My Eldest Brother's Name Is Zhu Chongba

The author's writing style is very good, and he may become a god in one book. The characters in the book are delicately portrayed, and his conversation and thinking are in line with the dynasty at that time. It is a rare masterpiece of historical fiction.

There are too few and it's not satisfying to watch like this. I need to update more when they are all on the shelves. Don't criticize me. I've ordered everything.

Is the protagonist? He has shortcomings and advantages. Why is he so good to the common people? Is he a modern harmonious society? Everyone is equal. This idea is understandable. In my own understanding. For the benefit. Why do you say this? Just say one sentence. Benevolence and justice can kill people and save people. Just one sentence. Everyone loves the icing on the cake. I prefer to provide help when it is timely. In the ancient times when benevolence and justice were so important, you say that others treat you. The shortcoming is that you don't understand a sentence. The world is bustling for profit. The world is bustling for profit. In this world, you are a modern person. You don't even have any self-confidence. Remember that you are no worse than anyone else. What happened to Zhu Yuanzhang? What did you do wrong? Fighting for the world is difficult. But you still have to fight. Why? Man? Everyone wants to get drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman and wake up to dominate the world. I hope the author will read my comments.

My own little opinion, Lian'er shouldn't be written to death. The author yourself said that the writing is refreshing, and refreshing writing makes people feel happy to read it. I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw this. After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was not as good as it was at the beginning. I originally thought that it was written about the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty. 🤫

I reviewed the manuscript many times and the typos made me cringe. Since it is fiction and not fantasy, the details should be more realistic. We do not force you to become a critic, but if you are serious, you can attract more fans.

If you have any intention of fighting for hegemony, you will definitely kill Lao Zhu first. Also, give the book a different name!

I have basically read all the top 50 historical texts, and the results of this book will only get better and better. However, the part about cutting off the finger felt unnecessary. It might be better to change it to something else! Honestly, the author is not a trumpet!

A very good book. Highly recommended. To be honest, I am an old author. I have never read a pirated copy since I read the first chapter. I just read the original version because the author writes well. I have to read him. It is very good. Come on, author. I will always be your fan. Ergouzi🤭🤭🤭

How should I put it? You don't need to write well for all kinds of mistakes, but at least your writing must be smooth, right? Since the code words are coded better, it feels like you don't even look up the official history, you just rely on the TV series.

The book is good, but there are too many typos. I suggest the author slow down😅😅 and don't rush.

With good pacing, this book can become a god.

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's short and weak, but if you can have an explosion, it's easy for brothers to reward you.

What a great work, I will definitely support it once it is put on the shelves.

Well written and close to the Ming Dynasty feeling

Too little, isn't it the third update? , But there are far fewer typos

This book is quite nice. Is the author new? I feel like I have the talent to become a god😁😁

The story of the author, Zhu Chongba, has come to an end. If you write any more, you will be disgusting Zhu Yuanzhang. He is no longer the Hongwu Emperor, nor is he the Ming Taizu. You are writing that Zhu Chongba is a villain who does not know the general situation and does not know how to advance or retreat. He is no longer the legendary emperor who expelled the Tartars and restored China in our minds. And Zhu Wu, he is not representing him alone now. Stop getting entangled with Ma Xiuying like this. There is nothing wrong with imagining history, but don't go too far. Zhu Yuanzhang's personality charm is not the Zhu Chongba you wrote. Anyone who can see through Ming's novels is a Ming fan.

The author went to look at the founding emperors of the country for thousands of years. There was one emperor who was disabled. In the eyes of ancient literati, if he was disabled, he had no destiny. . .

Zhu Yuanzhang's success in ascending to the throne has been rare since ancient times. He sent Zheng He seven times to the West and his reputation has been passed down through the ages. However, he was addicted to carpentry work, which led to the Tumu Fortress Change and the loss of all the elites of the Ming Dynasty. However, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and the great achievements of Emperor Hongwu lasted for a long time!

It's a tragedy and disgusting thing. Before I read it, I thought it was not good to write about Miss Ma having an affair with the protagonist. But then you wrote it and I felt that the emotional relationship with the protagonist was quite good. Then a complicated thing was created, so that Miss Ma had no choice but to marry Zhu Yuanzhang. Is there something wrong with it?

