Private Sleepwalking in the Heavens

I don't even know what supported the author to write? There is no distinction between primary and secondary, full of poisonous points, and the whole article is full of water.

The beginning of this book was pretty good, but then it started to change. From the time I returned to the university dormitory from the Qing Dynasty, the plot became uninteresting. The protagonist turned out to be a college student, and the plot turned into an urban campus romance drama. There were a few episodes about selling antiques interspersed in the middle, which was still fascinating. , And then there's nothing to watch... Your theme is time travel (private sleepwalking) and then it turns directly into urban romance. You said that it has been realistic for at least 100 chapters. If you don't talk about other things, you can at least write something about both sides. You are going to break the rhythm and have already (deviated from the outline) 😅

It's too watery. I either eat or drink every day. If you want to fart, write a few chapters.

Can it be less watery? Who wants to read so many chapters of your modern city? We all watch it just to see the time-travel plot. Author, are you really out of your mind?

There were about a hundred chapters written between the first and second time travels. Why not go into history or urban classification? If the water is so serious, prepare to write thousands of chapters.

Can the author please please try to reduce the number of ****** symbols when writing? It's a bit annoying to hear a string of ****** every time I listen to the novel by voice. I spend most of the day listening to the novel with headphones on, and suddenly I hear a string of ******. This makes it easy to give up on this novel~

That's how it's written. I'm used to seeing them worn back and forth all the time. That's fine It's like fast food. The more you watch it, the less you want to watch it.

The author has no idea what readers like to read and thinks it's pretty good

If the full score is 10, this book can be rated around 7 based on the free chapters I have read so far. My IQ is online and my writing skills are pretty good. It's time to make some suggestions 1. The theme is unclear If you want to write a type of infinite time travel, try to cover the urban plot. If the focus is on the city, then try to pass through the time-travel plot. If you are confident in your writing power, the main lines are up to you. 2. There are too many female supporting roles in the game I can roughly tell that the author wants to create a protagonist with a transcendent mentality (invisible pretense) through contrast and foil, but it is a bit deliberate. You can play as much as you want in the game; there are too many scenes of female supporting roles in school. The reason why the supporting role is a supporting role is because he talks less and gets his lunch early. Personally, I feel that the main problems lie in these two aspects, and I am not trying to find fault with you. I hope that the more I write, the better!

The poison has penetrated into the bone marrow, and the wandering across Chengdu is a waste 🙏🙏🙏

I'm really convinced. If you want to be dedicated, just be more focused. If you want to be scumbag, don't procrastinate. If you want to write a harem novel, just write a harem novel. It's uncomfortable to watch this. Some things are just out of character. If the author were the protagonist, would you maintain your current situation? If you want to be a scumbag, just go ahead. If you don't want to be a scumbag, you should make it clear to others! I can't stand the water.

When did you travel through time? Did you buy that piece of jade?

It's such rubbish, yet I still recommend it. You still have the nerve to ask for votes, who gave you the courage. Liang Jingru?

On the one hand, after making money, they say that money is just a string of numbers in a bank card, and they must be pursued spiritually. On the other hand, they keep fighting back and make money blindly. Wouldn't it be nice to waste time trying to pick up girls and show off? Use this time to hire experts for one-on-one teaching, invest in scientific research, and learn about cutting-edge science. God has given you such a unique condition. You neither want to save the nation from disaster nor explore a new socialist line. You only want to get rich. You are short-sighted and the pattern is too small. To be honest, I feel that the country's education has failed. The new youth are indifferent to the destiny of the country and the nation. They pursue money and material enjoyment excessively. They have no spirit of exploration for science, knowledge, themselves and the destiny of the nation. They are all flowers in the greenhouse without mission and responsibility.

It's actually an ambiguous novel. The main character in the 900th chapter is still a virgin. It's scary.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I really can't stand it. I was optimistic about this novel at first, just for daily life But later on, the protagonist's character seems to be indecisive. The real world is unclear, why does he keep selling antiques, and the plot progress is too slow. To put it nicely, it is daily life, but no matter how I look at it, it is still a diary. Traveling through the world is also subject to various constraints from people. Generally speaking, people who travel through time and space want to read interesting articles. You have been talking about almost three hundred chapters, but you are still talking about it Oh, I gave up the book. I feel that I can't stand it if I read it again I hope no one will say, you are so awesome that you write such words! ! Only a fool would say that

I'm so embarrassed to ask for votes. I've gone through 20 chapters and 50 chapters in reality. The questions are of no use at all. The back and forth is just a nonsense. I can't stand it anymore. You are stupid, you continue to be stupid, 👍

It's so disgusting. It's ambiguous with so many women and it's over a thousand chapters. It's very traditional to write male protagonists. Later, it's not the same as having several women, and they are both serious and established. Either you have a single female lead or you have a harem. It's disgusting on both sides. In addition, I wrote so many female supporting characters in the previous plot and didn't accept it. It's really disgusting, disgusting, disgusting.

