Konoha Cold Wind

So beautiful, the only one I'm chasing is Naruto

The idea is very novel. The author can write some more powerful abilities, such as blood successor elimination or blood successor snare.

I'm worried that the author thinks no one will read it and leaves a comment. This book is very interesting, and the setting of the collection technique is also good. Because there are restrictions on the number of times, completeness, and success rate, hanging up is not a bug. In fact, it is an ability that helps the protagonist develop in an all-round way. I also think the protagonist's character is good. This kind of style with a bit of comedy in daily life is very good! Big cheers for the author! It would be nice if there were more, but it's really short and weak right now.

The plot is so slow, I can't get enough of it

You are already a mature author. It's time to think about updating at least two times a day.

According to my 9 years of reading experience, I have read a lot of books, from the martial arts at the beginning to the cool novels now. , I can't bear it when I see someone criticizing this book today. First of all, the plot setting is very strict. As for the weak protagonist, if you want to read a novel like Long Aotian, please go out and turn left. The protagonist needs a transitional stage to become stronger, and it cannot be done all at once. Just be invincible from the beginning. If you want to write this, first of all, if you don't talk about anything else, it will be difficult to develop the plot if you write it like this. This book is mainly written around the world of Naruto. If you want to force progress, you need to go to other worlds, and the biggest feature of this book is to become stronger in the world of Naruto.

Let's talk about the book Sealing Fire. Although I shouldn't be too picky about the world setting made by the author, I really feel that cloning is too perverted. It's so perverted that I think this setting is completely unreasonable.

I have four glasses of wine. One cup to Baoqiang, one cup to Yufan, one cup to Nailiang, and one cup to everyone here who doesn't like it.

I suddenly looked at the collection of Senju Hashirama Ninjutsu at Station B today. I found that no matter what ninjutsu the first generation used, they put their hands together and called out their names. Author, you asked the first generation of the dirty earth to demonstrate over and over again what kind of seals they put together, put their hands together and call out their names? ? ? Hahahahahahaha... Is this a bug?

The first time I read a paid novel, the first monthly pass in my life, I posted a post to commemorate it, the author left me a message to celebrate 😁😁😁

Let's complain about some things that can be complained about. I believe that in the later part of this book, everyone will have felt that it is either water or forced wisdom. Water can be used daily. Let it be easier for everyone to watch, but what's the point of saying something useless? You are so confused that you team up with Terumi Mei for cp. Anyway, I can't see the sense of cp between the two of them. Another point, after the protagonist opens the reincarnation eye, other plug-ins are added, not to mention the peak of the ninja world. At least he has the strength of Ban's peak period, and his intelligence is not as good as that of a jounin who trains two younger brothers all day long. Orochimaru's appearance rate and boss feeling far exceed that of Akatsuki Nagato, Obito. In the end, I don't want to say anything about the ending. I just can't write it down and just give an explanation at random. The most frustrating part is that I wrote so many vests before. Each vest's strength has a shadow level, right? There is also a fictional abyss organization. Where is this organization? At least they have to show up for the decisive battle. When the Five Shadows can't support them, it's not too much to have the vests of the Abyss Organization come to save the situation. Otherwise, what's the use of spending so much time describing the waistcoat. Overall, this book is a lot worse than the previous one, especially the later updates which were delayed and showed no sincerity. I guess the author is also planning to close the book, so let's stop here.

My girlfriend was so embarrassed that she forced one out of nowhere. Later in the game, you start the game with a magical outfit and plug-ins. As a result, the opponent steals crystals from home three to four times, and you and the super soldiers on the opposite side in the middle are fighting back and forth happily. He also forced the opponent's output to become invincible. Well, that's how it feels in the later stages.

Author: Are you a fan of Orochimaru? There is a suture monster. The protagonist opens the reincarnation eye and adds sage mode. He flies directly to the God of Thunder and Orochimaru is gone. Are you afraid of destroying Konoha? Afraid of Orochimaru escaping, why don't you just come to the tree world? Even if Konoha Fang has any objections to Wood Release, you can just push it to the Abyss Experiment. What do you have to be afraid of if you even got the reincarnation eye? Orochimaru seems to be very strong now, but as I said, there is only one suture monster, strong on the outside and weak on the inside. When encountering a strong character, he only loses. I just wrote it. After all, I only have one Naruto fanfic written by you on my bookshelf, so I'll just leave it at that. But you showed off your power in Ryūchi Cave, which is really annoying. But after I said so much, I guess you won't read it, because I think you, the author, are just enjoying yourself.

