Tales of Kendo in Tokyo

Waiting for the author to flop. Back to fanfiction.

Wouldn't it be better to just write a simple pirate story?

Keep it up! If you still miss it, remember to go back and write Naruto.

Let me vent a little too. I just got to the part where the protagonist and his classmates went to fight monks to level up. Honestly, this book really isn't as good as the previous one. As for the cheat system, it didn't feel particularly powerful. Or rather, there wasn't a cheat system at all. Even a simple Deep Blue stat boost would have been fine. Then there's the Haki issue.

Well, to be honest, it felt a bit strange to read. None of the protagonist's friends were normal, which was quite disheartening. The protagonist seemed a bit hypocritical; his inner thoughts and actual actions were inconsistent, which was incredibly frustrating. And what about the martial arts? Why were each system isolated from the others?

If you get used to abandoning a project instead of pushing yourself, it will be very difficult to finish writing a book later on.

The setup is completely broken. First, let's talk about Observation Haki. A level 7 Observation Haki user fighting a level 2 user is only able to get hit by the level 2 user's attacks, unable to even touch the opponent's skin. Conclusion: Observation Haki is a reverse buff; the higher the level, the slower the reaction. Next, let's talk about Haki.

There are always comments saying the author's work has flopped. Is that a good thing? Every book is the result of a long period of thought by the author. Isn't it unfair to treat someone's hard work like this? Besides, the background explained in this narrative is quite extensive. I'm really looking forward to it! It's much better than Naruto or One Piece fanfiction. What's so new about fanfiction that it explains everyone's character and major events?

One Piece and swordsmanship don't go well together. Most One Piece fans prefer martial arts, Haki, and most importantly—Devil Fruit abilities. If you write a hundred or so chapters of swordsmanship based on the One Piece universe, all the One Piece readers will leave.

A slow-paced book doesn't mean it's not well written, but the book's performance may seem really bad to the author, and the effort is not proportional to the reward. I support the author to start a new work. After all, he needs to make a living, but you don't have to finish the book. If you publish this series, it will be accepted by readers who have monthly or annual updates!