Ice Rose Crown

Are you actually a fan of Seraph? Jiang Nan studied for a doctorate in psychology, so his writing is so heart-wrenching. As long as you don't write it, you should be able to get good grades.

The original name of this book is "Your Highness the Earl Doesn't Need a Witch". Due to Qi Jiang's persuasion (bi) and (po), it was renamed "Crown of Ice Rose". Please continue to support qwq. I am also very helpless.

In fact, the male protagonist is quite careless about human life. I felt that it was not worth it for him to be thrown to death. If I look at it more carefully, I can only say that the male protagonist's values ​​​​are no different from those of the nobles who tested him. He should be able to accept the test of life and death with joy. This is probably a person who does great things.

As of this article, the total length of about 150,000 words has been read. Personal perception: Name, +10, relatively serious Introduction, -30, the introduction is very poorly written, which seriously affects the desire to read and the expectation for subsequent development Description skills, +10, normal level Narrative technique, +30, narration, online articles are relatively rare, and have higher requirements for readers to read carefully. , Hardcore, I like it The freshness of the setting, +10, as long as you are steam P punk, we are brothers The freshness of the drama, +10, due to serious spoilers, the general direction of the future development of the drama can basically be guessed, bad review, but the details are good, and it still has good reading appeal (I suspect you are abusing the protagonist, but I have no evidence)

This work contains an excellent world view and imagination, but the author's writing style cannot fully control it, and it seems to be neither better nor worse. Compared with the popular fantasy, it is whiter and has gained a large audience, but the style is more hard-core. Take the first few chapters as an example, the characters are too powerful and appear compact, and the true hard-core readers are not very good at buying it. If the writing style can be properly refined and some similar themes can be studied, I think this will indeed be an excellent work.

I think the author should help Jiangnan update Tianzhichi

Ice Rose probably has nothing to recommend until now. In other words, it was abandoned and used as a library. In the future, it should be on the shelves naked or something. But the only good thing is that now you can write what you want on the bottle, and no one will read it anyway. It is impossible not to be disappointed in your heart. Thank you to the readers who can persist in reading. Later you can (probably) see the real Ice Rose Crown, a Saintinoa full of blood, betrayal, conspiracy, and conspiracy. As for whether to start a group or something... Emmm, forget it, not many people will join anyway.

Personally, I think this book is about the best, but to be honest, this book is in an awkward position of being neither good nor bad. It is not grounded, but the author's current writing power and cultural accumulation cannot support the gorgeous and complicated core. At present, it seems to be a bit of a clichéd text, which does not please both ends. If you plan to continue writing a book, you should either make the writing style more popular or go back and carefully study the materials related to medieval religion and politics. Don't write based on the impressions from online articles, which is a bit empty.

In fact, there are limitations of the times, but I don't think people in the Middle Ages are stupider than people today

The scene switching is very uncomfortable to watch. I often don't know where to go when I'm halfway through the scene.

I rarely write reviews, usually only when I am special. After reading a few chapters, I have big questions. I don't know what the author was thinking, but I only know that the plot made me tear up 💔. I just escaped with the help of magical creatures, but I turned around and said that I didn't believe in the existence of magic. He acted like a pure and good boy just a moment ago, but in the next section he became a hard-hearted man who regarded life as nothing. If you really want to round it out, you can still round it out on these two points, but if you really can't stand such plot divisions, there are still many more. 😅

Come back and take a look. I am going to finish it in a hurry. I don't know whether the author can successfully finish the book. By the way, I would like to remind the author to pay attention to the contract at Qidian (but the author probably already knows about it).

The main problem is that it feels like the updates are too slow. In fact, the content is very good, but it is updated every day, which is really crazy.

Michelle is actually the heroine, I'm shocked (it's a bit late to appear this time)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I'm waiting for you to come back. Let's have a good rest.

The content is great, but the names of the supporting characters and the plot details make it very difficult to read.

Searched Witch's Fountain, I thought I finally found the fan ←_←