I paid to read two chapters. I was so jealous that I killed Zhu Yuanzhang in the end. Ma Xiuying still married Zhu Yuanzhang. He still missed him and said he would never see her again. Fortunately, I didn't spend much money on reading. Don't say I was a prostitute. I bought two chapters. I peeled off the egg shell and smelled the smell I didn't like.

The main line of the story jumps back and forth. At the beginning, Zhu Yuanzhang was licked with a pole. After recognizing Lao Guo as his adoptive father, he was looked down upon by others and felt that he was good again. He wanted to be the emperor himself, and then the main line of the story repeated left and right. The author probably thought that writing it this way was very clever. Empress Ma was the same. Sometimes she was blushing and ambiguous, and sometimes she was someone else's sister-in-law. She just let go without fighting for it. How disgusting. Either the protagonist is self-reliant or assists Lao Zhu. Is it so difficult to clarify the main line of the story? This crappy book chose the most disgusting way of writing. It deserves to collapse at the end and then end Friends, as the title says, don't waste your time on this crappy book

First of all, I would like to thank the author for bringing a good book. Whether it's the writing, environment description, characterization, or plot content, it's all very good, and it's very enjoyable to read. Zhu Wu is changing, and Zhu Chongba is also changing. As a hero of the generation, I think it is impossible for Zhu Chongba to not have a little forbearance. Now that he can't defeat Zhu Wu, it's normal to use affection to trap Zhu Wu first. Cao Cao didn't treat Yuan Shao as his grandson before fighting the battle of Guandu. When fighting Yuan Shu, he used Yuan Shao's clear meaning. A young monk can be like Chen Ping, Jia Xu and others, and this is also the case at present. As for how Liu Bowen should deal with it, whether to follow Zhu Wu or Zhu Chongba is a question. If you follow Zhu Wu, Zhu Chongba basically has no advisers who can take action. If you follow Zhu Chongba, the plot will not be easy to solve. Whether it is Zhu Wu or Zhu Chongba, at present, their political vision and strategic positioning are basically the same. Liu Bowen is a point, Zhuge Liang divides three parts of the world, and Liu Bowen dominates the country. I hope Liu Bowen can handle it well. No matter who he is with, it is best to be evenly matched. At present, the military commander is half a catty and eight liang, Zhu is five and eight liang, and the logistics Zhu Wu is completely victorious. Zhu Chongba should marry Empress Ma, and Zhu Wu should marry Mr. Xie. A political marriage is not bad either. Mr. Xie is a woman, I can tell. In fact, when I saw the country Goryeo today, I was really afraid that the protagonist would soon defeat the country and dominate the world. If this is the case, then you can say that this is a YY novel. In addition, gunpowder and artillery shells should be written more leisurely. I remember reading a fictional novel before. In the middle period, a machine gun was built, and then the two sides were forced to fight. I was also drunk. If the sword and spear can defeat the machine gun, Zuo Zongtang, Zeng Guopan, these people are useless, and the Eight-Nation Allied Forces will not be able to enter Beijing. I hope the author can reduce the role of gunpowder, and reduce it further. It is best not to fight abroad. There are quite a lot of people to fight at home, such as Zhu Chongba, Chen Youliang, Liu Futong and Dayuan. The invention of gunpowder was in China. The cannons during the Kangxi period were already very advanced. There was a gap of nearly three hundred years between Zhu Chongba and Kangxi. Considering the productivity at that time, there was no Yuan Longping at that time 😁. Don't collapse later. Expect.

If you hang out with Zhu Yuanzhang, you will die after he establishes the country! !

The Yongle Grand Ceremony compiled by Zhu Yuanzhang is awesome. Even if he kills Yu Qian, he won't be able to vindicate it.

Write well and follow your outline. Your work is almost ready for July.

Ever since I saw the second attempt to kill Zhu Chongba, I gave up without being ruthless. Fighting for hegemony is not a child's play. If you only care about yourself and ignore the future and destiny of your subordinates, you will be finished sooner or later. Don't comment if you don't like it, personal opinion

Almost every historical text ends with oneself becoming the emperor and unifying the world with great power. I am really tired of reading it. I originally came here for the title of the book. But... It is difficult to agree with others. Brother, can't you write according to your own outline?

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the comments for a while, I clicked on all the more controversial comments. It's not about privacy being locked, it's about other author accounts. This comment section is quite deep.