The Great Salvation of All Heavens and Worlds

Let's not talk secretly. The city where we do this is really beautiful.

Qidian can no longer afford to play. It has been two months and I can't draw a single coin every day for experience points. I no longer have any sense of expectation. I must win at least once a week. It has been two months and I haven't got a hair.

Regarding Zhao Meilan, there are too many repeated descriptions, right? Author, originally 2 chapters a day were enough. Since the beginning of the copy of "Everything is Very Good", except for the lack of Zhao Meilan in the early stage, whenever there is her in the later stage, basically they have to talk about why she married Su Daqiang and why she hates Su Mingyu. It's almost enough to say these once.

I have been chasing pirated versions. I saw the recent update of Hunting Ground and came to watch the original version. I hope the ending will no longer be Luo.

Come on, update. Updates have been a bit slow lately.

I have a question. I haven't read "The Best of Us", but the book says it started in 2003, and in Chapter 8, the protagonist came up with the song "My Future Is Not a Dream," and this song was released in 1988. At that time, the original author of "The Best of Us" was only one year old. Is there any explanation in the original work that this is not a time and space?

There are so few updates. Is there any similar novel like this? It's not about fighting and killing.

It's very interesting. I want to write more about cities. I really want to read it.

After reading the beginning, I thought it was okay, not too toxic, and the author is probably not a newbie.

I like the first volume 🌹🌹 The writing in the subsequent volumes is also very good, I just hope that the author will write more chapters about urban youth TV series.

Can you write about Hotel Del Luna!

Excuse me, Little Star, where is Chapter 15 of (The Silent Truth) 🤔🤔🤔 Do you want to make it up as soon as possible! ! Also, could your update be faster? Urgent! Make! It's! 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

I've been reading this book for a long time. The first few volumes seemed pretty good, and the stories and writing were pretty good. It's just a little watery, and the progress of the story doesn't advance at all in the next three or five chapters, or some irrelevant things are written in too detail. It's understandable that the author wants this to be a more complete story, which makes people feel more involved, but most people are willing to spend money to read it. Sometimes writing it in too detail will make people feel that you are skimping on the word count, which affects the reading experience. Finally! I quite like the story, and I hope the author will work hard and continue writing without becoming a eunuch! ! !

The author can write less about martial arts, fairy tales and the like! There are so many books about Qidian Zhutianliu Martial Arts and Xianxia! I'm tired of looking at it! You can write more urban dramas! TV series like In the Name of the People, Bloody Romance, and the like! More refinement! Adoption! Monthly tickets and recommended tickets have been given out!

Dude, it's 7.5 Million words long. To say it's as plain as water is just a compliment. It's not exciting at all. Once it reaches its climax, it's all over in one stroke. I'm convinced.

You tell me that in ancient times, especially during the Da Meng Dynasty, the escort officials didn't want their sons to study and take the imperial examinations? They poisoned them to death. The Ming Dynasty was dominated by the gentry, but a bodyguard agency with no status was regarded as a low-class coolie in the eyes of the gentry. Opposing his son to take the imperial examination...

I always like to write a bunch of irrelevant things, with a lot of original plots. I often don't see the original characters in dozens of chapters. If you like to write original things so much, why do you write fanfics?

It's been writing for so long. The protagonist has lived for so long, arriving in a new world every time. It's still the same as when I traveled through time. No growth at all. A chapter can be written on a trivial matter, and one page is extremely short. The protagonist has lived so long and lived in vain. No progress at all. Not to mention the pattern, the protagonist is rubbish.

. . . This book is so awkward. I don't even know what to say. Several times I watched the beginning and then got more and more bored and ended up skipping the entire copy. I have never read a complete copy. Too bloated and boring. For example, the copy of Ode to Joy I am reading now has no twists and turns until chapter 40, which is bland. The only possible conflict is Qu Xiaoxiao's decoration. The author just mentioned it and then put it down. I don't know who the author of this copy is going to use to create conflicts and make the plot tense. . To put it bluntly, this article is as boring as boiled water. There is no conflict and no ups and downs of the plot. It is like I am not reading a novel but a running account. . Finally, the result of writing an urban copy is like this. . I don't mean to show off, but I'm speechless if you give me the entire diary. Okay, drop it again. . This is the second time I have abandoned this book. .

