Marrying a Rich Family

The second British father-in-law was said to be the old lady's biological child at one time, but not at the other. There were also two kung fu maids given to Zhu Yuan by the fifth prince. They appeared when they were given away, and then disappeared...

The author can make the titles of each chapter more attractive, come on

After reading some of the previous posts, they all reflect that the author has not explained the origin of the heroine clearly. The article is full of strange settings or the plot is too long and boring to keep reading. I just read it for a while, and it seems that there are many routines that are like ordinary enjoyable articles, but there are many dull and uncomfortable feelings in terms of language description. If the subsequent plot is not very exciting, I will probably give up the article. There is a recent book shortage, I hope I won't be disappointed in the future😔!

Can the pace be faster? It's not a TV series. How many chapters has it been like for a personal guard to get married? You could at least intersperse some plots in the Crown Princess's Palace. I really suspect that the writer has been changed.

The plot is written very smoothly and looks very comfortable.

The heroine's psychology is really strong and beautiful.

Don't bring too many brain cells into this book when reading it. It seems very enjoyable if you treat it as a way to pass the time. If you take it seriously, you will lose.

Let me go, this guy named Gu is not the male protagonist, right? ? ! Please let me know so I can stop the loss in time.

In fact, the author's character creation and plot description are quite good. But after reading several of the author's articles (I didn't finish the second one), I found that there is a problem that has always existed and is getting more and more serious, and that is laxity. It can even be said that there is only relaxation without relaxation. There is always one plot after another, one after another. Not to mention that the protagonist is always nervous, and the readers are always on tenterhooks and worried about the protagonist while reading. The reading experience is naturally not good, and it is easy to abandon the article halfway and not be able to finish it. Although it is said that sunshine always comes after the storm, but if your article is always exposed to the storm, readers will run away before the sunshine. It is necessary to arrange more bright and relaxed plots and characters. Don't always push your protagonist so hard. If the relaxation can be done properly, I believe the author's novel will undergo a qualitative change, and it will naturally become a red text.

I was introduced to it by Daguan Dada. Qin Xi's writing is really good. The heroine knows medical skills. It's great. It's my favorite type.

Renew! End! The road is long and long! Come on!

You guys are so fast!

The author comes out and we have a good chat! Isn't Mrs. Xu, who is over fifty years old, not the British father-in-law and Xu You's grandmother? Isn't Mrs. Fan's daughter Fan Ying Xu You's cousin? I mentioned earlier that the impeachment of the fifth prince's British wife's natal family was affected and the entire family was exiled. What's going on now? Isn't the old lady at home well? I am very disappointed in you. This kind of problem started from the time when I was a boudoir!

There are no spring flowers, no mountains and flowing water, no pavilions... Only endless battles with villains. I have already lost count of how many I have defeated after reading more than 300 chapters. Before one villain falls, another one comes, but it is still seamlessly connected. Moreover, all the villains in the book are all the same, stupid, evil, and have strong backgrounds. The minister, the marquis, the prince... These villains have gone through many trials and hardships. If they are villains and don't say they can cover the sky with one hand, don't they all have some means? He fell down just because the heroine said something? What would Aduo's attitude be like when he comes from a small country to ask for help? The villain created in the book has no character logic and no sense of reality. The entire court feels like a villain and is defeated by the heroine. I am really disappointed with this book!

Congratulations, and may Dandan's new book sell well! 🤭🤭🤭It's booming! I finished reading two chapters in a blink of an eye. I feel like I have to save a few more chapters before reading, otherwise it would be really annoying to read one chapter a day! Not enough at all

I just want to ask, does the author write an outline before writing the article? I have only read about twenty chapters. Why is it that the protagonist's mother died in childbirth in the first chapter, but she fell into the water and died in the next chapter? …And didn't the opening chapter say that the protagonist was plagued by all kinds of illnesses in his previous life and died in depression, with his children having no one to rely on? Why did he become the protagonist later and worship a famous teacher, with superb medical skills and lightning-fast methods, showing everyone's style? There is also the one in the temple, who is said to be richly dressed and looks like someone from a famous family, but later said that it is no wonder she is so depressed... Let me talk about the funny one, Mrs. Zhu San. If the author hadn't said she was from a local aristocratic family later, I would have thought she was an ignorant country woman somewhere... All famous families cherish their feathers... What's the matter with the scolding of a shrew and the villain's revenge...? After reading the first few dozen chapters, I always feel that the author writes the plot for fun...

