The Laws of the Shadow Dragon

Having read the first five chapters, I'd like to offer a reminder to the author. The current criticism of system-based games is that the protagonist is led by the system, and not everyone likes a system that can talk. For example, the Deep Blue of Gun Kai simply and crudely avoids the "intelligent" system.

I apologize for not being able to satisfy everyone's tastes. But please, refrain from speaking eloquently; you're permanently barred from even starting.

Personally, I don't like this kind of start. It's not uncommon for dragons to have a bad start, even to the point of starvation. That's acceptable, after all, it's a young dragon. But being bullied by its own kind is something I can't accept, and I don't know why.

I actually don't really like having those two younger brothers, because I always feel like it diminishes the protagonist's extraordinary adventures. But they are also the highlight of the book.

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Hornrotamio

Is the protagonist about to clash with the true dragon race? Collecting life charts and dealing with the five-colored dragons under adolescence is fine, but if he goes after the metal dragons, it'll be a never-ending battle of fighting the old and the young. And the protagonist is a sub-dragon, which in the eyes of the true dragons is nothing more than a nobody, a second-class citizen, a slave.

The fantasy D&D novels on Qidian.com featuring five-colored dragons always seem to have the whole family involved in the battle. Is there some kind of weird quirk about this? The five-colored dragons themselves clearly enjoy fighting amongst themselves, relying on themselves for everything, taking mates by force, and intimidating for resources. Nine out of ten are in the evil camp, and not eating their fellow dragons is already a given. Seriously, I'm speechless.

Morrison

This relates to a later plot point.