A Journey Through the World Starting from the Wilderness

I have written one movie after another, but I have not touched a single one of them. The second world, Operation Mekong, the cave, and so much poisonous gold, I have not touched a single one. In the third world, Xiuchundao, you, as the adopted son of Doctor Zhang, didn't know that Ding Xiu would kill people and were not prepared at all, and that bullshit mission to kill Wei Zhongxian. I watched it just following the plot of a movie, with no priority at all. What's the benefit of being with Zhang Yingqiang? You will lose some money at most in the mission world. It's not even muddy for being able to travel through the world. Without world expansion, I just watched the plot introduction of Xiuchundao again.

The previous issue was written so well, but how come there is no sense of immersion in the world of Ming Dynasty

Compared to other novels of the same type, I feel it's okay. It's not amazing at the beginning but it's quite satisfactory. There are only two plots and there are so many worlds that I can't tell. It's a good idea to explore the depth of the plot. Operation Mekong is relatively superficial. I hope that the world will be explored more deeply in the future.

The first task of Kuaiwen is to complete the task, and the second task is to gain benefits. I was speechless as I watched the pitiful little pig trotters received from each world. Especially in the world of the Mekong River, where hair is lost but not caught, the author chooses the worst plot in order to take care of the plot, a pistol or rubber bullets? You are really good, you can save some even if the loot you captured is as many as pistols and bullets, right? The plot of "Xiu Chun Dao" is like making pig's feet with soy sauce. You sleepwalk all day without knowing what you are doing. Although the cultivation methods have been given, why don't you still look for new ones? And you, a general commander, don't even describe a few of your subordinates? A small flag has three subordinates, but a pig's foot doesn't even have a single flag feather. There is no task for me to do nothing all day long, and my writing is not organized at all! If Xiuchundao can still have a sense of immersion in this way, I can only admire this book friend who reads! Moro was so speechless that I had nothing to say. Even if a killer started to challenge the martial arts gym, it was so idle that people were speechless. I don't know what the author wants to do. On the one hand, I am afraid that the author will give up any good equipment if he grows too fast, and on the other hand, he is worried that the pig's feet are not powerful enough, so he tries to find room for improvement for the pig's feet. Your plot for the sake of plot is not coherent at all. Author, are you not afraid of internal bleeding?

A free skill in a world, how to write it later? In the later stage, the previous ones are completely useless, and they are all in vain. There is no active learning. I regard myself as a game character. It seems very tangled. I have read dozens of chapters. I still have no clear image of the protagonist and no highlights.

Really, what was written before is so good, but how come it is so messed up after entering the Ming Dynasty?

He is obviously a prophet who knows the plot well, but his performance is unsatisfactory, especially Mekong River, which does not reflect the value of the protagonist at all.

When the system asks the protagonist to kill his own relatives, should he kill them or not? Abandon books.

After entering Jinyiwei, he was persuaded to retreat and his IQ was lowered.

I don't know why, but the writing feels so dry that I have no desire to read any more

Gods should be a world of high demons, and Harry Potter should be a world of low demons! In particular, it feels very unnatural to have pig's feet with Chinese names in foreign countries. Of course, it would be fine if it was modern, but the gods are hehe.

This is the first author I have seen who weakens the power of weapons

I can't stand it in both chapters, it's too ink-blank, I have to explain everything and my thoughts. Too much explanation is water.

You want to sell insurance after getting the system. What are you trying to do? If you don't know how to get weapons, you just accept them passively. You only realize that you need to get money after you come back from two missions and have no money.

I feel the same way. I feel that this chapter of Xiuchundao is not as good as the previous one.

It's all about movie and TV plots, nothing in reality, so what's the point?

The book is good! But the world I write about doesn't like it

I saw the protagonist going to kill Wei Zhongxian. I just gave up on it. Which civil servants do I hate more than Wei Zhongxian? Abandoned

The protagonist is a pervert who will do whatever it takes to gain profit, be careful if you don't like it

Copy the plot and still want to be popular? How can there be such a good thing?

The more you read, the more boring it becomes and a waste of money.

The author is so verbose that he has to write one thing several times. The reality is that he is either short of words or too talkative!

I seem to have seen this book a long time ago

No character map?

Why doesn't anyone watch it or see what movie you wrote about?

The world of Operation Mekong is poorly written, and it doesn't reflect the role of the backpack at all. The ending also ends with the sniper rifle shooting at a farther distance. It has to be so close, and there are too many psychological activities. It's annoying to watch.

It feels a bit tasteless, dry, and has no sense of involvement. Please comment and feed it.

I have read this chapter of Deadpool 2, and I feel that the previous chapter was okay. I can't understand the first few chapters of Deadpool 2. Isn't it said that I'm in Deadpool 2? Why is there a plot about Harry Potter and the Suicide Squad in it? I don't understand.

The first three copies were chosen very poorly

After spending two days with me, I finished reading it, not fully booked!