The Pavilion Master of the Myriad Worlds

Come on, author, I really like reading it, Infinite Stream, All Heavens Stream, I am used to watching the opening chapters of Yitian Slaying Dragon, Lu Xiaofeng, Swordsman, Fengyun and so on. I am really bored. You, Zhu Xian, have a good start. Will the next world be Dou Po? But according to your writing method of Zhu Xian, I guess you are not going to follow the original plot. I look forward to it. Anyway, don't write it randomly. I can see it. You are a real person and not a boss vest, so don't write emotional scenes. It's not bad, but it's poisonous if it's not well written. At present, this book is barely readable by veterans, and newcomers can accept it because of the invincible flow, but they are afraid of some poisonous points...

Feeling very tired. It looks very tiring. It is full of the protagonist's one-man show, the protagonist's complaints, and the protagonist's various thoughts. Are you writing about the protagonist's inner story?

Where did the original world come from? "Buddha is the Tao"?

My personal opinion: This novel is an inner training of a powerful self-centered person

The writing is really messy, I can't understand what's written, there's too much inner drama, I've read 30 pictures from the first chapter but I still can't figure out what's written.

To be honest, my head hurt just after reading this book. It was so confusing. There were all kinds of bugs, the inner drama of the protagonist, and the logic was inconsistent. The comparison of various combat powers in the book was more scary than the various boasts. So I gave up after reading the book. It really hurt my head and I needed to rest. After flipping through the table of contents, I completely lost interest and started writing randomly without an outline.

The protagonist's behavior is a bit hard to understand, but the details are hard to explain. It's a bit hard to understand what went wrong. ╯╰I feel uncomfortable.

As the title says, Doupo has been written and will be published slowly. Collect the world below. In addition, book friends can set their own characters. Don't be too strong, otherwise it will be too late. Format: Name + Title Realm Introduction and character setting.

I saw it was on the shelves and didn't want to read any more. The author's writing is good, but the protagonist's sense of involvement is really not strong. He often introduces a series of explanations and thoughts from the perspective of an observer. There is little interaction between the characters and it feels very bland, just like reading someone's diary.

My personal feeling is that it was a bit uncomfortable to watch, and I can't say where I felt uncomfortable. There was nothing wrong with the plot, but the text was very uncomfortable to read 😆