Tales of Kendo in Tokyo

Sit back and wait for the author to pounce. . Return to fanfiction

Wouldn't it be nice to write about a pirate honestly?

Come on! If you return the pigeon, remember to go back and write about Naruto.

Let me complain too. I just saw the protagonist and his classmates going to level up with a monk. What can I say? The author's book is really not as good as the previous one. As for Goldfinger. I didn't feel it was anything great. In other words, there is no golden finger at all, even if you just get a normal dark blue and add some dots. Then I'm also confused about the domineering issue. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows that it's really useless to just follow the way of the sword. Especially if you don't practice domineering, it's very difficult to beat those with abilities. As a result, the protagonist fought against Kendo in the early stage. Do you think you are Sauron? . Zoro's talented master and so on are not bad, okay~_~ and then. The plot is really light. . I read 2.30 Pages and I didn't feel that there was anything explosive about it. No wonder the author's book did so poorly. . Note: I am not discrediting the author. I also found out that the author has published a new book to support it. Then just tell me how you feel. .

How can I put it this way? It feels a bit weird when I read it. The protagonist doesn't have normal friends, which makes it very uncomfortable. The protagonist is a little inconsistent with his words and deeds. His mental description and actual behavior are the same for a while, but they are different for a while. It feels super uncomfortable. There is also force. Why are each system isolated from each other? . . The Sword Master's breath of all things is similar to the color of seeing and hearing. Isn't the color of the weapon based on the quality of the body? And why can't they be practiced at the same time? It would be outrageous to completely isolate each thing. Also, why is the standard of swordsmanship blurred? There are still many shortcomings.

If you get used to being a eunuch instead of pushing yourself, it will be difficult to finish a book in the future.

The setting collapses. Let's talk about the color of knowledge first. If you hit level 2 at level 7, you can only be slashed by level 2 unilaterally. You can't even touch the opponent's fur. Conclusion: The color of knowledge is a reverse buff. The higher the level, the slower the reaction. Let's talk about Haki. If you're level 8 versus level 4, you're constantly getting hit. Since you're not injured, you can grab the blade when you're hit and give Kamishiroha a big-eared melon seed with your other hand. The game will be a game over.

There are always some remarks that make the author pounce. Is this good? Every book is written by the author after thinking for a long time. Isn't it bad to treat the fruits of one's labor like this? Moreover, the background of this narrative explanation is still very huge. Looking forward to it! It's much better than Naruto or Pirates fanfics. The fanfics explain each person's image and some important things. What's new?

One Piece and Kendo don't go together. Most people who like One Piece like to see Taijutsu Haki and the key point - fruit abilities. You wrote over a hundred chapters of swordsmanship based on the One Piece system, and readers who liked One Piece ran away.

Why was it cut when it was written so well?