Star Wars: Silver Oath

The protagonist Sean, 17 years old, is the apprentice of the all-powerful Jedi Master Mostema. His qualifications are not that outstanding. His abilities lie in his meticulous observation and strong coping skills. He was taken out by his master to participate in the novice trial, and his task was to investigate the dark side under the aura of the "saint" Jamie Brason, the president of Bergamo in the outer ring of the galaxy. With the master's collected information and the strong cooperation of the planet's undercover agents, the protagonist sneaked into the presidential estate as a sous chef, poisoned the food, blamed the robot, and successfully escaped in the presidential car. But in order to save innocent people, he still exposed his identity as a Jedi Knight. From the beginning of the story, the highlights are still very obvious. First of all, there is the all-powerful Jedi Master, who hides in the background as an expert, guiding the protagonist to optimize the infiltration plan, and points out the shortcomings when escaping. In addition, he is a female character, and the sense of mystery is very strong. There is a sense of being behind the scenes. Secondly, each species has a distinct image and a wide variety of species. This is also one of the more interesting aspects of Star Wars besides lightsabers. From the very beginning, the book creates a group of very vivid alien characters, including an octopus-headed informant, a strange chef, and a tyrannical yet cautious president. The details are very vivid and very suitable for film and television adaptation. This is also the first time that Chinese writers have tried to derive their own national characteristics from the "Star Wars" system, combined with the characteristics of popular online novels, and strived to localize classic IP. Although the protagonist seems ordinary and his control of the Force is not at the top, his IQ and learning ability are really strong. He can quickly adapt to complex environments and make scientific responses. He is also very caring. "Love and peace" means so much. This is closely related to the degree to which His Majesty the King's personal humorous style of writing, his sarcastic and down-to-earth writing style, is closely related. Internet articles are very popular nowadays. In this article, we mainly enrich the human side of the almighty Jedi Master, including small frowns and other feminine gestures. After the emotions are rich, the characters will appear more three-dimensional. However, generally speaking, His Majesty the King is still able to control this kind of subject matter. As long as he holds steady and insists on completing the book, his results will be quite impressive.

#War##Star Wars# Let me talk about my personal views on the "multi-line narrative" of this book, and once again throw some light on it, hoping to elicit more good suggestions that are of substantial help. Starting from Chapter 73 "Nan Yujin", this book has gradually used multi-line narrative. The personal lines of Nan Wuyou and Li Yu have been laid out. This is an exploratory method and is also conducive to the completeness of the plot expression. I would like to suggest that the author here, when narrating a personal line, must learn from the POV (Point-of-View) technique used by Martin when creating "A Song of Ice and Fire". As described in Baidu: "Follow the thoughts and motivations of a specific character to feel the story that happened to him, and taste what he saw, heard, felt and remembered in this world, but you will not see the thoughts of other characters or things that happen outside this character's field of vision." In the Nan Wuyou line in Chapters 73 to 79 and the Li Yu line in Chapters 97 to 103, the two characters only use their own perspectives to express their psychological analysis of Nan Yujin from both pros and cons, which immediately makes Nan Yujin's position confusing and whets the reader's appetite, making everyone more motivated to read on. From this part of the content, I think the author's POV technique is handled well. On the contrary, in Chapter 47 "The Famous Paintings of the Galaxy", there is a paragraph describing the psychology of the villain Ning Tao's "being smart" (see screenshot 1). Written like this, readers will instantly feel the villain's incompetence, and it also eliminates the possibility that the villain will kill the Hongxing team later, killing the suspense of the plot's twists and turns, thus reducing readers' interest in reading. Therefore, when the author uses the visual narrative of a certain person or a team, he must try to avoid the psychological activities of the villain or third-party characters. Each character in the book has different academic knowledge and social experience. Understanding the surrounding world from their perspective can create a lot of reasonable suspense and leave a lot of room for subsequent creation (because if there are "contradictions" with the previous plot in subsequent creations, the cause of the "contradiction" can be attributed to the character's lack of cognition or too much subjectivity). But I also want to remind the author that if the POV technique is used without restraint, he may not be able to control the development of the plot in the end. How to grasp that degree is a test of the author's ability! May the Force be with you all! ! !

