A Game of Thrones Revolution

The characters feel underdeveloped, and the plot is a bit strange. It's hard to tell what the author is trying to express. Was the writing so obscure intentional, or did the author not handle it well, or was the author just indulging in self-indulgence without realizing it?

Why abandon the girl just because Daenerys doesn't want to get married? Why not change Daenerys' fate while trying to break the cycle of reincarnation?

Have you gone too far with your self-congratulation? What's the point of having a God's-eye view? The portrayal of the characters' inner thoughts is too simplistic and overtly stereotypical. A chronological account of the writing process. So what if it's promiscuity? This kind of behavior still exists in Europe and America, and it's legal in many developed countries.

Why do writers of Game of Thrones need to have read the original books to understand what the author is writing? And there are just too many plot points the author added himself.

Another point is that I feel the author is just indulging in self-indulgence. I read 14 chapters, and the main character appeared in less than 2,000 words.

I only read one chapter, and I don't know what you were thinking. The beginning felt very strange. You said if your grades aren't good, you should look at what you've written before talking about anything else.

When he's happy, he indulges in self-congratulation, aiming to make people unable to understand him; when he's unhappy, he rambles on, aiming to make people not want to watch him. Why do you write books? Why is it recommended on Qidian?

It's written in a very messy way; I don't know what the author's central idea is.

The protagonist could have easily swept through, but instead chose to make things difficult for himself; is he living in a dream?

Giving away a girl at the start? You think you're not miserable enough?