American Drama World Adventure

The problems of this book The early stage of this book is very attractive because 1. The existential crisis needs to be solved urgently 2. The world is mysterious and inviting to explore 3. The text description is very detailed The later stage is boring because 1. After the existential crisis disappears, there is no powerful villain to solve, so it is meaningless for the protagonist to upgrade for the sake of upgrading. Another book "The Seventy-Two Transformations of Disha" does a good job in this regard. Its protagonist has always had an existential crisis, and life and death are also big things. Isn't it painful! 2. The mysterious world will be thoroughly explored if it is thoroughly explored. The purpose of exploration is unclear, the meaning tends to be meaningless, and the only method of exploration is meaningless destruction. The so-called creation is just random. Of course, creation is refreshing, but the reason why creation makes people happy is that creation is a breakthrough in a person. The inherent limit of ability, the happiness that comes from improving one's ability to survive and reproduce, the happiness that comes from helping others and gaining respect and recognition, the happiness that comes from letting one's ideas spread in the world and revealing the truth of the world, and the happiness that comes from having one's money become extremely rich and buy many things that cannot be bought. 3 In summary, the author's lack of deep exploration of philosophy, human nature, and lack of depth are the fundamental reasons why this article tends to be boring. The essence of the article is to arouse emotional responses from readers, so the various non-three-dimensional characters that do not express emotions are medium-level reasons. The lack of systematic and foreshadowing thinking about the overall outline layout is the tactical-level reason. Recommendation Read a book called Actor's Self-cultivation and Artificial Intelligence Theory. The first book is to train you how to shape the character. The second book is to let you understand what human nature and philosophy are

By mastering a world, you can gather the power of faith, promote the evolution of blood and life, and at the same time start to manage the world and work towards world advancement. It is true that Goldfinger is already very big, bigger than many invincible protagonists in the construction stream, but if the protagonist does not make good use of it, wouldn't it be better to find a way to learn the nature of the world's laws?

Come back and have a look, My previous evaluations: ① The structure is logically contradictory ② The characters are stuck in cards ③ The plot is simple and crude ④ There is no core expression content. I heard that my account was deleted and I tried again? It's better to open a new book. I have been interested in ice and fire for a while, and I feel that the author has some ideas. After going through two or three worlds. Just gave it up.

The book's creativity and overall picture are great, but overall the writing is bland, and the character of the protagonist is also completely unrelatable.

The world of Lord of the Rings is dizzying. One character has several names, and the names of various places and races are complicated and difficult to remember. After looking at the back, I forget the front. I often forget while watching. . . .

The book is still very good, I like it very much, keep up the good work

Are there any books about the Lord of the Rings series? It feels quite interesting

None of the Ice and Fire fanfics I've read are as good as this one.

The recent storyline of the main character being cut off and re-trained is very good. I have almost finished reading the Lord of the Rings series, and analyzing the plot from another angle is something I have never thought of. But the author should be careful not to write too much about the main plot, how many years later, what will happen to the protagonist... In the world of The Lord of the Rings, I personally like this kind of writing. After all, traditional fantasy will enhance the epic feeling. But if it were written in a world after the Lord of the Rings, it would become a poisonous point.

Finally another novel about an American drama. The beginning is not bad, I hope it's not too censorship

A few comments after watching it for so long: 1. Personally, the biggest problem is that there are too many cheats, so many that they have already overwhelmed the plot characters, and this is only the third ring? I don't remember much. I'll upgrade and add some abilities later. I probably don't even remember what abilities the protagonist has. I might consider integrating some abilities or something. 2. I feel that the main world is the focus. After all, it is considered a world of high magic. I still hope to see the protagonist gain something in the dungeon, show off in the main world, develop and so on. I can't say that some people won't write if they don't want to read it. Many readers just read the book silently without comment. I think the main world is better than the dungeon. For me who have never watched these two American TV series. 3. When choosing a dungeon, you should consider the readers. You still hope to see a familiar dungeon, similar to Marvel. After all, I have seen the movie and have some impressions. To be honest, I was confused when I watched A Song of Ice and Fire. I had no idea about the relationship between the characters in it. The evil force is okay, after all, there are only a few people. Anyway, having said so much, these are just my personal suggestions after reading it for so long. I still hope that I can write better and better. After all, it is so difficult to find a book that I can read now.

By the way, author, why don't you improve your posts? Otherwise, it will look like there are no comments in the comment area. It's so miserable.

