The Magician in the Comic World

I have been chasing it for a long time, but the rare American comic quality has not become popular. I would like to give you a little support and please continue to work hard 😁 In fact, there are many abilities on the mysterious side of magic. When it reaches the domain stage, it should be easy to twist the terrain and lock the space. Watch the movie How Master Yingli teaches people a lesson at the beginning is an example. Sometimes the laws are not complicated and exquisite, but simple and violent, which is difficult to resist. This is also in line with the principle of simplicity. In addition to instant conversion, fusion or simultaneous explosion of elements will be more terrifying ❤️

After reading part of it, I feel overall that the author's writing style is relatively poor, his language can be described as dry and weak, and there are serious idiom problems. It barely reaches the passing mark for writing a novel. The idea of ​​combining American comics and HP is good, but the author has not dealt with the details and trade-offs well. Some plots should be written in detail if they are to be written, and should be discarded if not written. The author seems to want to write a little bit of everything, but many things are not written clearly, let alone written in depth. A large number of plots are superficial and superficial, which is tasteless. (For example, the three years at Hogwarts, especially the last two years, it is better not to write) (The part about mutants is actually a small subplot about running over to see the situation and asking for the opinions of mutants. It can be explained clearly in one or two sentences. The result is from preparation to pretending after meeting. Pretending, and then pretending again when there was a conflict later, nm actually didn't tell me what he was here for until the end, and wrote a lot of verbosity, and the most amazing thing is that after he said it, it was almost done without any trouble. The most important thing is that the whole lot of verbosity to write about a small thing actually gave people the impression that nothing was written clearly. It feels really amazing, and the mutants who spent so much space have become soy sauce later. Apart from doing magic research with the protagonist, they basically have no sense of existence. The key point is that this research is supposed to be the main plot to improve the protagonist's strength, but it is still mentioned in one sentence, and he is obsessed with research. I lost track of time, so I researched it with nm) Emotional drama, anyway, I haven't seen any obvious emotional drama yet, and it seems like there should be none. The author seems not to be very good at emotional drama, and always tries his best to avoid emotional drama. The few plots that can barely be regarded as emotional dramas are brushed aside. In terms of characters, I can only say that it feels like all the characters in this book are the same person. This is also the most common problem for new writers. The characters are not distinct enough and the characters are highly homogeneous. There are also some problems in the setting of the novel. For example, the nature of spellcasting between Karma Taj and wizards in the Harry Potter world should be different, but the author obviously ignored this bug. Secondly, Kamaltaj will hardly interfere with the internal affairs of the earth (let alone actively intervene and influence the ministries of magic and open universities in various countries), and is not responsible for dealing with aliens invading the physical level (this is Asgard's job). Kamaltaj is the guardian of the dimension, guarding against invaders from other dimensions. Apparently the author of this bug also ignored it. The above are the disadvantages, let's talk about the advantages below. First of all, if you can manually ignore the poisonous points, the other parts (70% of the content) can still be read, and the entire book will not be highly poisonous like some books. If you just use it to kill time, this book can barely be regarded as a food article. It has all the basic cool points that a fan work should have. Secondly, supported by the large framework of the American comic system, the world view is quite clear. Then there are only a few fan works that combine Harry Potter and American comics. As for the general among the dwarves, some people say that this book is the best fusion of Harry Potter and American comics. I really can't say that it is wrong, because other HP novels that integrate American comics are so poisonous that they can't be read. So if you want to read a fan work that combines HP with American comics, it seems that you can only choose this one. (If this can be considered an advantage) At least the author of this book is a qualified new Internet writer. Although his level is not very good, at least what he writes can still be called Internet literature. Recommendation level: If you have read Marvel's three books with good reputation and HP's five books with good scores and still want to read fanfics from Marvel and HP, you can try reading this book. Other than that, not recommended.

I have only read less than 60 chapters, and I feel that this book is still readable. Of course, there are too many poisonous points and assumptions.         ，，HP，， Second, judging from the author's description of the later period, Marvel should be indispensable. So how to deal with the conflict between HP's wizard and Kama Taj's mystic? One is wand-casting, bloodline type, and the spells are life-oriented. The other is wand-less casting, talent type, close combat style, and the painting style is completely different. Third, as for Zha Kang, Zha Kang is a master of dark magic, and Satan and God can trick him if he is prepared. In this book, he is a complete loser. Since you are going to write a fan novel, don't deviate too much from the original work. It's okay to change or add plots, but changing the character is too much. Finally, the author, you said that the typo is because work requires shorthand, which is a habit, but writing a novel is different from work. If the author yourself does not take the novel seriously, how can you expect readers to agree with this book? In the end, sometimes I feel that in order to highlight the protagonist, the author has forcibly lowered the IQ of the supporting characters. The supporting characters make a fuss at every turn, which is very disgusting...

