HP Dark Ages

Many small details in this article are really great, such as there were no tickets before and there will be tickets in the future; the differences between professors; people's names, etc. It's a very novel article

Mr. Porter is exactly like the protagonist in Hollywood youth campus movies, a sunny, free and easy, informal, righteous, smart, independent, energetic, and sporty boy. Think about those movies where the protagonist and a group of friends do all kinds of mischief and are not afraid of anything. They are the ones who win in the end. The teacher also likes this kind of child. But in fact, the destructive power caused by this kind of child is very great, and their extreme self-esteem makes it easy for them to ignore the feelings of other people. Youyi's family background allows them to ignore the problems that many children face, and the partners he stays with are all similar, which makes him not care about what children who are different from them think. Unlike the twins in the Weasley family, the twins' pranks never hurt others, and no matter what kind of prop joke they are, they always have a certain mode. But Potter is different. The one who is more similar to Potter is little Malfoy.

What can I say about this book? The angle of time travel is very good. Harry's father was in Hogwarts. It should be the first book in the timeline of all Harry Potter time travels. But this book is not interesting at all. It only writes some trivial things. I don't know why it is written. It is all about children's grudges. And there is no plan after time travel. Anyway, it looks very awkward. It is almost the same as a children's book and it is very boring.

I really can't understand it. Didn't Potter take the initiative to provoke Snape at the beginning? Lily tried to stop him, but in actual actions, there was nothing. If someone violently attacked my friend on campus, I would not have contact with him, let alone become friends, and then we were together.

The Greengrasses are a pureblood family.

It's quite beautiful, especially the emotional descriptions are good.

Let's complain about the plot of the latest ten or so chapters. It feels like forced intelligence. 1. The protagonist experimented with the wand and the dragon skin, and the unknown changes caused by the wand. The magic crystal disappeared and the dragon skin could not be taken off. The key is that the function of transmitting magic power failed, and the life-sustaining function of the wand was not used. The protagonist lost his mind. First of all, the protagonist did not explore why the wand changed like this and did not think about how to solve it. He just left a message saying GG. Then even if you can't solve the wand issue, can't you find various external aids? Could the secret of the magic wand be more important than his own life and the lives of those around him? 2. The same goes for the battle against werewolves. The protagonist wandered in the wilderness for a week and encountered a werewolf who was full of magic. It took a long time to throw spells around without thinking. And in the end, he did not use apparation. First of all, adult elite wizards in HP have a great advantage over werewolves. If adult werewolves are stronger than adult wizards to rule the world, they should be werewolves. Even if the protagonist is brainless and wasteful, the next question is, why not use a broomstick or a magic spell with a similar lift-off effect. There is also a girlfriend here. I have time to cooperate with control + apparation to escape, but I just can't. 3. Waiting for time to let the girlfriend escape is also a forced intelligence reduction after watching too many magical dramas. First of all, the girlfriend cannot give up on the hero due to his personality. Secondly, why do you want her to apparate by herself? She was bitten by a werewolf and didn't go with her. Death. There is also the part where werewolves besieged the two of them. How can I protect my girlfriend? She is covered with bruises. A group of werewolves are attacking each other, and you are just letting it go with a few moves. ** Style sensationalism 4. The most basic wand-making, the protagonist is because the wand hanging suddenly disappeared, which may cause him to go on a rampage with magic power. However, when the protagonist is frustrated and looking for death, he duels with the werewolf, and uses up the magic power with no brain power. The magic power can be used up, and the magic power can be used to run wild... The previous content is quite exciting, I just want to complain about the last ten chapters.

It's so strange. It seems to be written about James Snape's generation. What does it mean? The main plot has been cut off and it is just a bunch of daily fights... Moreover, the curse of the black magic professor was in 1964, and the enrollment was in 1971, a few years before the curse started. The various professors did not write special features. I think the reviews are so high? Is the review deleted or something?

How should I put it, maybe it's my own problem. When I saw the protagonist and Al talking about the problem with his wand, I really felt like I didn't want to watch it.

The title of the book is not dark at all.

I'll give you a monthly pass. . I need to keep writing. I don't have many HP fans that I can read. . . As long as you keep writing, I will give you all the monthly tickets in the future 😡😡

This is one of the most serious HP fics I have ever seen. The writing is fluent and does not forcefully suppress the wit. It is very comfortable to watch. I give you all my votes. Thanks to the author!

Why is it so unbelievable to see that China's immortal cultivators can't defeat Voldemort?

I've only read a few chapters, it's so well written.

It's just a prequel fanfic, there's no time traveler, and I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters.

The ending is a bit rushed, but still very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Trash novels have invaded our homes and they still make sense. Dumbledore, too, didn't take action when fighting Voldemort, but instead threatened his own students. It was really interesting.

I am so angry that Lily is still dead

Sure enough, your talent has to be used in the right place, and you have to be brave when writing fan fiction.

The Master of Spells is really good-looking, but it's a pity that the eunuch is