Let's discuss the Silmarillion: the War of Tears in the First Age and the Battle of the Last Alliance in the Second Age. What was the reason why the Order side was defeated miserably in the former and the Order side was victorious in the latter? I hope readers can express their opinions, thank you😜

The new beginning is very surprising The flying green leaves and tears are beautiful, very beautiful Books need flesh-and-blood protagonists Whether he is cold or gentle, he first needs to be a person with self-thinking and feelings A free soul will never be "Oh, okay" to everything "Just like that" attitude The shining soul must have something to ask for, and that "quest" is pursuit I hate eternity and immortality, I rush to the glory without hesitation I think this is the real life Thank you very much to the author, Charles finally "came alive" from that numbness! (In addition, I really want to know what happened in the main world. It has been a long time.

I don't understand, the power system is too rubbish, not to mention destroying the world, and throwing a fireball will probably not hurt. He can control the world but is still a noob. I skipped a few hundred and watched Pirates of the Caribbean. What's outrageous is that he killed a giant octopus and still stumbled. I thought that everyone in front of me seemed to be a god. Why can't he be as intimidating as a missile? I should be responsible for my own wallet.

The author's setting is simply anti-human. In order to force the protagonist to only practice undead magic, the setting for a formal Holy See organization actually requires contributions in exchange for skills. The threshold for joining the Holy See is exaggerated enough. It has been said that there is a shortage of people, but there is no shortage of talents. The entry threshold is extremely high, and there is no training? Not bringing in the old and bringing in the new? No inheritance? There is nothing, just go and do the mission. There is no difference between newcomers and cannon fodder. These old people are the sons of destiny who can climb up. I am really grateful to their gods that the organization of this system is not extinct!

In the free chapter, I saw two pitfalls that shouldn't be stepped on. First·Back and forth The protagonist travels to another world, and then travels back and forth between the other world and the film and television world. I don't know who invented this writing method first, but there is no doubt that this will create a situation where the author needs to spend two efforts to make readers interested in the two separated story lines. From what I observed at the starting point, most people are not very interested in the "main world" set by the author in this routine. My personal opinion on this is that you need to be able to write original plots of the main world, and just write original ones. This kind of mixed writing method is really unnecessary. Like the main world of this book, every time I patiently want to be directly involved and try to accept the plot of the main world, the protagonist will travel through time. Please, your original plot part lacks a sense of immersion, but it is cut into so many pieces. How can you let readers understand it? Second: Unintuitive pretense system Why are the superpowers in film and television works very intuitively destructive and survivable? Because this resonates most with readers. I have read dozens of chapters in this book, and the protagonist's cheating is really fucking annoying. The protagonist can learn magic. The first one is to summon skeletons. There are language and corpse freshness restrictions. The skeletons are weak and attack indiscriminately. The second one is the Curse of Pain, which involves tying the target's hair on the villain, and then torturing the puppet, the target will also feel pain. I haven't seen the protagonist develop the next few spells, but judging from the names, they are the kind of skills that have a lot of restrictions and are not enough. I don't know what the author thinks. If you want to control the plot by suppressing the protagonist's strength, then what you should do is reduce the intensity of the superpower, rather than make the superpower like drinking water and sitting on the toilet waiting to pee. Can't Iron Man develop a remote-controlled robot? Why does he wear armor and fight alone most of the time? Because it's direct and cool! Thanos has to come to Earth to fight the heroes in a star battleship, does it affect the box office?

I hope I won't write about the Marvel world in the future. Let's not talk about a bunch of novels about Marvel. I feel sick when I read them. It's like the martial arts must-haves about Tianlong. It makes my eyes tired. I also feel that the Marvel world is messy and messy. There are all kinds of technologies, superpowers, magic, and all kinds of aliens. The world view is too messy. There are all kinds of destruction of the world, the universe, all kinds of parallel worlds, and there are a lot of big bosses in it. I just need to learn magic well in the future. It feels really tiring to read after adding all kinds of technology. It's really easy to collapse if it's too messy. Anyway, I'm just making a suggestion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The author himself is very clueless when it comes to writing. I can see that compared to Binghuo, you didn't have the control to the point, and your writing is not as good. I think you basically wrote it in one go, and we also enjoyed watching it. You also have your difficulties. After all, it spans from the Middle Ages to modern times. It is difficult to control the cultural background of the times, and the setting of the evil force itself is chaotic. At that time, I couldn't stand watching the third and fourth seasons. Author, I see that you now also want to pay attention to details, bring a sense of mystery and elegance, and foreshadow the writing. But you have picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelons. The protagonist's personality is a bit off-line. In the early stage, it was lawful and neutral. Now it is sometimes chaotic and sometimes evil. It is very puzzling to me. Why do you write Binghuo so much that everyone appreciates it? Because it is fun to watch. Why is it fun? Because you bring the protagonist into the whole plot world, half farming and half pretending. And let me say it for the third time, when will the setting of your planeswalker card and the arrangement of the dragons be buried? If you have time, evil forces will try to destroy them, so it is better to bury the hole as soon as possible...