I have read more than 400 chapters so far. Let me briefly share my personal opinion: The overall feeling of this book is average, but the creativity is not bad. Friends who are short of books can read it. The description of the system in the first few chapters is a bit toxic. If you feel uncomfortable, you can skip here. Then there are a lot of typos in the front, but it gradually gets better. Another thing is that the author feels that some places are too detailed in the introduction, which feels like the word count is too low. Write less introduction and more plot or daily life, which will make people feel better.

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Even the "fairies" in Chinese culture and online novels can be distorted into that. What else can be said about the "magic" of Western culture?

A very good American comic fan novel. I think this is the best fan novel I have read in eight years. I hope this novel will continue to have such quality and further improvement.

This book is a bit poisonous. The timeline (at least up to Halloween) is quite messy, with a lot of typos... If the Harry Potter world was removed, it would be a good book.

Suddenly I realized that the timeline was wrong.

The magic in Harry Potter is really too weak compared to Marvel. Not only are there many restrictions on spell casting, but the power of magic is not that good. Compared with the Marvel world, the magic in the Harry Potter world is like the daily magic that children play, and Harry Potter itself is not interesting. The movie is just based on special effects. The plot is too childish. If you don't believe the author, go read the Harry Potter text novel. I have no idea what it is about. I hope the author will consider it.

There are three types of mages, those with blue bars but no CD, those with CD but no blue bars, and those with blue bars but also CD. Those with blue bars and no CD are those who can go all the way to the end. Belongs to the Nephalem stream. When it becomes stronger, you can place magic randomly like Gatling, as long as you have blue. The one with CD but no blue bar is similar to borrowing force, similar to Kama Taj flow. All kinds of spells and all kinds of mana are borrowed from God. But even if the fledgling Doctor Strange can reverse the time of an apple, he knows that there is almost no such thing as running out of magic power. There is also a type with a blue bar and a CD. This type is a mage in the traditional sense. The blue bar means that you can continue to grow, and the CD means that you are always using the taught spells. The mage profession in World of Warcraft is similar to this. There are several types of legal professions: mage, warlock (wizard), shaman, priest, summoner and war mage. A mage is a legal professional in the traditional sense and an atheist. The only thing he believes in is the truth. Warlock (Wizard), the title of Warlock is relatively general and broad. Any spellcasting mostly requires a cost, and any professional who pays a huge cost can be called a Warlock. The wizard literally means a mage who uses witchcraft. Witchcraft is more similar to casting spells with props. Compared to the situation where a mage will become the magic at the end of his practice, the practice of a wizard is even weirder. A wizard with high magic power must have spell-casting materials and magic props everywhere on his body. The most traditional witchcraft is more like that of witch doctors and shamans, such as grass-cutting, paper-man possession, and divine magic. Shaman is further improved on the basis of wizard and witch doctor, but shaman includes part of the work of sacrifice. Therefore, shamans in some places have belief in gods and undertake the work of offering sacrifices to spirits. Priest, a unique profession at God's own Temple of Light. Although he is a mage, he believes in the only god. To put it simply, he is a little fanboy who shepherds sheep for the gods. Summoner, a rather special profession. Aside from the mana itself, the summoner himself rarely has the ability to self-cast spells. Most of them are used to communicate with other worlds, sign contracts with creatures in other worlds, or become companions (prophet) with the stars. Battle Mage, a special mage system in a special period. He always strengthens himself with the magic he has cultivated, and likes and is good at connecting the magic he has learned with tight combat. It is even more common to pull out a sword, spear or machete during the battle, and charge forward with a maniacal laugh. Of course, there is finally a profession similar to the mage, with no CD and no blue bar (there is a blue bar, but unlimited). This most basic one is also at the multiverse level, or a supreme blue and white realm expert who has mastered at least two absolute characteristics.

American Manga? Harry Potter is a British novel. Thank you. Let's find out.

