Shadow of the Hidden Mist

I suggest not learning Chidori and Maruko; the protagonist's power-up lies in the plot and the development of the Three-Tails. Water Release is the key.

I've always thought Water Release is quite powerful. It would be great to develop Water Release extensively. Look how strong Kisame is!

I disagree with two points the author made in the first chapter. First, the claim that Mei Terumi's combat power is weak is laughable. The author cites Mei Terumi's brutal defeat against Madara as an example. Goodness, even if you let Itachi fight Madara, he would still get beaten up. It's not that Mei Terumi is weak, it's that Madara is too strong.

To be honest, I've always felt it's a real shame about Kirigakure. They had the most bloodstained ninja after Konoha, and their geographical location was excellent—they could invade land or defend their own country. Others might not even be able to defeat Kirigakure at sea. Such favorable conditions were ruined by their Blood Mist policy.

I've read a lot of novels where everyone who goes to Naruto has to get the Rasengan, including the author of this book. Do they think the Rasengan is awesome? Rasengan: A ninjutsu without hand seals, created by the Fourth Hokage and recorded in the Scroll of Seals. Jiraiya knows it, but it's unknown whether Kakashi does.

By the way, the main character seems to be a short person.

It's been cancelled, what a pity. This is the first time I've seen fanfiction featuring Yagura as the main character.

Although I haven't read it, I still want to remind the author that there are only interests between countries, yes, only naked interests. Therefore, the protagonist shouldn't try so hard to curry favor with Konoha.

I get one recommendation vote a day, so why is the update speed getting slower and slower?

Water Master? Flat-chested Water Girl? ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)