Battle of War

Isn't this the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms? It's a copycat. I hope it can be written better.

Just read the first three chapters and come out and comment. This is an interesting novel. Its highlight is at the beginning, which is covered up by the author's pretentiousness. What about A, B, C and D, gods and humans, and all that nonsense. He underestimated the impatience of modern readers. What should I say in the first few pictures? The stuff is pretty good, but when I see the stuff like A, B, C, and D, I get a little irritated. Unless you are a newbie who has never read it, as long as you have been reading novels for two years, you will not like these things at first. It's not that the writing is bad, since it's a time-traveling game world, it's easy to read from a layman's perspective. It's a pity that the first few chapters of this book were written with great care. I think it has potential and will become a small hit.

Now that the pursuit is more painful, you can read the author's last book to relieve fatigue. What I Want is War. Although there are only 700,000 words and 197 chapters, I have cut it...,,, But the setting of this power system is the same (there used to be such a warrior cloud system, less), Do you want a dog head🐶, can you add finesse, two monthly passes have been given

Unexpectedly, some people who read this book thought that Zhao Kuo took the blame for the king of Zhao. I really didn't expect it. It is normal to lose the Battle of Changping, but with the 400,000 troops exported in the First Battle, only the results of the Huaihai Battle can be compared, right? Besides, if Zhao Kuo's stupid operation in Changping is still corrected, then I think Chang Kaishen's evaluation of being a master of micro management can be truly recognized.

Come on!

The protagonist of the ancient hegemony type is unlucky. If the monarch has no heir, something will happen. Even if the cohesion is not strong, it will also breed ambitions in the ministers. Taking advantage of this development period to solve the lower body matter, choose a princess from the original Qin royal family to stabilize the people in the pass. Of course, other women are also excellent 😁

Came here for the Heaven Sacrifice Ceremony 🙂

When you see the protagonist meeting Han Zhibing, he immediately kneels down and licks him, and then changes hands and hands over the army to his command. Even if he is the god of war, you don't have to kneel and lick him. And if you trust him, your subordinates can't trust him. The comrades who went into battle with the protagonist to kill the enemy and share the joys and sorrows have not yet enjoyed the blessings. They were walking on the road. Suddenly, the king of your family pulled a man on the roadside and said that he will be your immediate boss from now on. You have to listen to him. You will be convinced, even if the king of heaven comes.

Superfluous Modify the name, but it is not completely self-invented, and it follows the original history, and the result is completely different. It is better to use the original name of the historical figure, which can at least give readers a certain sense of resonance.

To be honest, the gap between heavy armor and normal soldiers is too big. No matter how hard the red-coated soldiers try, they can't stop them or kill people, but they can knock them down with one blow. In this way, no matter how good the discipline is and how strong the army is, it will collapse, let alone the peasant uprising soldiers. What's more, the opponent also has war talent. I don't know how to withstand it, so I don't watch it.

Well, in fact, the Dawn talent can be used even if it is modified after the world is unified. Isn't it just that the dawn talent has become the original intention talent? The original intention and talent was not to see whether Li Shi could fulfill his promise to the peasant army and whether the peasant army could stick to their ambition to destroy Qin. What? There is no need to change the method of training soldiers, just add a little more teaching content. (Tactical fallback)

In this kind of book, the military commanders are either original or directly copied from historical military commanders. This method of changing the names of the original historical military commanders into homophones or similar words looks like a stitch monster, which is really awkward. When a military commander appears or a character is mentioned, you always have to think about whether it corresponds to someone in history.