The running account throughout the article is tasteless to eat and a pity to discard. It can be read as a biography of a person. That's basically the case. So boring

Awkward translation accent, flat accounting, novice writing style, and crumbling character. I haven't seen this for a long time Poison, please enter with caution

Super novice writing style with lots of small mistakes. I persisted until chapter six and couldn't resist it.

Does the Sorcerer Supreme allow Hogwarts to exist? Hogwarts has magic items that affect the timeline. And it is often used

I don't feel like an adult. I travel to a child and have a childish mind. I know how dangerous the future will be, but I don't want to improve my physical fitness. I complain like a child. The power of Captain Marvel's blood and space gems is inexplicably wasted. I'm crazy! The writing is getting more and more childish

The protagonist of this novel is a type that I don't like very much: he deceives himself and tries his best to kill himself, for fear that he will not die. The overall plot problem is not big, but there are some loopholes in the details. The most important thing is that after chapter 200, the story becomes overwhelming, and there is no problem after skipping dozens of chapters and reading again. If you are not interested in reading, you can read it, but if you are interested in details, forget it.

The first 10 chapters have been poisoned to death 🥵🥵 I haven't encountered such white psychological descriptions and character dialogues for a long time...

Um, the protagonist is apprenticed to the Ancient One. This is nothing to say, but the Supreme Mage Ancient One doesn't care about human affairs. You, the protagonist, come up with whatever you think. After that, the Ancient One even went to the protagonist to ask the protagonist. The responsibility of the Ancient One is to prevent other latitude creatures from invading this latitude. To put it bluntly, as long as the earth does not explode, it is none of the Ancient One's business who takes power or rules. The Gu Yi you describe is like a person who has to take care of everything and have a hand in everything.

It's a bit toxic, to be honest, there are too many typos, and there are always some words missing in the sentences, which makes it uncomfortable to read! ! !

Very white Xiaobai Wen Shennong is dead

While the author was throwing out the setting, the protagonist was complaining. After reading three chapters, the protagonist complained for three whole chapters. I was convinced!

How come the good dean turned into a dear one inexplicably in the middle period? It feels messy in many places. The idea is good, but the skill is not enough. When I write it, it feels frizzy.

The author's writing style needs to be improved. It was originally based on the content of Harry Potter, but many settings are deviated from the original work and are completely made up by the author himself. There are also many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience.

Brother, what are you writing recently? ? ? Writing Harry Potter under the guise of Marvel... I can't stand this! ! Why can't I write Harry Potter anymore? In the past few days, I actually wrote about filming a movie in the world of Harry Potter! It's still Harry Potter, do you want me to curse? ! What the hell did you write? ! I wasted dozens of dollars! Your uncle's

I don't know what will happen next. The first ten chapters are a bit of a headache. The protagonist used the levitating spell once, which made the whole classroom think it was exaggerated. They even came to ask you. This is not too exaggerated. You just need to be talented or have practiced. Then you told your roommate that you were in the Room of Requirement? Is there any necessary connection between this? The academy just doesn't allow magic to be used in the corridors. You can use empty classrooms to practice magic in the lounge, bedroom, or outside the castle. Moreover, a levitating spell says you have a high talent and teaches them what's wrong. Inexplicably, it will lead to the Room of Requirement. You sleep next to your roommate all day long, and you have no time to go elsewhere. Moreover, the Room of Requirement only provides the room and props you want. A levitating spell can't just take a small thing and practice it anywhere. It's not a big problem, but it's a bit lax, forcing the Room of Requirement to be introduced. I originally wanted to complain about the order of the branch list, but since I said it was based on movies, I won't go into that.

But, but, but, so, so, so how much do you like but so? One page at least one but so. I listen to books and my blood pressure is high.

To be honest, this setting of increasing magic power at high consumption of magic power and mental power has never been discovered until the protagonist realizes that it is really unreasonable... Even if the setting is to join the training system, it is better than this setting. This setting is really stretched. Not to mention the protagonist's previous Voldemort period, let's just say that those ancient wizards were basically fighting non-stop. It is impossible not to discover this. There are many fanatical magic researchers. Even if you introduce the cultivation logic of immortality novels or fantasy novels, it would be good. For example, the immortality system absorbs the aura (elements) between heaven and earth and then compresses them, or the fantasy meditation or the construction of spell model warlock circuits are better than this setting...

You also need to be able to control your strength. If you want to read it, I suggest you read Chapter 206 first.