Konoha's Thief's Hand

There is a problem with the timeline. Chiyo should still be a girl during the Second Ninja War. Hiruzen Sarutobi and Danzo followed the Second Hokage at that time. They were all young men. Chiyo even had a grandson by this time? Could it be that she was a character from the same time period as the first and second generations? Then who is her master? It can't be older than the first generation. If not, then it is the son of Chiyo and her master. Then Chiyo is the longest-lived human being in Naruto, the anime. Different logical explanations and confusing timeline. The book has been withdrawn. It is not bad for fake Naruto fans.

After looking at the cover and the title of the book, I thought I was using jio to steal things, but I was disappointed that I still used my hands. Judging from the plot, at the beginning of World War II, Goldfinger had great limitations, so I probably wanted to make it longer. In terms of characters, there are a large number of unfamiliar supporting characters, which is a letdown. People like me never look at memories! ! ! After all, I wasn't that old when I watched it, so I just thought the fighting was cool and that was it. Like the supporting characters in your book, even if they appear in the original work and have read it, they don't even want to remember their names. Even if I want to watch it again, I don't have time to watch it. Between the pressure of study and the pressure of life, wouldn't it be nice to play a game comfortably? ! There are also some people like Yun who have never watched Naruto at all. They just watched some clips, understood some of the plot and the protagonist group, and then ran to read the novel. There are no characters they are familiar with, so they ran away after just two glances! There are also old readers who pulled me into the trap before. The brothers and sisters who watched with me were under pressure from all aspects. Some were still chasing bloggers, while some gave up and only watched some new episodes. Even for memories, I just watched the clips on Station B, recalling the memories brought by Naruto, and not many read the novels. As a newbie, do you still expect them to come over and read novels? ? ? I watch short videos every day and forget to look back at the old and new ones. Today's fan fiction readers basically spend their time reading novels, which are a bit literary and a bit nerdy. But the acceptance rate is very high, and both the magically modified plot and original characters are acceptable. There are really very few people writing like you now. Two or three years ago, I should have been able to survive a handful of times, but times have changed. Sir! ! ! I really can't stand this kind of book now. Come on, see you in the next book.

The battle plot is simply more dragging than the anime,,,

The writing is good, but the update is a bit slow. After a quick glance, I saw that the author has three books in progress and is being updated.

That means Goku in a certain time and space is dead... How would the plot unfold without Dragon Balls...

Like others said, it's more mediocre than mediocre. It's not a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless 🤫. It's really boring and not exciting to watch. Love, and a little bit poisonous The author actually let the protagonist join the root, and also let Danzo plant the curse seal. I really don't know if the author made a mistake, and actually let the protagonist join the root. If you want the Otsutsuki bloodline to make friends with Orochimaru, why not do more missions with Orochimaru (actually one or two times is enough), and talk to Orochimaru more about technology and biology during the mission. Even if you don't know everything, you still don't know how to brag! After gaining his trust (or appreciation), you can become a disciple, or ask to follow him, okay? Why go to Gen 😤 And now that you know about the Dragon Vein, and Danzo wants to be the protagonist, why not just find a mission to leave the village and defect, why would you leave your life to others? Do you still think that Danzo is a good person and will not kill the protagonist, are you 🐷, or do you think of us readers as 🐷? I jumped to read it. The content was so bland that I almost fell asleep

After reading ten chapters, ten chapters were boring and boring, and I couldn't see any bright spots.

I wrote dozens of pictures about an encounter. It doesn't matter if you are crazy about it. In the past three days of fishing and two days of posting on the Internet, I have forgotten what I wrote before.

Author, please don't read this Long Kunlun's comments. What he suggested is poisonous and his writing is totally deceptive. Write it as you should and don't add martial arts stuff.

It's well written, but I can't stand it. I'd say it's not watery. The description, plot, and details are all quite interesting, and the creativity is pretty good, but it just gives people a dragging feeling, but it's quite reasonable. It's a different kind of water, not water in the traditional sense, so it's very contradictory and uncomfortable.

The rest is easy to say: I decided to give up after joining Gengen. As long as you are a normal person, you will agree to others putting a curse mark on you. . . .

A good idea makes you write badly, but a good hand of cards makes you play poorly, and you deserve to be thrown into the street.

The plot is dragging, and the stolen items are all rubbish. I can't watch them anymore.

Cough... Well... I've only read a few dozen chapters now, so I won't talk about it later. It's mainly because you're being too messy, right? It's really funny that Substitution Jutsu is written as Space Ninjutsu...

The book is okay but a little slow to pick up. In my opinion, the biggest highlight of this book is that the protagonist behaves a bit heroically, being ruthless and hypocritical enough to sacrifice others for himself. That's it. The writing is okay, but it's not very comfortable to read.

The dragon Kunlun in the comment area really sucks.

It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing, but there is really no sense of immersion, no sense of satisfaction, and no sadness. I only see constant fighting, no practice, and constant lottery drawings.

The plug-in is still very powerful, but the author just suppresses the protagonist.

From my years of experience reading Naruto novels, I suggest that the protagonist defectes.

The writing is very good, but the text does not have the flavor of Naruto. Instead, it has a strong flavor of fantasy and makes it very dramatic.

Either during a fight or on the way to a fight. If it's fantasy, that's fine, but... Emmmmm

I have read more than 400 chapters and I think they are quite interesting. Suddenly I realized that not many people are reading them.

It's too uncomfortable. Since you don't want to join the root, why not use the Death Note function? I've read over 200 of them, and I really can't stand them anymore.

The protagonist in the book must not be someone who often surfs the Internet. Look at which of the current netizens can't do it in a cool way. If you give it a little power, it will take off. What's more, with such a powerful cheat, the imagination of netizens will definitely fly to the sky.

The writing is not bad. I didn't watch it for the first time. I accidentally clicked on it recently and thought it was good, but after about 500 chapters, I put it down again. I feel like the plot collapses later on and I rely on the writing to hold it up.

This protagonist is basically dehumanized

Death Note, use it on the Pot King quickly to save yourself from looking disgusting.

The protagonist has been practicing swordsmanship, so why not pick up a book of swordsmanship... Are there not enough systems of powerful swordsmanship in Chinese martial arts? After practicing the Heart Sword, all illusions will be useless. When the time comes, martial arts intuition cannot be shielded by illusions or the like.

That teammate named Kurono is so disgusting. He tricked someone and survived the ninja war. Then the pace was too slow. In the end, the protagonist joined the root and abandoned the book after being cursed.

I would like to ask when the protagonist will be able to get rid of the seal at the root?