A Journey to the West That Begins with Game of Thrones

The Mark of Chaos not only makes the world in the book chaotic, it also makes the book chaotic. It's not that there can't be Mark of Chaos, but the timing of its appearance is too wrong. What's the title of this book? It started with Game of Thrones' journey to the West, but Game of Thrones hasn't even started yet. The protagonist is still a 6-year-old kid, and all the main plot characters in the book haven't even been born yet. But now all hell breaks loose. This greatly disappointed readers who came in for Game of Thrones. This mark of chaos should not begin to appear until the protagonist reaches adulthood, at the beginning or in the middle of the plot of Game of Thrones. But now... Alas... A sigh...

The book was pretty good at the beginning, but it started to feel a bit broken when I got to Mark of Chaos, but I could still read it, but why the hell did I write about amnesia for the heroine? Or did the protagonist do it on purpose? It was for the good of the other person, and he hoped that the other person would not meet someone like him again after reincarnation. Don't you feel disgusted? Poisonous

Seeing now, the author should have some idea of ​​the performance of this book. All I can say is it's so messy! There are too many things the author wants to express, and there are a lot of wild ideas. Coupled with the slow pace, I was very tired of reading it.

First of all, I would like to state that this post only represents my personal opinion. If there is any inappropriateness, please leave a message to discuss. I am the author and only read this book. I don't know the author's past writing style and ideas. From this book alone, I can see that the author is good at detail description and character creation, but his overall rhythm control is only average, so I am very afraid that this book will collapse! You know how painful it is to bleed after reading a good book! I also wanted to write a serious book review before and talk about some of my views on this book and future directions! Because it was a work party issue, until this book slowly got into rhythm, the discussion among book friends became more and more heated, which inspired me to write. I am very happy to have so many like-minded book friends. After all, good books will not be buried, right? Hahaha So much verbosity, let's get to the point 1 A brief discussion of the future ideas of the author of this book First of all, I am a main world party. This main world is dominated by ice and fire. Other copies are added according to the plot (such as ancient times, why I will talk about it later) I said before that the author is good at detailed description and character creation. If this book becomes a In this Infinite Flow novel, the author's writing style can be put to some use. You must know that Infinite Flow is a fast-paced novel that focuses on plot and excitement. Once the copy is not finished, you will quickly move to the next copy. The author does not have to spend brainpower to write every story. The writing is not difficult, but every reader has it. It is easy to give up on things that I like and do not suit my taste, and it is easy to lose readers. In short, the certainty and advantages are very obvious. According to the author's previous plot, if the style of painting is changed rashly, it will really be more abrupt. I believe that the author has the ability to describe every copy well, but I am really afraid that the writing will collapse!

I hope I can write each world well, instead of jumping around from world to world. Such clues are messy and unfriendly to readers. It's the kind of book that you don't want to pick up after you drop it. The best way to finish it is to finish it one world at a time. The theme of "Ice and Fire" is "Game of Thrones" and the fate of the "Ice Wolf and Fire Dragon" families, and magic is just the icing on the cake. If we forget the fundamental premise that the protagonist of a novel is always a human being rather than a magical prop, and that the novel is exciting because of the full plot of the characters and not the magic, we will not be able to grasp the balance between the characters and magic. To turn a low-level demon into a high-level demon can only be the writer's own self-pleasure, and it is a waste of a bottle as good as "Ice and Fire". With the golden finger of the protagonist, "The World of Ice and Fire" has a lot of content that can be explored and written to create new ideas. The Golden Celestial Dynasty of Yi Di, the Kingdom of Dawn, and the struggle of hundreds of kings for hegemony, The shadow people of the Shadow Land, Char's Curse Master, Yunkong Mage, and the Pale Saint Child, The underground ruins labyrinth and ancient gods of Thunder Island. I hope to write a wonderful, unique, and ups and downs game of power, yes! The three Baratheon brothers were also originally in a power game.

What amazed me most about this book was the scene where Renly got the bard profession. What moved me the most was the scene where Renly sang when he said goodbye to Highgarden. At that time, I was thinking of Renly singing to the little queen, but I couldn't imagine it.         ，，，，

The writing is good, and it can be seen that the author's literary skills are relatively solid, especially the description of the environment in these chapters, which is fascinating, magnificent and magnificent. He also has his own opinions on the portrayal of characters. From this aspect, it is a good novel among Game of Thrones fans. Most of the opinions from book friends are that the plot is dragging, the setting is vague and the pace is slow. All I can say is that I'd better wait a little longer before reading it, otherwise it will be "Game of Thrones" and there will be no follow-up. I remember reading a book called Taxi Driver Travels to the West, which was pretty good.

