The Ballad of Malin

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The author is very good at writing Western fantasy, and also likes to emphasize sacrifice and passion (the influence of the Warhammer series is clearly visible), but he always has an erratic stance, and his writing style is sometimes subjective and sometimes objective, sometimes speaking out for a certain class, sometimes building momentum for a humanistic stance, and the characters in his writing always reveal a refined individualism like a small capitalist. He denies agency while praising agency in an idealistic sense, which makes people look confused and not refreshing enough.

After reading Chapter 199, I really can't understand the author's thinking. Where did Ser Kate die? He discarded the biological armor, and then because of the armor's mind, he went berserk and killed people in a city. No matter how you look at it, this is a problem with the armor. Serket's mistake was that he shouldn't throw away such a high-level weapon at will. He should have completely destroyed it before throwing it away. But this is not a crime that leads to death, right? No matter how you think about the author, the biological armor is just a weapon, and all her thoughts are wishful thinking. How can a normal person fall in love with his own weapon? What the hell kind of plot is this? In order to show justice to the protagonist, you can't just talk nonsense?

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This book makes me feel very conflicted. I have read almost two hundred chapters, but I have never been able to get into the plot or characters. I feel there is something wrong with the author's writing skills. The plot and story are quite interesting. But I personally feel that there are big problems with the author's character description and story description. The characters written by the author have no souls. Whether it is the protagonist or the harem heroine, they just make people feel that there is such a person, but the feeling is very unclear and abstract. Especially the protagonist, his image fluctuates between the ages of 10 and 30 in my opinion. Half of the time, he looks like a naughty kid to me, and the other half of the time, he looks like a violent maniac. The protagonist's image makes people feel unfair, and the story relies on killing and beating, which makes me feel that the characters and the background are quite inconsistent. The biggest problem causing the characters to have no souls is the author's description skills. I have been reading online articles for almost eight years. A good book has a sense of immersion, whether it is a cool novel, a harem novel or something else. The most important thing is the sense of immersion, but this novel by the author has no sense of immersion. After watching more than half of it, I only gained some understanding of the world and understood what happened, but the story failed to sink in. This is my opinion on this novel. Welcome everyone to communicate in a friendly way.

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There is only one core problem. Forcibly elevating production relations against productivity will only follow the old path of the Soviet Union. Instead of pursuing everyone to become a god, but to unite behind closed doors, this pattern is indeed too small.

I feel like I collapsed in the middle and later stages of writing. . Too many additions to the system resulted in one having insufficient clarity of combat power and the other appearing disorganized. The sequence is considered weird by Cthulhu, but there is no need for you to forcefully add high technology. Are the basic settings of the other four vendors being eaten? (I remember they are emperors or something, Predators. Only this can prevent the evil god from invading to a certain extent. As a result, the protagonists in this world kill randomly. The evil god in this book feels a bit threatening in the early stage, but has no effect in the later stage.) In short, it is a bit refreshing, but what I wanted to write in the first place may have disappeared. In fact, the world view of the previous book was good, but the setting of advanced civilization and the like was forced into it, and it changed the taste, which is a pity.

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