Seeking Immortality in the Mortal World

Author, when will you change this old habit? At the beginning, the virtual earth felt better and better, and I jumped directly to the first level of reality. The plot was suddenly disrupted. I basically skipped the first level of reality. After seeing the mastery of the final disaster power, I felt better again. Suddenly I became someone else's grandfather, or was it a wise person? Your plot really has no outline at all.

It doesn't matter, you and I understand everyone else, but what you wrote is what I want to read. I said I will reward you. I have only read your Lord of All Spirits, but not the others, but I still support you. Come on, but why can't I see your new books? I originally wanted to say that if there are new books, I will give them to you during the Chinese New Year.

You are an emperor of perseverance, but it is obvious that you have not systematically learned how to write novels.

Is Kunlun Mountain deserted? Are there deep mountains and old forests? Is the author going to visit the uninhabited mountains across the country? Otherwise, how would he write this book?

We have conducted on-the-spot inspections in all aspects, so let's also conduct an inspection of the universe!

Messy, repeated chapters, out of order, random writing

Author, do you want a fan of Wanling for your new book?

Changing from the protagonist to the system is a mess.

Did it feel like time went by a little fast at first? After the Human Empire came out, it was not suppressed like in other books (no pulling). The human race here was directly the overlord of the universe, a seventh-level civilization, and everyone was very capable of living. Even immortality should be possible, right? This kind of time scale, the time is written in terms of several years, which is okay. I'm just curious, the human race is so awesome now, the Keen tribe was beaten back, the Noah tribe has all the dimensional demons, the protagonist is still learning, and then there is a race war? There have been several final disasters. Should this also be a crisis? But I read, heat death, humans are capable of dealing with it, so what follows.

New book report, the golden three chapters are so good~🤔