If you keep writing at this pace, you will definitely become a god. Don't pay attention to those nonsense. This plot is very exciting. I haven't seen it in a long time. At the moment, it is still the fairy grass in my heart. I hope to write according to my own ideas and not be influenced by others.

Why are you still in Game of Thrones? I really miss the plot of The Elder Scrolls.

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After looking at the catalog, I decided to just change the name to Game of Thrones fanfic and plan to read The Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter.

It's so beautiful. Xiao Kukai recommended it well.

For me personally, I don't want to click on the chapter names that are exactly the same. Two or three chapters were okay, but more than ten chapters really left me with no desire at all.

I have read Chapter 237 so far, and it is actually quite well written. The "Gate" buff of Sons of Anarchy used to be very poisonous, but it doesn't affect me anymore. But maybe it's because the story was written for so long that it's a little confusing. The last thing is... Goldfinger is a bit clumsy and has uncontrollable skills. I hope it can be solved as soon as possible...

Most of Game of Thrones has no magic, only the Night King and the Witches

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Looking at it so far, there are daily routines, life details, copy and reality alternating. This gentle and appropriate rhythm makes me feel very comfortable and satisfied. For example, the recently popular "Lord of Mysteries" or the "Lord of Mysteries" next door have used this method, which is a test of the author's writing ability; There are too many exaggerated works in the Internet literary world that are full of climaxes and stretch almost the whole time. Some are chased by evil spirits every day, and some see their life expectancy counting down to less than a day. To be honest, I feel very tired after reading too many such works or watching them for a long time. Am I reading for leisure? Or are you reading and practicing? (Laughing) And logically speaking, the overly tight story arrangement is also very problematic. There is no need to eat, drink, sleep, wash, or take care of yourself. There is no need for entertainment. The will is stronger than steel. They are taking risks and doing things 365 days a year... These protagonists are really not AI. Is the robot pretending to be...? When we concentrate on reading a book, our minds and emotions are invested in the story, ups and downs with the author's words, and are indirectly controlled by the author. This is very important - after pushing us up from time to time, it also allows the characters and us to rest for a while at the low points.

​ ​ Summarize the role of the power of chaos. It can be spread through Renly's seed of chaos, which can cause the spread of certain behaviors to expand, thereby absorbing power from chaos and strengthening the power of chaos and its host. Renly can take back some of his power and control his host's mind. What is unclear now is the requirements of the power of chaos on the host, where the power went after Renly took it back, and whether this kind of behavior is only an ancient way. Welcome to add.

I, we, what, dad, young master... These words are always used by book friends, so let me explain them. The main consideration in using these is the tone of the characters. There is a related plot in the original book, which is the conversation between Theon and Roose Bolton. The vocabulary discussed is lord lord. Normal people call it lord lord, and peasants call it lord lord. Can you understand what this means? The vocabulary of this book basically follows the original Chinese work. I also think this tone change is handled well, because it is impossible for an illiterate peasant to have the same tone as an aristocrat. As for your so-called translation accent, so what do you want... I don't know what you are talking about. I have read many books and they don't have as high a limit as you said. Maybe it's because I am ignorant. There are not many book friends like this, but you can always see them every now and then. Some of them can express their understanding, while others just keep telling jokes. I understand your psychology very well. The text alone does destroy the style, but I think the text style is not as important as the character style, so I am not going to change it. So I hope everyone can adapt to this style and don't forcefully use words. If it doesn't work, there's nothing I can do about it. After all, a core problem is that I can't write novels in English, right?

Personally, I feel that since the appearance of the power of chaos and the random passage of historical figures, the level of this novel has plummeted. It cannot be said that the author's writing is not good enough, otherwise he would not be able to see the back. However, I feel that the author may not have figured out one thing, which is also a very important thing, that is, when we read novels, we basically only read them once, and we read them quite quickly. So the question is, when you first studied, you read the history textbook. After reading it quickly, how much can you remember? Can you remember the names and dates of the characters in it? Will you see characters from other dynasties in the chapters of different dynasties? After studying history for so many years, I barely remember a few dynasties. Why don't you ask me to remember the characters from the novel? There is no problem in the front of this book, because most of the readers who have read this book have read TV series or related novels. In addition, the copies are relatively small. Each small copy basically talks about two or three people. It is just like watching a suspense-themed case or a thriller story, which can make people read with relish. But if you ask me, a person who has only read it once, to deal with all the main characters in the dungeon and your confusing power system, to be honest, it's not the least bit difficult. At the very least, it should be like reading a Chinese textbook, carefully interpreting each sentence and thinking about it. Sorry, I really can't do this. It's too laborious and not worth it. As for the slow pace, it actually doesn't matter, as long as it looks good, but do you think you, a child who is six or seven years old and is not allowed to do this or that, will look good? Most of the previous chapters are just copy descriptions, which is okay, but when it comes to reality, it is a bit inappropriate, and it is too easy to wear away your patience. Author, you are raising a child, so you may not feel it, and you may even enjoy it, but you must also consider the feelings of the onlookers. As for some people asking the author to ignore others and write according to their own ideas, this is purely deceptive. You are asking readers to follow the author, and those who buy things to follow those who sell things. I really believe what you say, haha. A person can only make progress by constantly breaking his own cognition and status quo. If it is really unchanged, there is no progress.