It feels like Lao Wang's "Star Wars" continues his usual writing style, which is to set up suspense. This writing method may be easy for domestic readers to accept, but for foreign readers, they may not like to use their brains so much. Lao Wang's characterization of the plot is more detailed, but this kind of writing method does not attract readers when used in Star Wars novels. The story of Star Wars is actually very simple, and it mainly provides visual enjoyment to the audience. Therefore, if the plot is too detailed, it can easily backfire. But for domestic online readers, this may be easier to accept. The sense of immersion in the early stages of the novel is not strong enough. Although it may be a foreshadowing for the subsequent plot, there are many Star Wars fans in China, and everyone has a different understanding of Star Wars, so readers have different priorities. Personally, I feel that the opening chapter is not attractive enough and may need to be strengthened. As the plot progresses, Lao Wang's advantages gradually become apparent, especially the appearance of the Silver Knights, which meets the tastes of many readers, and the novel begins to enter a good state. I hope you friends will like it.

Reflections after watching His Majesty the King's Silver Oath... Zeng You had the honor to watch His Majesty the King's masterpiece "Once Upon a Time on Spirit Sword Mountain". Currently, this book has been adapted into a series of IP peripherals such as animation, film and television dramas, and has been well received by countless fans of the book and moviegoers. I thought that His Majesty the King would be He followed the rules and continued to write hilarious anti-conventional novels. Unexpectedly, his first hand at "Star Wars" left people stunned. As a Chinese writer, His Majesty the King tried for the first time to derive his own unique online culture in the "Star Wars" system. With his courage and literary background, this book is definitely worth reading! As a foreign IP, "Star Wars" has built a solid fan circle in China with its super interstellar special effects and exciting storylines. His Majesty's Star Wars fan fiction has opened up new horizons for Star Wars in China. Fan groups are of great significance. After all, the number of people in China who have been exposed to online literature has reached 400 million. Even the third young master of the Tang family once said that Chinese online literature is already the fourth largest cultural phenomenon in the world after American Hollywood, Japanese animation and Korean TV dramas! And I was reading "Star Wars" After reading the prelude of "Silver Oath", I also felt that this book is different. Not to mention that many of the plots and details have been localized, allowing people to integrate into it more quickly. His Majesty the King's concise writing style and unique character style settings alone are amazing. It is eye-catching, and the extremely classic Dihua style is naturally indispensable. His Majesty is also good at complaining and being funny. Coupled with the very good plot and story, even a novice like me who has never been exposed to "Star Wars" watched it with gusto. It is really excellent! Finally, I have to sigh. His Majesty the King is worthy of being a great writer with a background in comedy writing. In this book, he has written the Dihualiu routines to perfection. Various new jokes emerge in an endless stream. Often the previous one is serious, but suddenly a sentence hits the punchline. Various psychological speculation masters teach face to face. Specifically, Why? Do you understand again? Do you know again? In addition, the meaning of Fudihualiu (Baidu Encyclopedia): Dihua of thought means that the thought begins to be profound. This meme comes from the animation OVERLOAD "The Immortal King". The protagonist is a person who has traveled through time. He relies on his own time advantage and often makes many judgments in seconds, but his ideas are too simple. And one of his subordinates named Demiurge likes to guess the master's intentions, and expresses the master's thoughts in a clear and logical manner, which is commendable. In fact, the protagonist doesn't think so much at all, so every time it comes to this moment, the barrage will gradually change his mind. That's all. How about the novel? The key is to experience it for yourself. Here I wish His Majesty the King's new book a great sale, and the more you write, the better!

