Lord of Confusion

Let's figure out the number of chapters, such as Chapter 1, Chapter 2 or something, so that everyone seems to have a greater sense of accomplishment. 😅

If you haven't read it yet, come and support it and keep writing!

Honey punctuation mark, why do I feel so confused?

The protagonist has a serious halo of joy, and everyone who communicates with the protagonist will be assimilated, which is a bit poisonous

Lack of punctuation, waste of time trying to understand what you wrote

It's well written, but it's a bit slow to pick up. Goldfinger usually explains it clearly in the first three chapters. Readers like you with average writing skills will not have the patience to read on, and the overall picture of the article is not strong and lacks specific picture description. However, this novel has no brainless routines. Generally speaking, it can be said to be at a food level. If you write down the social environment and the protagonist's current ability in detail, write it down carefully, and promote it on the posts of popular novels, it should be able to achieve good results.

Come on, the writing is pretty good so far, at least it's better than those disgusting stallion articles.

Likou You🙂

It's so miserable. I'll leave a book review to comfort you. I'll give it a try and check it out.

I don't know why I didn't want to click on it after reading the introduction. . .

I'm going to post a book review, I haven't read it yet, but your writing is pretty good, so you can advertise it, and then ask the big guys to recommend the book,