Starcraft Terran Technology

As an author, maybe my level is not high, but as a reader, a bookworm of more than 10 years should still be able to make some suggestions. I took a brief look at this book and found that the text is quite concise, but it is obvious that it has not adapted to the Internet style. I have probably discovered a few shortcomings, but this is entirely my personal opinion. First, the segments are too long. Long paragraphs can easily cause visual fatigue to readers and make them look tired. It is recommended to divide the text into smaller paragraphs to make reading more comfortable. Second, what the characters say cannot be directly connected to a long narrative. Generally, online literature starts the dialogue directly on a new line, so it is recommended to simply start a new line. Third, the opening adds a lot of elements that the audience is not familiar with (of course I am referring to non-StarCraft players), which makes ordinary readers confused. My suggestion is that it is best to briefly explain the things to be written one by one. For this reason, it does not matter if the plot is slowed down a little.           ，，， It is recommended to add a few more descriptions of doomsday scenes, and then use the scene descriptions to introduce the plot that will happen next. This will make it smooth and give people a good impression. Except for the above 4 points, this work is very well written. At least in terms of description, it is much better than Xiaobai. It can be seen that the author wants to write something. Besides collecting and fattening up, what else can I do? 🙂 Finally, I also wrote a novel, "Bringing My Daughter to the End of the World". If you are interested, you can read it.

Plant the flag Remind me when it reaches 1 million words or when it is finished. Thanks!

Finally, there is one of my kind. I really can't understand how disgusting bugs are, but there are a lot of people writing about bugs. The taste is so damn strong.

After staying there for ten years, I couldn't even build a base! ! ! The protagonist is also really useless! ! !

Human technology relies on studying protoss and bugs

Today is the last day, I don't know where to vote for the remaining two months, I'm so frustrated!

In fact, it's not that no one reads your book, it's just that your updates are there. A lot of people are doing it. In fact, I am doing it too. I came to check it out after seeing you haven't updated it for a few days, and then I saw what you said. How should I put it? This type of book belongs to a niche. If you can't keep up with the volume, many people will lose their patience. Basically, they wait until they are fattened and then slaughtered, and then slaughtered and then fed again. This is the cycle. In fact, although some other interstellar books are niche, many people still read them. If your quality is average, if your quantity is large, you can still attract some people. If your quality and quantity are not good, then fewer people will look at it. Of course, if your quality is very good but quantity is not good, there will be people chasing you. Let's just talk about me. I personally like StarCraft books and play StarCraft. It should be said that I like to play stand-alone games. I have played all the battles such as StarCraft, Red Alert, Rome, and Warcraft. I also play StarCraft 2 now, but I only play campaign cooperation or role-playing in the game lobby. I basically don't play 1v1 and the like. There are probably not many people like me, but there are quite a lot of people who play StarCraft in general. Some people who don't play StarCraft will also read base books. So, old man, hold on! As long as you keep updating, many people will definitely read it when the word count increases. In fact, many people will ignore your book after seeing the word count. After all, chasing new books is really tiring! I usually search for books with a filter setting of one million words and two million words or more. I believe there must be many people who share my hobby, so I say: Persevere! ! !

Medicine, medicine, medicine! Come on, author😊!

Will you die if you update twice? 😡 Hurry up!

Front row claws😄

I just wanted to vote for you and you gave me a preview of how to cut chicken? Oh, let me go, I can't do it anymore, I have a heart attack, please pay me 5 million words!

Actually, I have an idea. What would happen if the heroic spirits fight against the Zerg? Brother Zheng drives Afang Palace to fight the Zerg? 23333 It makes me laugh when I imagine this scene.

I received the short message this afternoon, friends who are confident, please do it 🤓 Waiting for the stars and the sea to set sail. It can be regarded as living up to the four investment brothers 😁😁

There has been no update for 6 days. Do you want to be a weekly updater?

Hurry up and put it on the shelves. I will leave 5 of my 7 monthly passes for you.

Friends, I have a question for you 😁😁 How did you find this book? I couldn't find my own book except for naming it 😥😥 I'm curious.