Author, what's the difference between this and a bad ending? You obviously said there were several versions before, but then it disappeared after the grassland was conquered. Don't you know how to move your head? You have set it before. As long as the great empire named Han fights against the Xiongnu, the two brothers Wei Qing and Wqubing will appear. You yourself will change the setting and history, so why don't you change the setting again? You have said that this is a game, so you set the version to change. After beating this version to the second version, the land in the second version has been occupied, so jump directly to the third version. Just set it. After a few years, the second spiritual energy will be revived. Is there any problem in defeating Kushan? Is there any problem with Rome next door? During this period, there will be a little episode about the rise of the barbarians. Finally, we will fight Kushan, then Rome, and then in the middle of the fight, the gates of heaven will open. It will be a version of the game. Let's say, the spiritual energy plummets, and the barbarians take the opportunity to rise, but Rome suppresses it for the time being, and uses the barbarians to fight you. Is there any problem? What's the problem with dragging out two to three million words like this? After you beat the old version of the grassland like this, I was really convinced, okay, this is a game! , If I remember correctly, then you are so realistic in the game. Finally, set Heaven Rising, isn't Rome 666? Let's assume that they drove away Christianity, and then Christianity took the barbarians who originally overthrew Rome to Russia. Later generations called it the Orthodox Church, a paradise and a devil. Is there a problem with this? No problem. If you write another one or two million words, is there any problem? No problem, won't this get better? Then you just ask, what is the version?

It is recommended that the author establish a good relationship with the author of the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms and ask him to help recommend it. This book is very similar to the system of the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms, and it should be liked by many readers of the Three Kingdoms.

Female soldiers were not good. In those days, even if you had a few beggars, you were better than female soldiers. In that era, just for a bite to eat, life was precarious. Never talk about ideals. Generally, students are the first to talk about their ideals. Students are people who can afford food.

Comrades, I just want to know if there are any other good similar novels besides Shen San.

Overall, the writing is okay, but there are some inconsistencies. The prototype of Han Zhibing is Han Xin. Although Han Xin in history did not have much political wisdom, he at least respected Liu Bang. His so-called pride was carelessly said and revealed after being drunk. It's not like Li Shi is mentioned in the article, without any respect. In ancient times, the relationship between the emperor and his subordinates was very strict, and they were very particular about their titles. Therefore, the author did this to show Han Zhibing's pride, which is somewhat unreasonable. Now Han Zhibing in the article gives me the same feeling as Dianxi in Lord of Sinnoh. Dianxi is very strong in Sinnoh, so pig's feet can get along with pets as friends, but it is completely unsuitable for such a historical monarch. To put it bluntly, Han Zhibing joined the army as a soldier. It was only because of his appreciation of pig's feet that he had room for development. The necessary respect is certain, and Li Shi's words will make other generals think of him. . . .

No, what's going on? Sister Baihe stopped updating and you finished the book directly. I originally wanted to rely on you to survive this period, but why did you finish the book directly?

Han Xin's description is inexplicable. Even if he is crazy, he can't describe it like this, right? Tell your superiors directly about yours, tell the protagonist directly about your Legion of Dawn? Did the author write Han Xin as a partner? ? It's too fake to look down on the enemies without even fighting them. Also, it's too fake that the protagonist's subordinates always break through on the battlefield. Can the protagonist's aura radiate? Forget it, forget it, I won't watch it, even if I want to, I feel uncomfortable watching it.

Overall, it's good, but the author made a funny statement, saying that Bai Qi surrounded and annihilated Zhao Kuo, and the author could do it without any shame. You must know that the Zhao army is stronger than the Qin army. Even if Zhao Kuo took over, it was a mess, but the Qin army itself was not as large as the Zhao army. It would be difficult to encircle more with less, not to mention the countless number of breakouts by the Zhao army. Author, please check how many generals died to defend the Qin army. Qin and Zhao finally relied on one breath to hold on. If Zhao Kuo persisted for a few days, the loser would be Bai Qi. This is why Bai Qi killed 400,000 Zhao troops in a trap. Both armies were out of food and both were on the verge of collapse. The massacre not only saved food, but also allowed the soldiers to vent, otherwise Xiaoying would happen at any time.

I'm so confused. Is this a time traveling to another world, a different world in a game, or game data?

Who is better, the ultimate body Li Shi or the perfect body Chen Xi?

It looks really tiring, with all kinds of weird names changed.

Has the author ever considered writing a hero-like genre, fantasy + war?

After reading a few chapters, I don't know what it is, and there is no introduction at the beginning. The game still travels through time...

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Is there any difference between this one and the previous one? Repeat repeat repeat

Throughout history, there have not been many commanders who could command an army of 400,000 people.

What's going on? Why did it end? If you can't finish it normally, why write a novel? {"NickName":"~~~~~~~~·","UserId":216191937}