I Have a Special Reading Technique

Your plot is so contrived! The moment he gains mental arithmetic, the cash register at the convenience store where he works breaks down; the moment he gains English speaking skills, a woman who studied in the US appears. Can't you even tolerate one chapter?

The first three chapters tell the story of a top 5 college student who accidentally gained the ability to add and subtract three-digit numbers, which shocked passersby and the entire internet. That's right! You read that correctly! Not a five-digit number Not a tens digit It's not about calculating squares. It's not about taking the square root. It's just three-digit addition and subtraction!

To be honest, after reading so many poisonous books, I was considered invulnerable to all poisons, but I really couldn't handle the mental arithmetic at the beginning, so I gave up.

Since the story depicts a world in its final, degenerate age, I suggest the author avoid having the protagonist cultivate immortality. Instead, create a Martial Saint or Martial Immortal. Otherwise, if you introduce a Yuanheng period in the novel's world, and given the degenerate age of reality and the high-energy environment in a low-energy setting (a world in its final, degenerate age), it would be abnormal if energy absorption didn't occur!

The first six chapters were really awkward! Whether it's the simple mental arithmetic at the supermarket or the spoken English when meeting the foreign cousin, for the protagonist's university, Zhejiang University, it's just above average. You could say that this level wouldn't even qualify him as a top student in high school, let alone at a prestigious university like Zhejiang University. Does the author have some misunderstanding about the learning level of college students?

It's written the same way... A group of people were amazed by mental arithmetic of addition and subtraction within 100, and it caused a stir online... Then, just after they learned English, a mixed-race woman appeared. Judging from the university the author mentioned, it should be Zhejiang University.

Personally, I think writing time-travel plots is bad. The author writes about reality quite well, so suddenly adding a time-travel element is a bit off-putting.

Having lived for five hundred years in the Ming Dynasty and even been an emperor, it's unbelievable that upon returning to modern times, he would encounter a woman who would stun him. This woman's story is truly bizarre!

There are too many overpowered characters; it gets tiresome after a while. Also, Wong Fei-hung is a character that people born in the 80s really liked—he travels back in time and steals other people's women, which makes him feel alienating.

Once you return to the real world, it's all about showing off and getting slapped in the face again. Can't you just be normal for once?