Ember Paradise

Recruitment order: "Character (can also use title or name) "Race" "Professor/Advanced Profession" "Affiliated God" "Church" "Weapon" For example: 567, Human, Assassin/Shadow Dancer, Lord of Shadows, Crowd of Shadow Thieves, Shadow Dagger. Solicitation type: dnd, Crusu, steampunk and the like such as (Dungeons and Dragons, Icewind Dale, Neverwinter Nights, Baldur's Gate, Planescape Torment) and so on. Welcome to participate enthusiastically, little idiots😁

Writing is not easy, but the evil dragon must know how to cherish and be grateful ૧(●´৺`●)૭ Here, let's set up a thank-you building for book friends. Including (recommendation votes, rewards, follow-up reading) and other support. I hope you can post more comments. If there are too many words later, I will create a chat group~(Ω_Ω)~ Finally, thank you to the students for their support!

Author. There are some words in your novel that I really don't understand, and I don't know how to complain about it. Overall, I feel like your novel is a bit inconsistent, like a literary youth moaning without any reason.

There are too many modifiers. I don't know how powerful they are after reading one chapter. Alas.

The stream of consciousness is a bit heavy, and the description of some places that shouldn't be brief is rather vague. The pile of gorgeous words makes it very difficult to read.

After the author has finished writing, he first reads it himself. Many of the sentences are not fluent, and many idioms do not convey the meaning. It makes my head hurt. I still like the subject matter. I will keep it for now. I will correct the typos and sentences that are not fluent when I have time.

，，，，，…………Emmmm，，，~      Finally, come on, author, the world view of this book is very interesting, but novels involving the Cthulhu mythology are difficult to write... Oh, come on, I heard that the author of this book often replies to book friends' comments, will he reply to me? Σ(|||▽||| )

Internal investment has passed, please invest and support 😊

There is an era of one hundred years, and now it is the fifth era. Although I didn't read what was said later, I just saw this and gave me a bad feeling.

The author's imagination is still great, but I would like to give you a small suggestion: the writing style and vocabulary are too gorgeous, and it makes my head hurt to read... It feels like a chanting tone. I suggest that some places can be streamlined a little to increase readability.

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If you were asked to choose a DND career, which one would you want?

I didn't expect it. I, Mr. Jiu, am here again. Wherever I get sprayed, I will advertise again.

There is a feeling of relaxation when sleeping, this book

Please ask the author to come back and update 😭😭😭

In the wasteland, the main mentality is lawful evil, but fighting alone is too slow. You should leave some kindness and adopt and teach orphans. In a place where Taili is killed, the population will decline.

Chapter 48 Ghoul Sisters!

Because it was blocked, I revised it four times but failed. If you want to see it, join the group and I will send it to my friends. I originally wanted to post it in the comments, but the system deleted it too. Oh, it's so difficult. Please understand.

So how old is the Archaic Era? Is the protagonist from before or after the Archaic Era?

Suggestion I don't know if it's my problem or something else. I can't see what the author's main line is.

The darkness has no principles and no bottom line

Chapter 117: Is there something strange mixed in?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

What's the difference between the protagonist and the male protagonist? I haven't watched it yet