The Black-Winged Archduke

Velia is too old-fashioned, too poisonous, and has a sense of déjà vu in a bloody TV series. Farewell

Damn, it's both feet and hands. You might as well just set the protagonist as a human and be done with it. I'm really freaking out when I see it.

I thought it was good before the elf came out. Although it felt too weak as a dragon, it completely collapsed after the elf came out.

It's so poisonous that I can't finish Chapter 3. The most rubbish dragon can't even defeat an ordinary mouse.

Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

To be honest, if there really are humans, you, the protagonist, think you are a human, but other people don't think so. Even if some people recognize you, there will never be a shortage of people who want to peel off your skin and collect your blood, transform into other races, and always think about yourself as a human. I have to say that this is a poisonous point.

I wrote a side story related to the work, about Vilia's transformation process, to fill in the gaps.

Real! After the elf came out, I suddenly became very embarrassed ~ I hope the author can understand his thinking

Phew, this Shen Nong is back to test the poison. It is not very toxic and can be used as food for the time being. Let's first talk about the shortcomings: one is that the realm is not clearly explained. Let's not talk about whether it is the DND system. After all, the gold and silver levels do not appear in the book. 😅😅The author didn't say what the legend is above at all? Which is higher, epic or legendary? Not even mention it, let alone god level and above. Then there are no explanations for the skills. . . . . This is simply unbearable 🔨🔨🔨 I still don't understand what the protagonist's power of destruction is? ? ? Apart from the high damage, I can't see anything nb about it; apart from this, there are many skills that are not described. The next step is to stereotype the characters, which is a problem that many new writers have. I can't remember who those dragons are 😡😡😡. In the end, the plot was weak, with no sense of tension or progression. It was very dull, but it was better than the starting point and many authors could not ask for too much. That's pretty much it. It's not a big poison that won't kill anyone. You can take a look.

As soon as the female elf came out, her mood changed completely. She said goodbye.