#StarWars# #Wars# Book review of "Star Wars: Silver Oath" Let's throw some ideas into the discussion, hoping to elicit more good and substantively helpful suggestions. 1. The author can reduce the use of specific fantasy and colloquial words as appropriate, such as "phoenix chick", "Xuan Ming", "fuck", "young knight, please stay", etc. This will reduce the sense of violation. However, compared to the beginning of the book, it feels that His Majesty the King has deliberately avoided adding such words in the latest chapters, which should be a reflection. 2. The writing technique that attracts readers to be "down-to-earth" must be well-measured. Li Yu and the members of the Hongxing Team are all full of personality and have distinctive characteristics, especially their interaction with the male protagonist and their setting as lower-class people, which are of great practical significance. The characters' The integration of "suffering" experiences with the daily lives of us Chinese people is the real "core grounding", rather than the "surface grounding" of using various daily slangs in the first suggestion above. Therefore, I hope the author will make good use of the settings of these supporting characters to advance the plot. 3. Currently, many readers criticize the male protagonist for being too "holy" and don't like this "excessive justice" setting. I personally think the main reason is that the character creation of the male protagonist Sean is still a bit single compared to other supporting characters. As of the latest chapter 70, the setting of the male protagonist is that of a stupid young man who has been educated in the Jedi Creed since childhood, has no social experience, but has a strong sense of justice. His actions of naively wanting to save people without considering the actual situation and various seemingly righteous but childish behaviors are more likely to arouse the disgust of readers, so I suggest that in the subsequent plots , the male protagonist should reflect on his own dogmatism through practical actions, and have to make some decisions that seem to "violate the Jedi Creed", and even engage in some "evil" actions that "cost lives" in order to complete the mission. This will make the character fuller, and allow the male protagonist to be closer to the setting of the Red Apricot Team, and more realistic. Regarding this suggestion, I think the author has actually paved the way for various educational dialogues between Hongxing Squad, Li Yu and other supporting characters to the male protagonist. These "teaching" interactions are very realistic. I like it very much. I also believe that the male protagonist's growth experience will definitely be affected by the surrounding teammates, and he will do some "unimaginable" things. 4. Marshal Gilad Pellaeon, a big figure in the Star Wars circle, recently published three book reviews for "Star Wars: The Silver Oath" on station b. 99% Of the contents of the three articles are criticism. I have reservations about his absolute stance and the use of a lot of emotional words, but many of the professional suggestions are still worthy of the author's adoption, so I won't go into details here. 5. I have a little suggestion for readers: Internet articles are currently very popular in China. Disney's attempt to open the Chinese market with online articles is a brand new attempt. If it still uses the traditional Star Wars novel method to write this book, it may not be able to attract many new fans (it can be seen from the official Star Wars novels in the Qidian APP that the popularity is not high), so Disney's choice also makes sense. Except for people with ulterior motives, I believe that fans still hope that the Star Wars universe will become popular in China, so everyone should not conclude prematurely and think that Disney's choice is wrong. Be less emotional, less "cynical" and "violent abuse", more rational, and have more constructive opinions, so that the author can improve the shortcomings in the creative process and improve the book's success index. After all, if this book fails, it will be a big blow to the development of China's Star Wars circle, and it will be detrimental to everyone. May the Force be with you all! ! ! January 29, 2021

