Seeking Immortality in the Mortal World

Author, when are you going to change this old habit? The virtual Earth scene was getting really good at the beginning, then it jumped straight to the first level of reality, completely disrupting the plot. I basically skipped through the first level of reality, and it was getting better when I saw him mastering the power of the final catastrophe, but then he was back to being someone else's grandfather, and a wise one at that. Did you really have no plot outline at all?

It doesn't matter, I understand everyone else, but what you write is exactly what I want to read. I said I'd give you a reward. I've only read your "Lord of All Spirits," not the others, but I still support you. Keep it up! But why haven't I seen any new books from you? I was thinking that if you had a new book, I'd give you a big boost during the Chinese New Year.

You're incredibly persistent, but it's obvious you haven't systematically studied how to write a novel.

Is the Kunlun Mountains truly desolate and uninhabited? Are there deep forests and remote mountains? Shouldn't the author go and explore some of the most remote and uninhabited mountains in China? Otherwise, how can he write this book?

We've already conducted on-site investigations of everything, let's investigate the universe too!

It's a mess, with repeated chapters, out of order, and just plain writing.

Author, how about a fanfiction of "All Spirits" for your new book?

Everything became a mess after the protagonist became the system.

At first glance, it felt like time was passing by a little too quickly. Then, when the human empire came out, unlike in other books where they were suppressed (without any comparison), the human race here was directly the overlord of the universe, a level seven civilization, and they were all very long-lived, and it's even possible that they could live forever.

New book announcement: the first three chapters were so weak! 🤔