A Supernatural Dog from the Start

Qidian said that I said too much in this chapter and would not allow me to reply any more. I can only open a post here to express my gratitude to the brothers who helped me point out the mistakes. I have read all your comments one by one, and the mistakes will be corrected immediately. Finally, thank you for your support.

The Golden Alliance can't afford it, but the promised reward must still be given. The main problem with this book is actually that the author lacks some beatings from society.

If you see typos, please write a comment to correct them. I, Tang Aotian, will correct them as soon as I see them. If I don't make any other excuses, if I make mistakes, it's because I was careless.

The style of writing is so nostalgic, it reminds me of the Grimm's Fairy Tales I read in the sixth grade of elementary school. If you haven't rushed to the street after your salary is paid next month, I'll give you a reward 🤫

Author, please keep working hard, I will support you!

The war has finally begun, let's start with rewards!

After reading the public chapter, I thought the first part was pretty good, but the more I read the later part, the more I felt that the characters talked too much and the key points were not interesting. It felt confusing and awkward, and this was the main poisonous point in my opinion. The characterization is a little childish, but the problems are not bearable. There are also some problems with the rhythm of the article. It is obviously a hunter skill with two long-range skills and a trap, but the Wanxiang card has a different knife. Moreover, none of these skills were used when fighting Jason later. After upgrading, it did not give readers the feeling of becoming stronger. Considering that the author is still a newbie, this article is quite acceptable. I hope the author will write better and better.

The setting is the new setting now, get out of the flow. The protagonist is an old template from ten years ago. Today's readers don't like to see the protagonist of novels grow from childishness to maturity. They prefer that the protagonist tower over everyone in a mature manner from the beginning. The protagonists in this book have been given a time-travel template, but they are still so childish and funny. After more than a hundred chapters, there is no growth. In fact, it is very poisonous. Actually, the book is good, but the author, as a newcomer, handled it a bit inappropriately.

Now in the recommendation period, I hope everyone can vote for recommendation and give support and encouragement. Thank you for the newcomers.

I was really dumbfounded. Let's put aside the fact that the protagonist's family history is that he is a knight. The extraordinary skills that the protagonist possesses, passed down, and can be practiced for a long time, are of the flame type. The armor he cheated is armor, and the technique he learned is close combat. The protagonist himself likes to fight with fists and fists, and the weapon he got from the Wanxiang card is also a scimitar for close attack. Just talking about the multi-shooting talent, I want to ask you what do you think, you actually use a gun? ? ? What a strange idea it is for a hunter to use a gun to fight. In the extraordinary world you describe, unless extraordinary gunpowder appears, it is really difficult for me to understand how the power of a gun can kill those powerful creatures, relying on bullets? ? ?