Suddenly I realized that I had already become a deacon in early March, so I posted a post to commemorate it, for the poor guy who has no money to reward👻. JPG

Chapter 25 of the Mutant Volume is really unreadable. It jumps around several different worlds. Sometimes you can't figure out which world the protagonist is in if you don't watch carefully. Moreover, the plot is sometimes incomprehensible. It feels like you have no idea what the protagonist is doing in the Marvel world. The ability system in the early stage is relatively clear, but the ability system in the later stage is messy. You don't know whether the protagonist is strong or weak, and the more the main plot is written, the less it is. It feels like it is just for the sake of writing. If you want to read it, you can read the previous chapters, and you can abandon it when you reach the mutant volume.

There is indeed a reason why it is not popular. What the hell was it written? The first two chapters are full of poison.

After reading it, I almost cried. In the end, the protagonist didn't care much about hatred because it took too long. He felt like his personality had changed since he became an elf. In the end, he probably even forgot his original goal. Didn't I say I wanted to go home... I didn't go home at the end. Although I had a wife and daughter, why did I feel heartbroken? 😢 Are the protagonist at the beginning and the protagonist at the end of the story really the same person? I felt really sad when I saw it. The main character at the beginning is obviously so cute.

If you haven't watched the plot and want to know more about it, I recommend Station B's UP Wasabi, which has plot commentary videos for many American dramas. You can understand the content of episode 2.3 In just a few minutes, and the Evil Force has been updated for several seasons.

The author, I suggest you reorganize the outline and the power system first. The more you read, the more wrong it becomes. What attracts me the most is the main world. The combination of ice and fire is also good. Although the writing is a bit white and the rhythm is occasionally not well controlled, but after entering the evil force, I obviously feel that the writing has improved. The description of the scene and characters is fuller. The beating rhythm of the main and secondary worlds is okay, but in the later stage, it is like ice and fire. Li Drama is not very good at writing like a running account What is particularly important is that the power system is broken again. Already after Binghuo got the scepter, he said that getting high-level plug-ins too early is asking for trouble, because when the power increases too fast, there will be two situations: one is invincibility too early, and the boss is like a minion and there is no high power; the other is that the author has to frequently open reverse cheats and add restrictions to restrict the protagonist's power in order to avoid collapse, but readers will be even more unhappy after reading it. Wouldn't it be good to slowly improve by following the original church magic and death spells? You can refer to Squid in terms of power improvement and control. His writing is really stable. In this regard, I was really looking forward to the author writing an amazing structure of magic and witchcraft. The blood of God can be obtained, but those passive and day-night switches that cannot be turned off are full of awkwardness, just to suppress the protagonist, so it is better not to make the ability so strong. Purification can improve quickly. As a protagonist, you always have to have a plug-in, but as soon as Deathwing came out, you knew it would collapse. Too powerful an ability will inevitably cause the protagonist's strength to increase too fast. Later, after upgrading, it did not increase but decreased with a scythe. Why bother in the first place? Especially telekinesis, this is the biggest failure, because Ruzhong's telekinesis has no limit and is too powerful (refer to what the angel said). It can even be said that once this ability is released, the protagonist can just practice telekinesis without practicing spells. Flying? Telekinesis! Defense? Telekinesis! Attack? Telekinesis! Control? Telekinesis! As soon as telekinesis is released, 80% of the spells can be swept into the trash. Coupled with the fusion with the Seven Gods, the originally attractive power system almost collapsed. What is shown is that the rhythm of the later period of the world of evil power is completely disrupted. As the protagonist himself said, everything he did in the early and middle stages of the evil world is meaningless. As a reader, I feel the same way, so why write so much?

The author has ordered all of them. Happy New Year🎉. Not to mention the old content, the opening chapter of the new Lord of the Rings is so well written. I applaud and applaud you. The image of Shire has become more vivid, so please do it 🤭

I want to see the author write a pure Middle-earth book, from The Silmarillion to The Lord of the Rings. The author's Silmarillion volume is better than the previous ones. I believe he can write the Lord of the Rings well.

Why does the protagonist keep writing about that thing at length after getting the scepter? The power is also the scepter, not yours, and it is useless in the main world. It can only show off in Game of Thrones.

People with normal views cannot read this book.

This author strikes hard at his relatives and treats strangers like family. I guess the author's family situation is not that good, which makes me speechless.