Tablet Descent

My goodness, what book is this? It's so good! The only problem is that the paragraphs in each chapter are too long.

The adventurers in this book are so much like gamers; their adventures in other dimensions are like playing an online game. For example, the protagonist's reading progress is constant every hour, just like practicing reading and literacy skills in a martial arts game. In reality, even understanding things while reading varies in speed, and if you encounter a difficult problem, you might need to ask someone for help to continue reading. Where can you find something like this in a book?

It's well-written, but the writing style isn't great; it reads like a diary entry. Also, the text is a bit disorganized, perhaps because the author is used to writing freely, just writing whatever comes to mind. Overall, it's quite similar to the Feathered People; the concept is good, but the writing style doesn't provide a comfortable reading experience.

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This is too complicated! I need to go and check the setting! There's no cheat system, just a normal growth path for someone from another world. It doesn't really resonate with me.

I just discovered this book and finished reading the current chapters. It seems the protagonist's profession is unique to our army: "political commissar." He handles both military and political affairs, and can even do ideological work with soldiers and recruit prisoners. Anyone else feel the same? Reply here! 🪖🪖🪖

It feels too disorganized, with too many systems, and the protagonist's plans aren't clearly defined.

A great subject matter, but the author ruined it like an abandoned eunuch; meanwhile, the Yi family next door became rich. Waste

The author's creation of this "unyielding to evil" talent feels excessively powerful! It's like a super-nationalistic spirit fused with advanced indomitable will, advanced independence, disobedience to authority, disregard for deities, and so on. And it's not just one person; it's the super-nationalistic spirit possessed by all the people of China.

The subject matter is good, and the author's writing style is also quite good, making it a comfortable read. However, the overall theme lacks focus, and the author tries to add too much, making it too disorganized. Towards the end, it became unclear what the author was writing about. If the author had focused on a few key aspects of the main character, the effect would have been much better.