Tablet Descent

Oh my God, what kind of book is this? It's so good! It's just that the paragraphs in each chapter are too long.

The descendants in this book are so much like players, and adventuring in a different dimension is like playing an online game. For example, the protagonist's reading progress is constant every hour in the book. It is really the same as practicing reading and literacy skills in martial arts games. In reality, reading and understanding related things are fast and slow. When you encounter a problem and you can't figure it out by yourself, you may have to ask others for help before you can continue reading. How can this be done in a book?

The writing is quite good, but the writing style is not very good, like a running account, and the text is a bit messy. Maybe the author is used to writing from the frontier, and writes wherever he thinks. Overall, it is more like the feather people. The setting is good, but the look and feel of the writing is not comfortable for readers.

Build a character building This building is used to help the author come up with characters.

Look how complicated this is! You also need to check out the settings specifically! There is no golden finger, the ordinary growth path of an alien. Nothing to feel.

Just discovered this book and finished reading the existing chapters. It feels like the protagonist's profession is the "political commissar", a position unique to our army. Once the military and political forces are in charge, they can also do ideological work for the soldiers and recruit prisoners to surrender. Please reply if you feel the same 🪖🪖🪖

It feels too messy, with too many systems, and the protagonist's plan is not clearly stated.

A good subject, but the author just pretends to be a eunuch. The three members of Yichun's family next door have become rich. Waste

This specialty of not believing in evil set by the author feels too powerful! It feels like a combination of high-level unyielding, high-level independence, disobedience to discipline, disregard for gods, etc. The super national blood is not just one person, it is the super blood of all Chinese people. Subordinates have no respect for Shangguan, who should belong to the city god system, and think about how to make trouble. Common people are not afraid of facing immortals, but wonder if they can do it a few times. Why do they not believe in evil if they have such a strong talent?

The subject matter is good, the author's writing style is also relatively good, and it is relatively comfortable to read, but there is no key point overall. The author wants to add too many things, and it is too messy to read. I don't know what I am writing at the end. If I focus on a few key points of the pig's feet, the effect will be much better.