I think this book is quite good. The plot is very different from the original work, and I didn't find any bad points. Why isn't it popular? Especially after looking at the novels of the same type ranked above this book, I feel that the performance of this book should not stop here.

Why does the protagonist look like an SB?

The first one hundred or so is okay, but the latter is very poor. The protagonist has no characteristics of his own and is not proficient in methods. What's the use? Look at Gusuke. Looking at the protagonist, he either has one series and other auxiliaries, or he is proficient in all five series (meaning that he is not familiar with ninjutsu). Moreover, what I have always seen is that the protagonist loses when he is close to him. It can be said that it is very boring; when I saw Ye Cang, It was okay to drag her into the organization. I laughed. My father was beaten half to death and I can no longer be a ninja. My uncle was killed and most of my clan members were killed. I still want to get her into the organization. If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about it. Others are fine. If you insist on writing like this, I won't read it even if you reverse it later I don't mind reading it. There are too many poisonous points. I'm just complaining about a small part of it

A lot of vests are gone in the abyss? And Hidan hasn't come clean either. The hole he dug has not been filled yet? The unfinished identification is completed

The CP with Terumi Mei was really confusing. One was motivated by sex, and the other was greedy for power. They did the same thing every night. The protagonist obviously has nearly six levels of power, but he licks Mei Terumi like a licking dog. You want to express that you have everything you need by licking until the end, right?

How can I put it this way? The protagonist is just like a fool. I know this article tends to use memes every day, but a few memes are good as a seasoning. But you can't eat the seasoning like memes as the main course. This makes the protagonist not like a funny adult but a middle school student. There are also battles. The protagonist's battle is like using the Flying Thunder God to defeat the chunin. He only knows how to throw away skills and has no tactical use. In this situation, it feels like any other person can achieve the protagonist's level as long as he has this cheat. The protagonist himself is the vassal of the cheat and is of no use at all.

The book has progressed to an advanced stage, but I never felt that the protagonist was not strong in terms of the expressiveness of the battles. Looking at him constantly collecting, collecting, collecting, it is obvious that he is very strong, it is obvious that the chakra has dragon veins, and the power of the tailed beast is almost infinite, but he just doesn't feel strong. Once he fights, he feels weak most of the time.

The reason why there are so many opinions in the comment area is because this book is too long. The Naruto worldview is only so big, and there are only so many stories that can be told. Either you have to live your daily life, or you can only trick the enemy/outwit the protagonist. Two million words is already a lot for a single world. Writing any more would be superfluous and not beautiful. I hope the author can end this plot as soon as possible and look forward to your new book.

The monthly ticket is torn, the author could please add some details

It's so unfinished. In the last few dozen chapters, Akatsuki and Madara are pushed to Kaguya, and it's over. You collected so much and in the end only used the Tenseigan and Flying Thunder God, and nothing else. Mu Dun didn't even have a chance to appear. There is no mention of it at the end of the abyss, so it is useless.

A bit too fake! The strength of the elite chuunin can kill the Kage-level Red Sand Scorpion and Hagakura with their chakra multiplication, so wouldn't 16-year-old Naruto be able to kill the Five Kages?

The author puts his hands together: Water Escape·The Technique of Flood "Coin"!!!

There are over 400 chapters, who is the heroine? 🤔

Full subscription➕monthly ticket➕recommended ticket! (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) This should be refined! Waiting for updates

Can't you update faster? ? (｀⌒´メ)It's very slow. Bad review!

Without hanging the dirt wall 10cm away, does anyone really think this waste material flow is humorous? Chapter 124: There is the Uzumaki Ninjutsu, the Three Body Jutsu, shuriken throwing, dynamic vision, Shisui's guidance, and then being beaten by a Chuunin.

Come on, the author, I want to contribute, you know 😏{"NickName":"Book Friends 160103232415845","UserId":211718943}