Han Clan Monk

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Please update it quickly. At least 10 chapters will be released at first, so that people will be more interested in reading it! I am both investing and chasing investors. Your new book will at least resume 3 chapters a day after 200 chapters. Now it is only a few dozen chapters. Others will forget about you if they find it boring. Which great master didn't start with more than 100 chapters?

Let me give you a few suggestions: 1. The writing is quite detailed. I heard that when Wang Pang first wrote the human world, he had a special notebook to record various items, quantities, wealth, practice time, etc. In the mortal world, so that he can make the best use of everything. There is basically no waste in the book, and all settings and battles are logical. I hope the author can maintain it; 2. Opportunity is a resource, and there is no golden finger! This one is more difficult, which means there will be more dungeons and stories, so think carefully. This plan must not only be broad, but also detailed! In the Mortal Realm chapter, Han Li has the golden finger of a small bottle. Just planting grass is enough to support his quantitative change. Looking for opportunities is just to find the key point of qualitative change. This level of difficulty is lower than yours! 3. There are many dungeons and stories, but it is not boring, so it is very important to control the rhythm. That is, the intervals and quiet periods of dungeons and stories must be arranged well. One day is to digest and harvest, the second is to connect the previous and the next, and the third is to arrange and grow. The thread, also known as the gray thread of grass and snakes, foreshadows thousands of miles; 4. Don't be lazy. Everyone's golden period of creation has a time limit. In the moment, wonderful pens may bloom, and literary thoughts may flow, but it will not always be like this, so hurry up! The Mortal Immortal World chapter has been written into rubbish by Wang Pang, just look at the sentiment.

I came here after seeing an advertisement in the review section of another novel. This is a book that makes me feel a little surprised. I am looking forward to the story behind it. However, it is too thin and there is no meat to eat. Let's raise it until it is put on the shelves.

Some readers said that they had sex with the Yuanying monk right at the beginning, which was too fast. The author wants to say that this is the plot arrangement. It is possible to encounter any situation when cultivating immortals. If it is not the Qi Refining stage, it will only meet the Qi Refining stage. If it is not the Qi refining stage, it will only meet the Foundation building stage. Then arrange a golden elixir as the BOSS. That's killing monsters, leveling up, and brushing up bosses, which is different from what the author had in mind to cultivate immortality. The author wants to say that everyone is not tired of reading the upgrade article 🤭.

I don't have much to say, thank you all for supporting me and voting for me every day. I read them all. Thank you for your valuable opinions. This book has been slightly revised three times, all based on your opinions. I hope everyone will continue to support Youyu and point out any mistakes in the work. This book will be renamed "The Monk of the Han Clan" and "The Legend of Qingshan Xiu Xian" which one do you think is better.

Another death for the entire family! !

The writing is really good. I hope the characters can be upgraded and advanced in a more normal way, reflecting the difficulty of the path to immortality. After the golden elixir turns 100 years old, and the Nascent Soul reaches 200 years old, the story will be more exciting. Recommendation tickets are given

9 Votes support, I hope I can keep writing. Another little suggestion, the protagonist should not be too fond of a certain girl, or even choose a girl regardless of her basic skills. Every time she sees her, her heart will fluctuate. He's kind of like a loser and a pig. . . Personally, I don't think anything particularly memorable happened between them. And we should all hope to see a protagonist who is dedicated to the high road. Unless the woman is the heroine, the middle and later stages can be focused on development and description.

After reading it, I think it's okay, come on, author!

She shed her mortal body and turned into an immortal. From now on, the world is free from human beings. Hello everyone, I am asking Xianfan.

Mortals are teleported here, give me a thumbs up

Four recommendation votes have been cast. I advise the author not to care too much about the opinions of book reviews. Only by having independent thoughts can the character's character be revealed.

There is no feeling of being a fairy. Nowadays, cultivating immortals is more like cultivating demons. How can it look like a fairy? Don't focus on foundation, don't focus on character, just focus on accumulation of resources. How is it different from demonic cultivation? There is no such thing as waiting for obstacles, and working hard to move forward.

It's a good book. I receive recommendation votes every day and I'm starting to follow up on updates 😁

Maybe this is the fourth eunuch novel I've read...

I haven't been updating for a few days. Is this going to be cut off?

The novel is well written, but I am a reasonable person and feel that there is something wrong with the setting of the novel. The protagonist does not have a golden finger such as a chip, so how can he record so much knowledge and skills on jade slips without fear of misremembering, especially if the protagonist is not given enough time and mistakes will occur. It should be noted that a good memory is not as good as a bad writing. Especially for the elixir recipe, I worked hard to collect the materials, but when making the elixir, I misremembered the ingredients and steps, and the elixir failed.

Isn't China the land of China? China has always been known as the land of China in ancient China.

Update it quickly! Very nice! Three recommendation tickets a day are a must! Can new books be updated more than three times a day?

I sent out 10 red envelopes with a total amount of 500. You can grab what you want.