A Passerby's Story of Cultivating Immortality

If you don't believe it, the emotional scenes are indeed unbearable. Because I haven't read the finished book directly, I don't know why I wrote the emotional line later. I wonder if it's because of the readers. If I had followed it, I really didn't want to see this emotional line. I'm willing to give you any reward! After all, I was really unhappy with this male protagonist. He lowered my favorability when he appeared in the early stage, and in the later stage he showed a persistent attitude of stalking. Isn't it true that a slut is afraid of stalking a man? I don't understand. When it comes to writing a love line, the male protagonist's character is too superficial. He is a very superficial person. As someone who has read a lot of romances, my requirements may be relatively high. First of all, an attractive emotional bond is essential. I haven't seen much of the bond between the male and female protagonists. If the heroine is good-looking and can recognize the heroine, then the heroine will be pitiable. As for the friendship between life and death, the heroine in this book has quite a few friendships between life and death, and if it weren't for Jiang's obsession, I'm afraid the heroine would have been able to handle life and death with ease. Being suspected of being a drag, being a licker, and not having the blessing of an excellent bond, you want me to accept that a heroine with a grand goal and a strong heart has feelings for Jiang that are more than "Thank you, you are a good person." I feel really uncomfortable. Maybe the author's character creation is not strong enough. Jiang's character is really made of paper. In ordinary romance novels, he has the appearance of a cannon fodder who sacrifices for the heroine. At least I don't think so if he becomes a cannon fodder in this book. It's not a pity that it's strange, but he turns out to be the male protagonist. Alas, let's avoid it. Everything else is good. The emotional line is really abrupt and awkward. If you want to scold me, blame me for having poor taste and not being able to appreciate this male protagonist, but he is really oily! 🙂

In the Demon Spirit Continent, what happens is everyone's business, not one person's business. The power of everyone is infinite, what can one person do?

Do ordinary people have spiritual consciousness? Why does the heroine say that her consciousness is stronger than before? This is very strange!

The author's writing is really great. It's the most satisfying novel about female immortality that I have read recently. Especially the author's spiritual pet is set to be female. I think it is particularly great👍🏻. Moreover, when the heroine raises a spiritual pet, I don't feel that the heroine is cheating at all. It feels like a complete partnership. In common fairy tales, the heroine's so-called spiritual pet has a role, but it is more like providing an ancestor. To purify the bloodline of the spiritual pet, the heroine needs to spend a lot of opportunities that she has worked hard to earn. No matter how you look at it, you feel aggrieved. It is obvious that the spiritual pets are hugging the heroine's lap, but when they treat the heroine, they often treat the heroine as if she has taken advantage of it. The author of this article handled it particularly well, and I strongly recommend everyone to subscribe.

I always felt that the heroine was okay in the early stages, but she lost her wits after meeting that Jiang Jincheng. It feels like a love brain. This man is also very annoying. It sounds like he likes the heroine very much, but he doesn't say how much trouble he brings to the heroine, and he seems to be a love brain? Tsk. . . The heroine feels so aggrieved after coming back from so many hardships! ! !

I found this book on the list and read it in one go. I have to say that it is really well written. Although the protagonist feels a bit too kind and always seems to owe others, the author controls it very well. It is the kind of bottom-line but soft-hearted. It is not a holy mother, but it is also open-minded enough not to get entangled in various small troubles. It is fully and unconsciously following the master's instructions to grow up. Live well, don't mind the business of the world, and come to Tianwaitian. There is nothing to read at the moment, except for the author's previous books. I think this level can make you a god. Why is the author so humble?

To be honest, I don't understand why so many people don't like the original heroine. I think the original heroine's writing is very good. It is true that the original heroine may cause trouble, and her character is not particularly cautious. But the original heroine was an ordinary person before she traveled through time. If she suddenly gets a treasure and enters the world of immortality, will she suddenly become very powerful? Still Are you expecting an ordinary person to be great without experiencing anything? Wouldn't it be more interesting to have Man Man get into trouble and experience danger and grow up because of his own shortcomings? And I think the interaction between the original heroine and the heroine is also good. In short, I am looking forward to the development of the heroine and the original heroine. I think the author wrote it very well! Come on! (Why hasn't Baby Zhenshui been born yet? The author should arrange it quickly!)

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It's very beautiful. It's fattening up. Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง. PS, I hope there is still no male protagonist.