Hello everyone, I am Winter Nuanyang. What I bring to you today is the brand new planet and brand new Force power of the world's first "Star Wars: Silver Oath"! After reading online articles for so many years, this "Star Wars: Silver Oath" is the first novel that I have seen that localizes classic IP. I believe that as people born in the 1980s, we are no strangers to "Star Wars". This amazing movie and "Resident Evil" were both movies that we never got tired of watching back then. Compared with "Resident Evil", this "Star Wars" reflects the bloody spirit of defending the homeland and defending the territory. What I would like to recommend to you today is "Star Wars: Silver Oath", which was personally illustrated by His Majesty the King, our great starting point. This book is not only the author's first attempt, but also our country's first attempt to derive its own national characteristics from the "Star Wars" system. I believe that for "Star Wars" fans, this is an event of great significance, but it also makes everyone feel uneasy. The uneasiness must be because they are afraid that it is not what they want. After all, "Star Wars" has been deeply ingrained in everyone's minds. Actually, I was quite worried before watching it. After all, it takes some effort to depict that kind of passion. However, please rest assured that as a veteran master, everyone has read His Majesty the King's works and recognized his writing skills, especially his humorous writing style, which has made him a favorite after dinner. We won't go into too many details, but today we will take a look at this classic IP masterpiece in local dialect. Chapter 1 [Welcome to Bergamo] Interpretation: From the beginning, the person who appeared was not the protagonist, but the helm of the world. He was a very sacred figure in the eyes of the people, but beneath his skin was a soul that was so dark and terrifying that all the tragic tragedies in Bergamo happened because of him. There is definitely darkness but also light, and there are also those characters who rise up in anger. This is when heroes rise. Chapter 2 [Simple Plan] Interpretation: Since you want to know what kind of person the other party is, you must do everything you can to reveal it. However, a persona that no one has been able to expose for decades will certainly not be exposed easily. And this plan must be as meticulous as possible. In this chapter, "The Force" appears. This Force is the core concept of the "Star Wars" series. It is a supernatural and ubiquitous mysterious force that can be understood as a mysterious energy field. Its functions include strengthening human body functions, controlling the movement of objects, controlling human thoughts and even predicting the future. The Force has both light and dark sides. The Jedi who protect the peace of the Republic use the positive side of the Force for good, while the villain organization Sith uses the evil side of the Force. The same force will produce completely different results. Chapter 3 [Light Before Action] Interpretation: Sean, who possesses the Force, is a favorite favored by the goddess of fate. The Force, which can accommodate all things and is one of the three pillars of the Jedi, flows in his body. However, he is not the only one with the Force, but one among many. However, despite his poor talent, he was surrounded by kind people. He has always been favored. After designing the plan, it was sent to his master. After getting the master's reply, he felt that he had seen the dawn of victory. The structure of this book is rigorous, and the plot settings are interlocking, making people unable to help but fall in love with it and want to find out. Some people may feel that this feeling is not exciting enough or refreshing enough. In fact, you are not worried about this problem at all. As long as you can calm down and read it in one sitting, it will definitely not be a problem. Another thing is that because this book incorporates the Dihua style of writing, it makes people feel interesting. Sometimes, a serious scene suddenly changes after the supporting characters think about it. When I first read this book, I thought that His Majesty the King must not be able to write well. Unexpectedly, under the rigorous appearance, he still continued his humorous style. In short, this is a novel that you won't regret reading. The more you read it, the more exciting it becomes. As a star fan, come and experience this thrilling journey of the Force with me!

I am an old reader who has been reading online articles for many years. From the earliest novels about special forces traveling through other worlds, to the increasingly popular light novels, I have tried many novels. However, I am not an audience for the IP of Star Wars. I have never read any novels or movies. My understanding of Star Wars is limited to "Jedi + Lightsaber", and my understanding of the characters, plots or settings is almost zero. Originally, I wanted to look up information about Star Wars, but found that there were so many things that it made my head spin. So, I simply stopped reading it and looked at what this collaboration was like from the perspective of an ordinary online reader. After all, the current audience for the novel's release is still based on online readers. Many readers of this novel will not go out of their way to read the bulk information before reading the novel. I have read the novel, which has 11 chapters: more than 30,000 words. In these more than 30,000 words, the author His Majesty the King tells a simple story: the protagonist from the Jedi investigates the authoritarian ruler of a backward planet. In this simple little story, I saw many elements of online literature: for example, Dihua, which is very popular at this stage, uses the reverse brainstorming of the supporting characters to show the strength of the protagonist. At the same time, the protagonist is not aware of it, and the resulting contrast will make us (readers) feel inexplicably happy; There is also a hint of the invincible flow. Normally in non-invincible works, the protagonist challenges the enemy through golden fingers. However, here, the protagonist has no abilities but cannot use them. He needs to rely on other cumbersome but very clever methods to accurately attack the enemy. This is also a highlight of online articles. I don't know if any of you readers have seen His Majesty the King's other online works. His work style is very obvious, and the humor of complaining is always integrated into every one of his works. This "Star Wars: Silver Oath" is no exception. This writing style can greatly bring the connection between readers and authors, readers and works. Perhaps this is the reason why His Majesty the King was originally selected as the main writer of this cooperation. The emergence of the cross-border cooperation novel "Star Wars: Silver Oath" will, to a certain extent, attract a wave of traffic to the "Star Wars" IP and the field of online literature - it turns out that our online articles are no longer meaningless military school romance novels; it turns out that the IP universe of Star Wars is so charming! Finally, a short summary: This "Star Wars: Silver Oath" is the first localized creation with a foreign IP. This creation incorporates a large number of elements that young people like, which greatly promotes young people's understanding of foreign IPs; at the same time, this cooperation will also greatly eliminate the inherent impression of many non-Internet readers on Internet literature, which can be said to be a win-win situation. Of course, this is the first time to cooperate with foreign IP. Then, after the first time, there will definitely be a second and third cooperation, and in the future, we will lay a solid foundation for whether online articles are going overseas or consolidating their influence in China!

