Another World's Snack Shop

I'll come first Preserves.

Come on, time seaweed! Reading your novel is like reading Late Night Diner but more interesting. Originally, I never spent money to read novels, but when I saw that your grades were not very good, I was really angry and sad. I couldn't bear that such a good work was buried. I hope you will continue to work hard. I will always support you, don't make me regret it~

I received a sexy Weiner call from Penguin, which is pretty good. Looking at everyone's comments, I feel itchy to say a few words, but don't take it to heart if it's right or wrong. After seeing the Yunjiang Competition, I went back to read the book "Si Qiong Zong". After thinking about it for a while, I realized what the problem was. The fusion of pretense, chicken soup, and light-hearted comedy is a bit disharmonious. I was particularly touched when the protagonist recalled the happiness brought by snacks, but when it came to the hurried layout to slap people in the face, it was a bit out of place. In fact, the protagonist does not always have to win. From the perspective of facing the challenge of Ding Wuwei, compared with restaurants and snack bars, the price is higher and the time is slower, so it doesn't matter if you lose, it doesn't matter if you don't gamble, and it doesn't matter if the store is gone and you go to the street to sell on the cart. The protagonist needs to grow, and growth is not limited to the system. There is also something to learn from other worlds. By the way, to borrow what the Three of Swordsmen said about Jingtian, only those who are afraid of pain and insist on being heroes are true heroes. (Approximately what it means) One more thing I wanted to say when I read the comment just now is that lightness and comedy are based on a harmonious environment. If someone is trashing you every day, you won't be able to laugh. So we might as well give some more names and backgrounds to our neighborhood drinker enemies, as if there really is a snack street, and we can also indicate the number of words for water. Write it down in the book. When the plot requires it, people will tell you how deep it is buried. For example, the sentence in Chapter 4: "Wang's business is a time-honored brand in Yunjiang County. It has a complete range of products, does not refer to fakes, and does not press scales, so the business is prosperous." The shop is quite good. And Li Bing, I don't know the outcome because I haven't seen the latest. In fact, it's entirely possible for Li Bing to become a ghost errand, and he can also do ghost business in the future. As for how to gain the ability to see ghosts and contact ghosts, I can write a story. I can't think of anything, and I'm a little sleepy. I had a lot of fun reading this book. I hope the author can cheer me up, and I'm grateful to the author for bringing me so much happiness. I fell asleep.

It's easy to watch, but the story, especially the description of the supporting characters, is a bit confusing, and the part about Xiao Chu's parents is quite abrupt. Overall, it's pretty good. If I don't go astray in the future, I think it will be popular.

Successfully poisoned in Chapter 30, you have a female protagonist, you said it, but the character list is not written out, the female supporting role is not marked, and it takes up more than 20 chapters? I don't know how many chapters there will be later. The female clerk who applied for a job at the beginning was all accepted, but suddenly her parents came and left as soon as they came, and suddenly they forced her into a marriage. Forget it, why should the protagonist get involved? This has something to do with you... Can't you cook honestly? Are you not sure about the positioning of the article? Readers come to see the chemical reaction and feeling of food surprising everyone in another world, not to see you here to pick up girls. If you want to pick up girls, don't write about this subject. Moreover, you don't have such a good writing style. If you can't handle the relationship between men and women, you should try to write as little as possible. If you don't write, don't you understand this principle? Half of Chapter 30 must be about the love between sons and daughters. I am here to see you fall in love? Let's just talk about it. I'm so embarrassed that I've developed cancer. What else can I say "Brother Qin, save me"? ? ? ? ? ? ? Co-authored he can hear the same? And no matter how you say it, it is your own flesh and blood that fell from your body. Even if it is in exchange for benefits, you will not call your daughter despicable. Hudu does not eat his children, so his daughter can be insulted casually? Or the role of mother? In total, she wasn't the one who gave birth to her. She gave birth to a scumbag. What kind of scumbag was she? Md, it's driving me crazy, are you really just arranging the plot for the villain's omnipotence and forcibly reducing his intelligence? You let him go, why don't you just do it and get it over with? It will save trouble and there will be no enemies in the future. If you want to write about cultivating immortality, then write about cultivating immortality seriously. If you want to write about counter-uprising, then write about counter-uprising. This is not a good idea. Why write about cultivating immortality + rebellion under the guise of a food article? Just by looking at the plot, you can guess what you are going to write about. If you don't want to please the readers of any of the themes, why do you want to develop all-round development of morality, intelligence, physical education, and art? What does the affairs of the royal family have to do with you, a cook? Is this plot necessary, or does it mean that you will become a slave of the subjugated country? If that is the case, the plot will be great, but is this what you are doing? It seems that you are making enemies everywhere, and in the end you will directly overthrow or become a crony of the royal family? Is it necessary for a cook to be a cook? Really, if you don't rush into the street, who will rush into the street? You will know it by reading the chapter number. I hastily picked up the end. Can you find the position of your own article? You are a food article, and food articles should look like food articles. What are you writing? What are the four differences?

Boss, hurry up and cook the food

What are the representative delicacies in everyone's hometown? Although the author doesn't have money to eat, I can listen to you. If there are interesting food and stories, there is a high probability that I will write them in the book for all readers to enjoy them together. Thank you again for your support.

The book ended out of nowhere? At least write a sentence: "Qin Fei opened his eyes, stayed quietly for a while, took out a pen and paper, and wrote a transfer notice..."

Wait, what is going on? Why is it over after studying for half a month?

This author is not an experienced driver. I will die if he doesn't drive in one chapter 😅