Regarding book friends saying that the heroine is too self-centered and not integrated enough into the sect, I have a different opinion. First of all, as a free individual, a person has the right to choose the way of survival. Although the heroine has obtained resources and protection from the sect, she has also given rewards to the sect through her own efforts. There is no reason to swear allegiance to a sect. Some book friends said that there is a novel on a male channel where the male protagonist leads the sect to progress together. Everyone has their own choice. It is just that men may prefer the intoxicating feeling of responding to everything. How much selfless dedication can be included in it? I don't think so. Secondly, everyone is profit-seeking, whether it is a sect or a current enterprise. If you want others to be loyal, the premise must be to make the other party profit and grow. It is really fucked to blindly shout slogans to make others loyal or make inner demonic oaths to restrict sect disciples. When the atmosphere and corporate culture are improved, employee loyalty will naturally increase. But so far, I haven't seen anything special in Beichen Sect that makes disciples feel a sense of belonging. On the contrary, if you want to obtain further resources, you have to use the Heart Demon Oath to control it. It's really disgusting, and I would definitely not agree to it. Not swearing the inner demon oath means that the heroine gave up the resources she obtained after taking the oath. She didn't want them in the first place, so why would she pick up the bowl to eat and then put the bowl down to curse? Aren't we all now accumulating experience in one or several companies after graduation, and then going to develop better companies with higher profits? To be honest, the concept of loyalty is somewhat one-sided. Loyalty to the company must mean that the remuneration paid to us by the company allows us to have a stable life. Loyalty to the country is because the country brings us a sense of security and gives us confidence in life. If you are loyal to a certain team, it must mean that the team safeguards our common interests. Even if the interests of a few individuals are temporarily harmed, it is for everyone to benefit in the end, and those who are damaged can receive adequate compensation. The so-called loyalty that is divorced from these foundations is not called loyalty but servility. We mortals are all like this, let alone those cultivators who go against the will of heaven. In order for a sect to be recognized by its disciples, it must have a good atmosphere. Most of the disciples are friendly, master and disciple treat each other sincerely, distribution is basically fair, and rewards and punishments are generally standardized. After doing this, how could the heroine not blend in? Well, the two long reviews I wrote at Qidian were actually given to Five Bears, which is quite amazing. There is no doubt about my true love.

Why is it that the first part is written well, but the logic behind it is completely messed up, which is almost meaningless. .

MMP, doesn't it mean no cp? ? ? It's not easy to come across a female channel novel that I like. . I have to waste money to go see it again (He likes her, she likes him.) Can't we write the plot honestly?

She's getting prettier, but my feelings for Jiang are too exaggerated

This heroine has only known Jiang Jincheng for a few days, and she has already fallen for her. Her beauty is misleading! Poor Uncle Ling, he knew the heroine from the very beginning, but he still hasn't played with her yet

I really can't help but complain that the author always wants to hide the heroine from everyone, but he doesn't hide things that should be hidden, and he always leaks things that shouldn't be hidden. He always makes secrets, is timid, and has no refreshing energy at all. The emotional scenes he writes are also sudden, and the changes between relationships are like playing house, inexplicable.

This emotion is so controlled that I even have some opinions about the heroine. She is weak in strength but strong in patience. Many people who plotted against her have endured it. In the end, it was nothing. I have never seen her take revenge on anyone. I secretly poke thinkingRevenge, the result is, because of something or other, and then let it go (🙄Look at the overall situation?) The person who plotted against him, and always said that he was about to die, hahahaha, laugh to death🙄.

Cute and mighty

This book is really a pity. The original no-CP writing was very good, but then it got messed up as soon as Jiang appeared. I still think the previous Nine Realms book was good.

Lao Jiang was terrible when he came out. He helped the dandy to catch innocent crows for no reason. The younger brother of the little cat didn't mess with him. He was really rubbish. He was not as good as Dongfang Mo and Ling Tianzhen, and not as good as the big villains of the original novel, the little brother next door. I hate the male protagonists who are the sons of this family the most. Ling Tianzhu and Dongfang Mo are both so good. When I saw such a male protagonist, I was bored, and the article immediately fell down a few levels.

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Since the male protagonist came out, I feel that the atmosphere of the story has changed. The first part is still well written, but the second part of the narrative seems messy.

In terms of character, this old Jiang is not as upright and kind as Ling Tianzhen. He hurts other people's pets and hurts the spirit. He also feels disgusted that he let the heroine go. His character is so bad.

I'm really convinced. That cat is stupid and selfish, and he's holding the heroine back. She doesn't know what the use of him is. He makes mistakes and doesn't realize his own mistakes. It's annoying to watch.

Seeing the emotional line at the back is as disgusting as eating a fly. It's so disgusting. She's just a scumbag and a bitch.

It seems that so far, Xu Lingwei has been particularly accommodating and considerate to Dong Ling and even backhanded her! ! ! It doesn't really help much, but it consumes resources and causes a lot of trouble. I don't think spiritual pets are working and being exploited, but at least they should help each other and not be a hindrance! ! ! So far, I hate the mentality of the winter spirit and the protagonist!

It's not that I can't accept the relationship line, but it's too inexplicable to fall in love with Jiang Jincheng. There are many handsome men with good personalities. The two of them have been alone together for only a day or two, and the heroine can fall in love with him to the point of death? It's okay to like men, but there's really no need to be so inexplicably humble and licking.

Contents of the text changes: Changed the name of the kitten in the early stage to Xiao Dongling, some typos, wrong sentences, etc.; Starting from Chapter 249, changed the heroine's affection for Jiang Jincheng; Starting from Chapter 291, changed the heroine's love and affection for Jiang Jincheng; The main plot line remains unchanged. Due to the reduction of the emotional line, there are more than 10,000 words missing. From the beginning of chapter 302 to the end of chapter 314, the plot has been moved forward slightly. The emotional line between Jincheng and Lingwei will be supplemented in the extra story. Sorry for the trouble this has caused readers.

The heroine hasn't reached Tianwaitian? Is it over? Didn't the previous Xin Sects and Master Mu explain everything clearly?

I have a question. The spring was left by the heroine's master to the heroine. Why did the author write that it was taken away by the original heroine in advance to help the original heroine quickly upgrade?

It feels like there should be a lot of foreshadowing. For example, the heroine, Master Shiniang, seems to be unfinished. Isn't it about the spiritual world, or the fairy world?