Author, your writing is very good, but there is a plot that keeps repeating. People who look down on the protagonist endlessly appear, and they are slapped in the face endlessly. It makes me tired to read. The characters are different, but the details are all the same. They are all the same, they are all the same, they are all the same, they are the same, they are the same, and they are tortured to death. After reading too much, I feel visual fatigue, too tired and too tired to breathe. Can you change the content of the article? Let the heroine advance. Instead of jumping endlessly at the bottom, let her rise higher, do meaningful things, or enter her real marriage stage. How about?

This book has a single routine. There are people who look down from above and look down on the heroine. They keep trying to make the heroine have a small nose and small eyes. They kill one and make two more. The whole text is endless and disgusting. The plot is simple. It is about being killed, disliked, and then slapped in the face in various ways. I want to ask the author, what is in his stomach? There are no other inks. The format of the article is too low, and the storyline is too simple. If you counterattack a villain, you will offend another person or family behind him, and then be designed to avenge him, and then counterattack again, and then offend those with higher status behind him, and then counterattack again. With just this little information, you can write like this forever! One article can last a lifetime!

It was okay at first, but now I can't stand it anymore... The villains the author cannot design are all brainless and arrogant, which makes the story seem more boring... And the heroine Goldfinger is too big...

Can the author make the logic of the novel more rigorous? The heroine's mother went to the capital after giving birth to her daughter when she was two or three years old. She should be at least 16/7 years old. The emperor came to the throne at a young age. The emperor's son is older than the heroine. The queen mother cares about these difficult years with the imperial concubine. The heroine's mother is with her. So who is the imperial concubine? At that time, the Queen Mother was still the Crown Princess, and the heroine's mother also contributed to the birth of the then Crown Princess's current Taihou. Author, did you put the age range of the heroine's grandmother on the heroine's mother?

The heroine is like Ultraman, constantly winning in battles with others, and is omnipotent! I always feel that the heroine is too powerful and does not fit the social background of ancient times. It is incredible that this book has so many monthly tickets! !

After reading it for a long time, could the author sit down and review the plot? There are too many things that are wrong. The character descriptions and identities are inconsistent. Is Master Xu Er a relative or a concubine? The ages of the characters are messed up, and the two female Taoist soldiers are dull? Killed by the author...

This heroine is too tired from life. I know that writing is to put the protagonist in a millstone and be in danger at all times, so that the plot will be tense and exciting, and it will look gripping. But the heroine in the author's novel doesn't even give a chance to breathe. This one is pressed down, and that one is lifted up again. It's endless. Everyone wants to kill the heroine. The readers are always worried about the heroine. It's really tiring. Author, I have also read your previous books, and the heroines would not have fallen into such a situation. The writing is tense and relaxed, and it does not give the protagonist a chance to breathe, and it also does not give us readers a chance to breathe. You will not suffocate the heroine to death, but we readers will suffocate to death while reading the book. In the end, either we will wait for you to finish writing and then read it and go straight to the ending; or we will abandon the book. Both of these results are not good for your subscription, and will also hurt your enthusiasm for writing and overall income. Please give the heroine a chance to rest, and let us readers take a breath.

This is the most enjoyable ancient novel about rebirth that I have ever read! I like the heroine! !

It's been a long time since I've read a long otaku fight novel, because it's cliche, has no new ideas, and doesn't arouse interest... The book "The Marriage of a Rich Man" that I accidentally opened has kept me in my hands for a long time!

The first half of Miss He Er must be dead! Why did he come back to life in the second half? The second master Xu was a legitimate son in the early stage, but he became a concubine in the later stage. The two maids gifted by the prince who knew martial arts disappeared in the later stage. There is also the second son who died in the later stage. I don't know who he was.

If it weren't for the fact that Shu Huang couldn't stand it, I would have suspected that the author had written it after drinking. He had forgotten to give it to his concubine, and the dead were written as alive. Some characters were forgotten and suddenly appeared later. I have been reading books for decades, and there are some who are not good at writing, but I have never read such irresponsible writing.

They are all county heads. Any prefect's wife can send her to see a doctor at will. She can simply frame her up. I don't understand.

The story is too superficial, and the whole story is top-notch, which makes people too tired to read. In fact, the author is really not suitable for writing about machinations or house fights.

Rubbish writing, I'm speechless. Nowadays, anyone can write novels using any writing style and become a writer to make money.