Cultivation written in the book requires resources. After reading more than 60 chapters, there is no family offering sacrifices to the sect. I really don't know how these disciples of the sect are so talented and evil. They can make money while cultivating and still maintain the first place in strength in the region.

How can I keep raising my grass and then it will disappear?😰

It is best for my sister to break through the failed golden elixir to eliminate the body and death, and change the protagonist's thinking from that of a mortal. Cultivation as an immortal is to fight against the pain and loneliness of the death of a loved one.

What the hell are the aura stage and the virtual stage! ? It's inexplicable, and the more I look at it, the more annoyed I get! If you have to create a set of grading classifications that you only understand, your level will be highlighted! ? The qi training period and the foundation building period are easy to understand at a glance and everyone is used to it. Isn't it great! ?

Is the author very good? He created his own level of immortality, which made him not accustomed to reading. You are not a master, so why would you make yourself uncomfortable? There are so many books in Qidian. If you don't feel good about reading them, you should abandon them immediately.

The family-run novel is as if they have discussed it and finish it as soon as they finish it😄

Please read less novels written by eunuchs like this in the future!

Twelve years later, I am still a weakling, and I don't know how long my life span is in this world. The fighting is not very exciting, it's all about jumping. There's nothing toxic about it, it's actually pretty good. But in a weak family, a family that was destroyed just by the big boss's breath, why would anyone plot against it? All kinds of forces are involved. The protagonist's family is really weak. They are all Qi refiners, and the protagonist is only at the ninth level of Qi refinement. I feel like no matter how I explain it later, it's not satisfactory. The only thing I can think of is that I want to drive away the protagonist's family. Otherwise, I just want to be the main character's backer. I can't think of any other reason. But if you want to drive away the protagonist's family, it will be over if they are destroyed. If you want to have a backer, anyone with an IQ knows what's going on. I don't know how the author will be happy, I'm looking forward to it

Friends who are interested can set up the characters here, and I will fish some out from here from time to time. No matter how rich the land is and how bold the people are, as long as you dare to write, then I will praise you for your courage.

Well, the genre of Cultivation Family and sects has suddenly become popular recently. I have also read several books of the same type such as Immortal Dao, Taiqiu, and The Rise of the Cultivation Family. I feel that the difference between this book and others is that this book has zero foundation and strives for a family. The other books have a certain foundation. (Every book has a certain foundation. There is a master of foundation building) 😥😥 This book gave me a new feeling, just like when I saw the book on Immortal Dao, I felt that if the author continued to work hard, he might surpass Immortal Dao. (I personally like this type of slowly struggling from scratch) Come on, author! ! ! ✊✊

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This book is more comfortable to read than recent similar books, and there is nothing wrong with the writing. Already invested and in the process of being fattened.

The author's writing is smooth and the story is wonderful!🙂🙂

An interesting book, starting from scratch in a cultivating family, building up a family bit by bit, giving readers a sense of belonging to the family.