Elf: Start over Again

Name, character, spirit, characteristics, abilities, combination mode. If you like it, you can join it. I will try my best to include them all.

The writing is smooth and I have done my homework. Except for the fact that the father of Scorpio in the protagonist team is suspected of being a desert dragonfly, I have not found any other flaws. It has great potential and I hope to continue to persevere. (PS: There are too many fighting scenes. I hope the character story can be more fleshed out!)

Why not keep writing?

I'll give you the ticket. One more ticket will be updated every day.

Jiangjiang entered this book with great force and found another beautiful elf novel.

An elf novel that can become a god, I hope the author will work hard

In fact, there are still many advantages to writing about time travel in online games. If it is not updated, it will be difficult to realize the butterfly effect. If you are not good at writing about game outside, don't give the game outside the chance to play The game wants to keep it open, add more "locks" to complete what tasks, what requirements/titles to achieve... And then increase the upper limit (Like how many levels (strength) and above are disobedient and so on) [Another quotient of the immutable stone (type)? Machine?

Doesn't the protagonist know about Diancie?

In fact, this book can be written directly as a fanfic, about modern elves, and more about elf training.

I feel like this book is really well written. I have read a lot of Pokémon fanfics, but this online game theme is the only one that I think is very good. The IQ is online, and the combat is also written very well, but the more important thing is the cultivation of the elf. Like other people have written, to get a high-quality elf, why not do it? Can it be super awesome? Feeling weak x. And I just want to say something. Some people say that the protagonist has no bond or affection for Bumblebee and other elves. I'm so tired that I just want to spray you with salt water to death. Is this a good game? The author has also written that he has some feelings for them. But that positioning is just a game! Do you still want to have sex with a computer person? This is just like the characters we have in comics, movies, and games. Do we like it? Like! But they are not real, and we cannot influence ourselves because of them. I also expressed in the article that if I could not only bring six, I would also like to bring the others. So those who say the protagonist has no emotions must be because they haven't looked carefully. Or you can't understand? It's normal to have feelings but no bond. Put yourself into the game you are playing now. Can you give up your current life for the role of this game? This is simply impossible! ! ! If you say yes, then you must not have been out of society. I used to think about it, what would I do if I could get an elf? It was wonderful before, but now my thoughts are cruel. Real life is beautiful, but sometimes it is also very realistic. Too realistic to believe. So if you think the author's writing is inappropriate, you can reorganize your thoughts and read it again. You may think that this book is still very good. Although I don't know what your evaluation is, in my evaluation, among all the Pokémon I have seen, it is considered to be top-notch. If you still don't understand, please don't leave some stupid words that make people feel stupid. You can address the bad aspects of the book. , But don't write so stupidly that people will think you are a fool. You want to see bonding, friendship, and affection. You can read other books. The protagonist of this book has feelings, but there are many kinds of feelings.

It's very imaginative and well written. But many of the moves and features in it have become too powerful. It can be said that they are two completely different things from those in the game. Whether it is strong or weak depends entirely on the author's setting. It felt very strange when I started watching it. But later on, the difference became bigger and bigger, and it felt like what I was watching was not an Elf fanfic. The sense of immersion is getting less and less.

Don't you think the setting in the first chapter discourages you from quitting? The balance of random birth is so bad! This kind of online competitive game is actually very popular

Do you think there is any chance of getting a mythical beast Tutu Dog? It is specifically written about the skills of mythical beasts. By the way, there is also no upper limit on skills now, so Tutu Dog with full of magical beast skills is so extraordinary. Ahem, the mythical beast Tutu Dog is of no use, its racial value is a flaw┐('~`;)┌

I think the protagonist's team lacks a wet nurse. How about the Geely Egg? For pvp, bring an evolved pyroxene. Don't evolve a happy egg. Evolved pyroxene is useless. Really, the pyroxene auspicious egg is really cancerous in pvp. Should the double defense be doubled or halved. The absolute strongest special shield, bar none, and it can still be used.

