Soul Customizer

I'm testing the water today. What do you think about it? You are welcome to share! The important thing is, if you think it looks good, please collect it:)

After reading some, let's talk about it. You are not distinguishing between subject and object. Logically, this kind of subject should weaken the role of the protagonist. It is best to use the function of a soul grandfather to cultivate the supporting characters, giving a sense of cultivation. But you let the protagonist participate in the plot, drastically changed the plot, and made the selected "protagonist" dispensable, which is very bad to read. Also aside from the awkward and unreasonable plot at the beginning, I can barely watch it.

I haven't read the book yet. I remember I threw it on the bookshelf during the Platinum League a long time ago. I didn't expect the author to insist on writing so many books with such dismal results. Some of the books I threw in during the same period had much better results than yours. The author's perseverance deserves recognition.

Boss, give yourself some silver and at least change your account.

The claws that were blown in by Bai Yinmeng

After reading Chapter 36, I haven't found any obvious poisonous points for the time being, but overall, the plot lacks interest and is a bit like reading a novel. In fact, it would be better to add more character interactions and the characters can be created more fully. The supporting role is better shaped than the protagonist, but the protagonist has more scenes than the supporting role, which creates a sense of contradiction. Either the protagonist is downplayed and the "grandpa" mode is used, or the protagonist's image is strengthened to make the protagonist more distinct. If it is not a slow-burning novel, it would be better to strengthen the description of the protagonist's abilities and arouse readers' interest better. But if it is a slow-burning novel, then strengthen the description of the background to make the various emotions and plot more profound. This will also give readers a stronger sense of immersion and the desire to continue reading. This is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. It's useless if you comment. I usually don't read the replies.

How to say it. . . . Open a new book. Sure enough, it's good for you. . . There is really no need to keep writing You have accumulated what should be accumulated The next book is needed to explode. . . . 😠

I don't quite understand why I read it carefully. The writing is very good, the description is very detailed, and the characters' behavior is not mentally retarded, but it is just plain, as plain as boiled water.

1 Million words, 10,000 recommendation votes. . . . It's true that love generates electricity. . . .

I had a feeling after reading Chapter 31, Blue Star people, without the system, they are just fw.