It was good until the end of the Judgment of the Seven Sons dungeon, but after that... I felt the same way as some other readers: chaos. Give the protagonist a debuff-like Mark of Chaos. I won't go into details about such a small thing, I can accept it. The protagonist is a child who has no abilities but can accept small things. The most unacceptable thing for me personally is that the characters in the dungeon traveled to the main world. How could the author think that this is not time travel? Such a large number of time travels will inevitably cause chaotic reactions in the main world. At that time, the main world will be like a derailed train and I don't know where to go. I'm afraid the author will not be able to control it.

Dear 😊, this means that I have finished reading it. I feel that the plot after Renly grows up to 16 years old is not good. I was originally moved to death by the two plots of Rhaenys. I ordered the next chapters before I read them. Now it seems that the peak is those two plots, and I have no other feelings. Besides, if the book review is not for people to express their opinions, then what is the book review area for?

To be honest, if the author of Sons of Anarchy writes a few more chapters in such a hazy way, the readers will run away. This is not how suspense is set up. They set up suspense one after another. Once one is solved, there will be another. This book cannot be solved at all, and then it is piled up. It is so weird The Lord of Secrets also has a lot of suspense, and it cannot be solved for the time being, but people know that when a suspense cannot be solved temporarily, put it aside temporarily, and slowly tell it as the plot progresses, and this book will continue to strengthen the suspense for you, and then if you don't tell the mystery, the readers will be bored after a while.

It is recommended that the author control the magic in this book to a world with low magic. Otherwise, if the protagonist's power is too high and one person can conquer a world, the extension of the story will not be so easy to develop, and the content of the story will not be rich enough. This is a reader's personal feeling!

If it's not the heroine, there's no need to write about her after the dungeon ends. If it's the heroine, what's the point of reincarnating her and asking the protagonist to forget about her? To summarize, there are spoilers. The little queen ran from the protagonist's copy to the protagonist's world, but she was already old. Not long after meeting the protagonist and recognizing each other, she died because she wanted to save the protagonist (in fact, the protagonist did not need to be saved, the author just wanted to write her to death anyway). The protagonist tried his best to find the 7 gods to save her, and then let her retain her memory and reincarnate, but delete the memory of the protagonist. If it weren't for the heroine, these plots would be inexplicable. If she were the heroine, then this would be the way it was written in that ancient era! Literary youth is a disease! Bye bye, I didn't spend much subscription money, it's so uncomfortable to be disgusted😣

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Just like the title, because the writing is not limited to the original work, but also includes plots such as the prequels and settings. Even friends who have read the original novel may not understand many parts. I am not sure that the chapters I wrote can fully explain it, so I specially opened this page. If you have any questions that you don't understand, you can leave a message. Of course, I can't claim to have a 100% understanding of the original work, so if there are ice and fire bosses passing by, I hope they can lend a helping hand and help correct the problem. I would be very grateful here! 🌹

Suddenly I thought, is the characteristic of chaos a foreshadowing for the mad god Sheogorath in The Elder Scrolls? Wabajack, the rod of the mad god in The Elder 5, can cause completely unpredictable consequences, which is highly consistent with the "chaos" characteristic that Sanlu currently possesses. At the same time, the current Mad God Sheogorath is the protagonist (player) Cyrodiil Champion in 4 who tore the Demon God's godhead and was transformed into a human->Dragonborn->Demon God. It is very similar to the path that Sanlu is practicing. Such imitation behavior is called "armoring" in Laogun, that is, by practicing the past achievements of the Holy Spirit/Demon God to achieve the purpose of replacing its original personality. So Sanlu will replace Mad God in Lao Gun? Or is Sanlu the mad god?

I came from Zhanji, and after reading hundreds of chapters, I feel that his evaluation is indeed reasonable. The author's writing style is very good, but he always likes to play with his personality, so the whole plot is confusing, and in the end the author himself gave up treatment. As long as you write according to normal people's thinking, your writing performance will definitely not be like this, especially your character dialogue, it can be seen that you have carefully studied the game of Thrones. (Finally, it is recommended that some people who like reading comprehension should delve into the literary films with a score of 4 or less on Douban. That is the place where you should stay, and you can perfectly use your intelligence)

Since the emergence of the power of chaos, a good novel has become chaotic.