As a Disney Star Wars novel, this article is at least qualified in terms of ideological orientation. Just like "The Last Samurai", the samurai holding cold weapons walked towards the range of the musket (however, the samurai at that time was very fond of Ashina swordsmanship), using a movie to make the world think that the image of Japanese samurai and this country is to hold on to the old things and refuse to update itself. And this book, isn't that the case? Just imagine, if this book is translated into English and included in the official history, then the image of China will be defined in the eyes of foreigners like this. The image of "superstitious villages, mysterious places, and yesterday's battlefields" will be widely circulated. The protagonist represents Westerners to express their "universal values" and save the people who are trapped in dire straits. The bright and majestic shores from the West once again save the people and defend justice. And these are what foreigners see in this official Chinese Star Wars history, and what Disney wants them to think.

To be honest, Star Wars is outdated. Very few people know much about Star Wars. Many Star Wars fans are in their thirties and forties and are not in the mood to read novels. Now there is no publicity about Star Wars. The game a few years ago attracted a little attention. When I played that game, I skipped directly to the plot. The plot of Star Wars basically has no appeal to twenty-year-olds like us. It can only be said that the glory of the past has passed. The current Star Wars can only be used to sell feelings. It is a remnant of that era and has been abandoned by the market.

You have lost your spirituality. Starting from Sword and Spirit, you have been declining all the way. Things written by an author without spirituality are lifeless, the characters are like dead people, and the plot is like the reincarnation of grains.

Sure enough, the traffic is just right. The so-called protagonist is the reflection of the author, from Honkai Adventure and Galaxy's rebellion, to Inception's half-rebellion and half-saving the world, to the awkward ending and bitter character after the fire in Lingjian Mountain. The author has changed, just like the Ship of Theseus, the author is no longer the young man he was before. The next two Wang Jiu books have become grotesque, and the next one is even more "unbearable to read" and left without even seeing it on the shelf. I think the reason is that I have also changed, but the author is still using the same method of frying rice more than ten years ago, but because he is far away from the world and frying rice with fireworks, the ingredients actually have a fairy spirit. I don't like this heartless and awkward story, and the author also thinks I'm being arrogant, so naturally I hate him. Then why do I type this string of words to annoy people? Most of them really like the characters written by the author, so they have hoped that the author will make another fun-filled meal. But now that the author is a Michelin-starred chef, his works are all noble and stunning, and they are meant to be enjoyed by international friends. As for fried rice? After being away from Baoshi for a long time, only the fragrance remains.

