Ashen Paradise
灰烬乐园
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 255k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Epic Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Open the Secret Window of Imagination, and a Splendid Fantasy World Awaits
Complicated place names and hard-to-remember characters? That's just what it looks like at first. Once you immerse yourself in the vast world the author has painstakingly created, none of that will matter. Just follow the protagonist and take it all in. The unforgettable epic atmosphere and moving stories will fill your heart, giving you an extraordinary experience unlike any other kind of novel. I mainly recommend promising new books, but I'll also add a few established favorites. Authors prom
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Recruiting buildings! ! ! (￣～￣)
Recruitment order: "Character (can also use title or name) "Race" "Professor/Advanced Profession" "Affiliated God" "Church" "Weapon" For example: 567, Human, Assassin/Shadow Dancer, Lord of Shadows, Crowd of Shadow Thieves, Shadow Dagger. Solicitation type: dnd, Crusu, steampunk and the like such as (Dungeons and Dragons, Icewind Dale, Neverwinter Nights, Baldur's Gate, Planescape Torment) and so on. Welcome to participate enthusiastically, little idiots😁
Thanks Lou!
Writing is not easy, but the evil dragon must know how to cherish and be grateful ૧(●´৺`●)૭ Here, let's set up a thank-you building for book friends. Including (recommendation votes, rewards, follow-up reading) and other support. I hope you can post more comments. If there are too many words later, I will create a chat group~(Ω_Ω)~ Finally, thank you to the students for their support!
Author. There are some words in your novel that I really don't understand, and I don't know how to complain about it. Overall, I feel like your novel is a bit inconsistent, like a literary youth moaning without any reason.
There are too many modifiers. I don't know how powerful they are after reading one chapter. Alas.
The stream of consciousness is a bit heavy, and the description of some places that shouldn't be brief is rather vague. The pile of gorgeous words makes it very difficult to read.
，，，，，…Emmmm，，，~ Finally, come on, author, the world view of this book is very interesting, but novels involving the Cthulhu mythology are difficult to write... Oh, come on, I heard that the author of this book often replies to book friends' comments, will he reply to me? Σ(|||▽||| )
There is an era of one hundred years, and now it is the fifth era. Although I didn't read what was said later, I just saw this and gave me a bad feeling.
After the author has finished writing, he first reads it himself. Many of the sentences are not fluent, and many idioms do not convey the meaning. It makes my head hurt. I still like the subject matter. I will keep it for now. I will correct the typos and sentences that are not fluent when I have time.
Internal investment has passed, please invest and support 😊
The author's imagination is still great, but I would like to give you a small suggestion: the writing style and vocabulary are too gorgeous, and it makes my head hurt to read... It feels like a chanting tone. I suggest that some places can be streamlined a little to increase readability.