Super God Academy: The Black Great Wall

You can feel that the author really doesn't know how to write about emotions, and the most inexplicable thing is that every female character has an affair with the protagonist. Especially Qiangwei and Angel Yan's attention to the protagonist. It seems that the protagonist wants to take away all the love luck of the original protagonist Ge Xiaolun and put it on himself. There is also Ahri's affection and Rena's attention. It's really not possible for every female character to follow or even like the protagonist, right? This is too baffling. The success or failure of the role creation of this relationship. It can be said that the author's shaping of the character's personality. Except for the protagonist, everything is quite successful. I haven't said it before, but there is a problem with the plot of their interaction with the protagonist. That's how the original plot character treated the protagonist. Completely divided. It's like, the protagonist must be the focus, no matter where he is! In fact, Xiongbinglianzhi and Super Seminary. The reason why the theme can be sublimated in the early stage. It really lies in the editor's shaping of the protagonist's emotions. The emotions of all characters are placed under righteousness. Ge Xiaolun is like this. Rose is like this, Angel Yan is like this. They are both dedicated and sensible. In particular, the focus is on the description of the emotions between comrades. Rather than "emotional description". However, the emotional description of this comrade-in-arms. If you watch the original plot you will find out. Although Ge Xiaolun is the protagonist. But the feelings of a group of people are the feelings between a group of people. They are entangled with each other. Rather than the feelings of a group of people towards one person. It's like tying everyone's emotional threads to one person. As written by the author. I have seen many fans of Super Seminary who are unsatisfactory. When I saw this book. At least I was happy with the first two chapters. It can be said that the author is the one who best restores the character of the original plot characters. However, it is still unsatisfactory. That's it, it's not a showdown or a fight, it's just emotion.

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The author is a newbie, and I haven't read this book in general. I plan to read it after I finish it, but I read the author's pre-reading guide. I think that since the author is writing out of interest, he doesn't have to pay attention to the trolls, and just write the best according to his own ideas 😃. I think the author's logic in writing novels is online, and his character analysis is good. The most important thing in writing novels is that the logic is online. As long as the logic is good, it is almost nothing. Those who talk about being a licker or a loser, the author should ignore them. The author can go and take a look at the world of Naruto in the eyes of reincarnation. This novel is very scientific and has a great sense of logic 👍

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No, it's hard for me to understand why it's updated so often. Logically speaking, this book should have been written long ago. After reading it, the plot is generally fine. Except for the time travel period, which felt a bit watery, the rest is pretty good. Especially the training of hell paratroopers to create a different heroic company, which no longer relies solely on this super Soldiers and ordinary people can also play a big role. In fact, in the original book, the role of super soldiers against the invasion of aerospace civilization is only strategic deterrence. Ordinary people are still fighting the war. Can the author continue to write this book? There are not many books to read on the site. I thought you could return to the top. Is it going to be unfinished?