The War of Slaughter

Thank you everyone, I am truly grateful. You have all opened a path for me to improve. Indeed, it is the best way to grow when others point out your shortcomings and mistakes. After reading everyone's criticisms of my new book, I suddenly realized that there were so many shortcomings. I realized that I had been immersed in my own world, being arrogant and complacent about my writing!

Due to changes in the Qidian editorial team, the work was delayed until now before being signed. Please rest assured, with a well-developed outline, this book will definitely be completed perfectly. I also ask for your support. I don't care about the profits, but I hope that readers will be willing to read my story!

To share my thoughts after reading, the book makes extensive use of narrative descriptions, but rarely features psychological or facial descriptions, giving it a somewhat monotonous feel.

The data is truly appalling… I took a look out of curiosity. I don't know if this is a novel or a fairy tale?? One of the prince's personal servants is described as a cowardly and sleazy character, the guard knight is described as foul-mouthed and arrogant, and another, whether guard or knight, is portrayed as an incompetent and cowardly chatterbox…

The fact that you've written so much shows you really want to keep writing and gain popularity. However, you need to understand that for authors who aren't famous or have a large, loyal readership, the opening of a novel needs to be captivating. Whether it's the setting or something else, there has to be something engaging, otherwise it's hard to stand out.

Um, is this a military novel? It feels more like Western fantasy.

It's a mess! The beginning gave me a headache. Yes, online novels are fast-paced, but you didn't lay any groundwork or foreshadowing. You're too direct! Readers are confused. The names are all so hard to remember. There's a whole bunch of people at the beginning, and I can't possibly remember them all. The character portrayals are not vivid; they feel dry. To be honest, there's a lot of room for improvement. Keep up the good work!

I won't repeat what readers in the book review section have said, since I'm from the "failed" community. Winter? White Walkers? Doesn't that sound like some foreign TV series? Try to make the descriptions of the characters and their surroundings as natural as possible, don't make them too stiff, it gives me a headache...

I don't like these Western fantasy works. These days, apart from the top authors, no one really stands out in the Western fantasy genre; it's just a bunch of messy, nonsensical names that annoy me.

The writing is concise, but it doesn't quite feel engaging enough; I can't quite put my finger on what's missing! Keep it up! I'm voting for you! I'll subscribe to a chapter for you later!