In fact, according to the author's self-created characteristics, mysteries and the like, skills have the possibility of specialization. After reading many Pokemon books, many authors like to write about darkness, how difficult skills are to obtain, and how one more skill increases the chance of winning. Then the panel becomes particularly messy. So let's think about it carefully. When elves use skills, it is actually a release of energy. But are skills of the same attribute different? For example, water cannons and water cannons use water, but as the volume of the water cannon increases and the impact becomes stronger, does it become a water cannon? In the same way, the fire-type jet flames, the concentrated energy is emitted in different forms, does it become a big-character explosion? So if the elves specialize in the use of energy, will these skills be integrated and mastered? Similar to how I move my thumbs and my palms, they are actually controlled by the body, and there is no need to subdivide them into details. So, when an elf specializes in the control, shaping, and release of energy, will it also form new skills? The better the operation, the greater the power. I want to condense it into a pointed cone shape, or a hammer, but the effect is different. One is armor breaking and the other is heavy hitting. The secrets of substitutes written by the author and the secrets of invisible rock written by Little Diamond are all about the control of energy.

I want to say that the author forgot this setting? If this setting is to only convert steel-type skills to bear damage for a short period of time when using steel-type skills, most of the damage will be halved according to the attribute table. Under normal circumstances, the damage of small diamonds to normal, flying, insect, fire, and evil systems is halved, and dragon damage is ignored.                                                                                 The damage of the normal, flying, rock, insect, steel, grass, super power, ice, dragon and fairy types will be halved, and the poison damage will be ignored. So to sum up the above, only the fighting type, water type, and electric type can cause normal damage. Although the ground type causes double damage, it is ignored due to the ability to float with telekinesis. So, according to the original settings, there are no shortcomings, most of them are even halved, and two are harmless.

Let's add a new setting, fighting style. Fighting elves are all humanoid, and their power-generating skills are similar to those of the human body. So can they learn techniques like people, boxing, or Shaolin Kung Fu? If we save the concentration time of using moves and instead use flat a, which is an ordinary punch, then can we mobilize the whole body and turn the moves into passive skills?

Also, why doesn't the Dou Li Mushroom learn poison and protection? I think Poison Guard can also be used as the main force in the later stage by adding Poison Healing as a replacement tactic. QAQ

I personally think that the training of Little Diamond is not very good. The people in the guild are as strong as the protagonist without so much training. Mushroom Kangaroo has mastered the mysteries of the king level. Although the basic attributes are a bit poor, is it too weak? Why is he so weak in learning the secrets of the Heavenly King? There is no fundamental gap between the Heavenly Kings and the ordinary Hall Master-level elves, so why are there only four Heavenly Kings in one area? I mentioned earlier how difficult it is to create a tactical system, but here we have one, and each elf has its own system. Isn't it difficult to develop? Is it so easy to combine skills? I feel that the protagonist is weak. Such a huge information advantage does not widen the gap. Even if there is a resource problem, this does not mean that you can recruit monsters to farm in groups. The guild can only provide more information and ordinary resources. Really precious materials still require experts. Unless it is the contribution of NPC forces, most of the contributions are concentrated on one person. But such a guild can not cultivate many experts, and you cannot get high-end things this way. After all, the cultivation of elves is the foundation of your life. You can use it, but it is impossible for you to learn it. Unless you really join, where do those masters come from? Are hall master-level elves so easy to train? If it was just a matter of not changing the stone, wouldn't the stone be monopolized by NPCs long ago?

The most confusing thing is that the guild reserves the venue. Will ordinary players agree? You reserve the place, and I don't know if the harassment is serious enough not to play. Who would be timid in the game?

I would like to ask, why in the beginning of this game, the elves are not mentioned as "dead in battle", but later in the description of the battle with the elves, there are many words such as "slaughter, kill, still alive" and so on.

The protagonist's attitude towards the elves is too game-like. He throws them away when they are no longer useful. It is not very friendly to PM people. Well, the above is just my personal experience. In fact, after looking at it, I think it is quite innovative to combine PM with virtual online games.

There is no communication with the elves at all, just playing games. The elves are all AI.

Come on, author, I'll give you all the recommendation votes

Next bookThe Second Coming of the Elf

I really want to see the protagonist cultivate an ivy snake! 😆

It sucks? Such a good subject, such a good story, but now it's unfinished? Holy shit! What a bastard

This book is actually very interesting and true, but I don't know why it was discontinued.

😒I watched it all in one night, and it ended so suddenly. Like a lump in the throat.

Very good. In fact, the fast pace is the characteristic of the game and also the advantage of this book. The plot is reasonable. It's just that the protagonist disappeared just after meeting the fairy fox. I'm quite looking forward to the league competition 🤔. I hope the author can come up with ideas and continue writing this novel, at least to finish the league 😅