You are really awesome. It's almost a thousand chapters and I still haven't figured out the first world. Where are the promised heavens? ? ?

I always felt something was wrong when I saw the protagonist doing business, but I couldn't say it for a few times. It wasn't until I saw the protagonist pretending to be a bitch about the rich second generation that he didn't have everything he wanted, that I realized that something was wrong. The protagonist was not doing antique business. Antique business doesn't do that. Take a TV show I've seen before. How did the former antique dealer do business? When a customer came to buy jade, the boss brought a pair of ancient jade and told the customer that there were only two pieces in the world. The customer was very satisfied and offered 10,000 yuan to buy it. However, the boss picked up one of the pieces and smashed it on the ground and smashed it. The remaining piece was immediately bought by the customer at several times the price, because this piece cost The value of the antiques has skyrocketed. If people like the protagonist are able to get whatever they want, the result is that they cannot sell for the price. The buying point of the antique industry is scarcity and high-end. Anyone can buy it, and you can get discounts if you buy more. You are a supermarket. If the protagonist is short of money, there is nothing you can do about it. But is the protagonist short of money? No. Oops, antiques are sold as diamonds, but the protagonist sells them as gold. If the price is clearly marked, he can still get a discount. It's okay for the protagonist to buy more of the not-so-high-end products on the market and put them on the market, but if he sells rare goods, others will only think that the protagonist is stupid and has too much money. He doesn't know how to make money even if he has money.

Let's not go through any procedures. One thing is that the protagonist is more or less suffering from cerebral palsy. He wants to be a scumbag, but he doesn't have the guts. He looks like a mentally retarded person. The teacher eats and lives in other people's homes, and even shows off his face, and then turns around and calls them scumbags. She can do it. The heroine is not sure yet, so what about Siya's indecision? She really looks like a fucking scumbag, either you agree or don't sneeze at others, and you still say that you haven't even revealed your horoscope, I feel sick →_→, and Qingqing is even more so, the front looks like she doesn't like to talk to others, but the back is rich, hum, you talk about coveting other people's bodies, but in fact you are coveting other people's money, and aren't you fucking Zhu Tianwen? Damn it, you fucking city, at least 90% of it, right? This is terrible for me to see, and you have posted more than 700 pictures. You are really like a heifer flying on a plane. You are so awesome.

What a chicken! ! This book is clearly an advertisement for urban romance novels interspersed with astronomy! It has nothing to do with the heavens at all!

Why do you like to write such ambiguous articles? Do you still think readers are noobs? Even if you are ambiguous for more than a thousand chapters, the man is still a virgin, and you write about a woman who is ambiguous with a man. It's really disgusting. Also, why did the male protagonist not accept the personal maids at other times and gave them away? It's really disgusting. How can you write such a novel and engage in such a disgusting plot? This disgusts readers.

Rubbish, it was okay in the dream, but in reality it was written like an idiot!

Chapter 380: I'm still practicing reversing the car into the warehouse. I can imagine that Shennong couldn't stand it either.

Damn it, I finally know what those people who read pirated novels and come to the main site to scold are doing! It's impossible not to scold this author! Not relieved! Write all the astronomical essays as urban essays, and you can do it in urban areas. You just keep writing day by day! It feels much more comfortable to breathe out!

I can't stand it anymore, I'm dragging my feet and engaging in ambiguity, I'm crazy.

Having such a great opportunity and spending a lot of time having romantic affairs with various women, do you think you are Jia Baoyu?

It looks quite tiring. I have been writing for so long in the late Qing Dynasty and I have made a lot of money. Why can't I develop into martial arts? I don't know that all great power belongs to myself. I obviously have the conditions to become stronger and I have enough money. Why not use the power of the big dream to become stronger and protect myself? In the real world, those with power can kill him casually, and anyone with more connections than the protagonist can manipulate him. The protagonist just exchanges antiques for money, and it can only be exchanged for temporary money. What kind of connections can he make, and what capital can he have to get more money and connections? Is it stupid for others not to check there are so many antiques? In the world of the late Qing Dynasty, it didn't matter what connections or backers you had, as long as the people in power asked you for money, you had to give it, otherwise you would have nothing to fear from others. . . . . . . And the most important point is, what does the protagonist want to do, what does he want to get, at least he has a goal to strive for, and it feels like he can live in it for the rest of his life. . . . The writing is good, but the writing is too watery. I just write urban romances. It's really tiring to read such a big story.