Who Put the Lid on My Coffin?

Other authors write well in the early stage, but start to push the envelope as soon as the fee is paid. This author is interesting, he is vicious and pushy in the early stage, and after 90 chapters, he writes better and better.

The title of the book could be changed I have to say that the author's writing skills are really good, and the plot development is okay, but there are some small flaws in the protagonist's character, which is his level of strength (in the article, we can know that the protagonist is an elder-level vampire through the dialogue of other characters, but in the article, the protagonist and the character [Unmoving] say that he is not an elder-level). I wonder if the author is foreshadowing this? The protagonist of this book is the most aristocratic and arrogant vampire among the vampire novels I have read. In addition, because of the soul of the time traveler, he is cold-blooded and not lacking in humanity (but I personally feel that the protagonist has not fully accepted the identity of a vampire and will occasionally stand up to others. From a similar perspective, I think the author can consider the protagonist's position. Of course, the protagonist's character does not need to change. It's good now) I will order all of this book. It's rare to find a book that I like. Come on, author Does the author have a book club?

The writing is really good, it feels like an American TV series, and Lilina is the heroine of an American TV series. Many people say that the first part is not good, but I don't think so. Except for the first chapter, which is a bit unorthodox, the beginning is very American. The heroine and her parents suddenly encounter a disaster when they go out, and her parents die suddenly, but the mysterious male protagonist attracts her attention. Then there is campus life, when the police discover a murder case and all the doubts converge on the heroine, it is particularly touching. Then the current plot is changed from the perspective of an American drama, where the female protagonist likes the male protagonist, but the mysterious male protagonist is also the villain's boss and wants to cause a bloody storm, but the female protagonist does not agree. If you follow the urination of American dramas, it must be that the heroine wants to help mankind, and then there are so-called decent people who resist the heroine together with the heroine. Later, the heroine discovers that the so-called decent people are not the decent people she imagined, and finally stands by the hero's side... I can't think of the next plot. In short, it is a nue love, and there are other women competing for the hero. I am looking forward to the next plot.

It's a little bit toxic in the early stage, but basically it's pretty good in the later stage. The character design of the protagonist is pretty good, but the heroine is really too brainless when she first appears. Stick to Chapter 10, good food and fodder

Okay, let's support the book. If anyone sees this comment in two months, just kick me.

Perfect, the most perfect picture.

I want to work harder, craftsman 😊😊. The book is good, but people are too lazy, not even as good as a beast, and have been wandering on the edge of the palace. 😰😌

Author, I beg you, please update it quickly. Are you afraid that you have forgotten that you have posted a single chapter before saying that you cannot be a eunuch?

The author is being targeted by editors, it will be fine

Lilina