Exploring the Myriad Worlds, Starting in the Wilderness

I have written one movie after another, but I have not touched a single one of them. The second world, Operation Mekong, the cave, and so much poisonous gold, I have not touched a single one. In the third world, Xiuchundao, you, as the adopted son of Doctor Zhang, didn't know that Ding Xiu would kill people and were not prepared at all, and that bullshit mission to kill Wei Zhongxian. I watched it just following the plot of a movie, with no priority at all. What's the benefit of being with Zhang Yingqiang? You will lose some money at most in the mission world. It's not even muddy for being able to travel through the world. Without world expansion, I just watched the plot introduction of Xiuchundao again.

The previous issue was written so well, but how come there is no sense of immersion in the world of Ming Dynasty

Compared to other novels of the same type, I feel it's okay. It's not amazing at the beginning but it's quite satisfactory. There are only two plots and there are so many worlds that I can't tell. It's a good idea to explore the depth of the plot. Operation Mekong is relatively superficial. I hope that the world will be explored more deeply in the future.

The first task of Kuaiwen is to complete the task, and the second task is to gain benefits. I was speechless as I watched the pitiful little pig trotters received from each world. Especially in the world of the Mekong River, where hair is lost but not caught, the author chooses the worst plot in order to take care of the plot, a pistol or rubber bullets? You are really good, you can save some even if the loot you captured is as many as pistols and bullets, right? The plot of "Xiu Chun Dao" is like making pig's feet with soy sauce. You sleepwalk all day without knowing what you are doing. Although the cultivation methods have been given, why don't you still look for new ones? And you, a general commander, don't even describe a few of your subordinates? A small flag has three subordinates, but a pig's foot doesn't even have a single flag feather. There is no task for me to do nothing all day long, and my writing is not organized at all! If Xiuchundao can still have a sense of immersion in this way, I can only admire this book friend who reads! Moro was so speechless that I had nothing to say. Even if a killer started to challenge the martial arts gym, it was so idle that people were speechless. I don't know what the author wants to do. On the one hand, I am afraid that the author will give up any good equipment if he grows too fast, and on the other hand, he is worried that the pig's feet are not powerful enough, so he tries to find room for improvement for the pig's feet. Your plot for the sake of plot is not coherent at all. Author, are you not afraid of internal bleeding?

A free skill in a world, how to write it later? In the later stage, the previous ones are completely useless, and they are all in vain. There is no active learning. I regard myself as a game character. It seems very tangled. I have read dozens of chapters. I still have no clear image of the protagonist and no highlights.

He is obviously a prophet who knows the plot well, but his performance is unsatisfactory, especially Mekong River, which does not reflect the value of the protagonist at all.

When the system asks the protagonist to kill his own relatives, should he kill them or not? Abandon books.

Really, what was written before is so good, but how come it is so messed up after entering the Ming Dynasty?

I don't know why, but the writing feels so dry that I have no desire to read any more

Gods should be a world of high demons, and Harry Potter should be a world of low demons! In particular, it feels very unnatural to have pig's feet with Chinese names in foreign countries. Of course, it would be fine if it was modern, but the gods are hehe.