How to put it, because the author needs to conform to a series of settings and backgrounds of previous Star Wars, and even in order to adapt it into an IP, he must create according to the original values ​​​​of the United States or Star Wars. In the United States, or in Western values, the growth of a hero requires a certain process, or it can be expressed as a specific experience in the novel. This is obviously not what the fifty-chapter team experience can achieve. In addition, as mentioned before, for the film and television adaptation and Lucas's requirements, the protagonist cannot be the Virgin, but it can never be a decisive and murderous hero. Such a person cannot be a Jedi, but can only be someone like Lord Sir Alex who has turned to the dark side. Therefore, this work cannot be judged by the standards of a cool novel, but should be judged more by the excessive links of Star Wars.

Yo, yo, why don't you eat this for ten years? Why is it so bad?

I dare not say anything about every one, but I can only say that the vast majority of Chinese people do not want to see their motherland being vilified in stories. When they see Qiankun Star, they will inevitably subconsciously substitute it for our country, and naturally they will not be able to stand it.

Star Wars fans don't buy it, and neither do ordinary readers. As a fan, the novel is not qualified as a web article. ——This book is not good

It's hard to stretch, why is this guy getting traffic again🤣

Star Wars is not scientific at all! It's an opera! Star Wars fans are not convinced and come to argue!

Ah, this is indeed not like Star Wars novels. The flavor of Star Wars is not strong. Besides, the Jedi are not so holy. I think they cut white soldiers instead of cutting melons and vegetables. By the way, did the protagonist break his hand?

Has anyone seen it? Is the plot the same as what Z said?

This book is okay, but personally, I don't particularly like the Jedi. They have grown up in that tall ivory white tower since childhood. Everything is taught by the best in the entire galaxy. They don't have to worry about food and drink. They only need light and kindness to hone their character. But they Never go, understand the people at the bottom of the real universe outside the ivory tower, struggling for survival, the dirty deals between politicians, whenever the Jedi go to a place, they will always use their noble personality to demand others, but they don't know their so-called noble people Grid, outside the ivory tower, how many ordinary people will be killed. After they arrive at a place, they solve the problem with their light and kind education. After the problem is solved, they leave again. They never pay attention to whether the situation will become better or worse after the problem is solved. Bad, they just think this thing is dark, so he should fight. The Jedi Order has degenerated. They no longer determine the quality of a person based on his behavior, but the tools a person uses to determine the quality of the person. That's why I hate the Jedi.

The author's writing is getting worse and worse, so let's write something marginally better!

You must be very happy to write such a thing at the expense of yourself, Lao Feng, in exchange for money from foreigners.

It seems that ten years is not enough to squander.

Um, it feels weird. As someone who spent a lot of money to buy all the Star Wars setting books, I really don't have a sense of immersion. What we want to watch is not a kid's puzzle game. What we want to watch is starship battles, lightsaber battles, force battles, and the entanglements of the Jedi Sith's tens of thousands of years of history. You must know that the attraction of Star Wars has never been the recognized third-rate plot, but the grand opera setting.

What I hope to see is Disney's sincerity in opening up China's Star Wars market, and I don't want to see you kneel and lick it! This is the first time I have commented on Silver Oath in such language, and I don't guarantee it will be the last.

How arrogant was Wang Wu in the book back then? Why did the author become a kneeling bastard eating foreigners' dog food many years later? The worst part is that it was still publicized a few years after the book was completed. . .

Z recently said that the plot and setting of Silver Oath were actually proposed by Disney itself. So the evaluation of us in the Star Wars fan circle back then was actually somewhat unfair? In this way, many places make sense. Why is the Qian Galaxy, a region based on China, controlled by family capital groups? Why is there such darkness as living sacrifices refining black and yellow blood? Why did Sean replace the ruling class in the end by relying on his bloodline and the so-called "Silver Pledge of Justice from Heaven" legend. Because all this was thought up by Americans.

You really embarrass the Chinese people!

Hahaha, come and see the rare fun

How should I put it? It was a little unexpected for him when I first found out, but after thinking about it later, it seemed that it was not so surprising, but now the cyber case record is left behind It's a pity. I am quite looking forward to his new book. I don't know if he has written it yet.