Damn, I lost the book for a few months. I picked it up because of the lack of books. I subscribed to the latest chapter and read it. The author still hasn't improved in writing. With a theme like yours, what we readers want to see is a story that is different from the plot line of the original work. We don't want you to follow the plot line of the original work. You follow the original work. Why don't I read the original work? You have traveled in time, and the plot has basically not changed. What are you doing in time? I have been following your book since you started it, and gave up several times in the middle. It is because you always follow the original work. This book shortage, I picked it up and read it, thinking that the author's writing power has improved. After all, there are millions of words, but I didn't expect that the writing power has not improved. You are always writing about the heavens. Follow the original work without your own changes and thoughts about the original work. How can you become popular? For example, the book next door (Wandering in the Heavens) followed the original work like you at the beginning. Not many people read it. The style on the right is directly adapted, and various plot lines are adapted to make people laugh. I directly became an LV5 author from LV1 because there are so many people subscribing to it. Now that book has almost 5 million words. For That guy is still writing because there are so many people reading it, and I am also subscribing to that one. I have said all this, just to tell you that with a theme like yours, you need to write a story in which you change the plot line of the original work, and the author's analysis of the original work. It is not based on a running account of how you followed the original work. Forget it, I won't go into detail. I just want to give you an opinion. Let the author think about it for himself. After all, you can write millions of words, and you are also a perseverant author. I sincerely hope you can become a LV5 author, come on I still remember reading a book (The Strongest Shopkeeper in History), that book was the biggest change to various original works, and then the author became LV5. The author must have his own analytical views on all kinds of books. Finally, I would like to give you a piece of advice: don't follow the plot line of the original work when it comes to themes about heaven and earth. You will definitely not be able to become popular.

The child of my cousin's family felt like a rebirth. My cousin is from Chongqing. She has been wanting to have a child for 7 years. After getting married for 7 years, both of them have had physical examinations and both are fine. I have tried all kinds of local methods but they are still not pregnant I found an old Taoist priest later. The Taoist looked at it and said that I am destined to have a child, just wait. Then last autumn, I finally got pregnant, and the family was happy and took good care of them. , I did a color ultrasound two days ago and found that the child had abnormalities, and the mouth and nose had been moving Various tests were done, but no reason could be found. Later, I found an old Chinese medicine doctor. The old Chinese doctor said that the child had something on his mind in his previous life, and his mouth was actually talking all the time Later, I found a professional to watch the color ultrasound video, and while recording the mouth shape, I realized that what the child said was "Update soon, when will it be updated, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up."

Give me more cum, in the name of my family, Ling Xiao

I bought 500 points just to post a review. I just opened this book and I was looking forward to it. Some of the participating worlds have not been written in other books. I have not read the original author, and the title is also very big. It seems to be more serious. Then for the first world, I deliberately read the movie (The Best of Us). Then I found out that the book was written about a TV series and went to read it again. After that. . I couldn't stand the book anymore. The protagonist has to break up a true love in order to save the unrequited love of a rich second generation who can live well without studying. However, the male protagonist originally had good grades but failed to go to college due to his mother's illness and family problems. In the end, all that was left was love. The author poached this love for a rich second generation who could live well without studying. I originally thought that maybe the original protagonist would be compensated later, such as helping to pay for tuition fees after becoming friends with the original protagonist, but nothing happened. The first class of the original protagonist never appeared again. I wondered whether this book was a great salvation or a great evil.

The protagonist travels through so many worlds. But every time I go to a new world, I don't act like someone who has experienced so many worlds. You can learn from Wang Yan. Look at how well others Wang Yan handles it.

You want to be new and different, you want to write something that no one else has written before, you just think it's just you, readers don't think so, how many people have watched the just-finished Soul of Chess, let's look at the results! You have chosen a downhill road. A novel worth more than 500,000 yuan has better results than you. I feel a little unhappy that the book I have been pursuing for so long has to be scrapped. Come on!

What a failed novel. The author wrote it very casually.

I can't figure it out, shouldn't it be to save them and make them have no regrets in life by dressing up as that person's friend or simply dressing up as that person's golden finger? If you directly dress up as that person, then everything you do when you are that person actually has nothing to do with the original owner! For example, in the first world, Lu Xinghe wanted to be with the heroine, so Li Jie should be a friend or a golden finger to match them up. Now Li Jie has directly transformed into Lu Xinghe, so this so-called compensation for regret is a joke, because Lu Xinghe is still not with the heroine, and it is Li Jie who really pursues the heroine and is with her! It is actually Li Jie who enjoys this "perfect life without regrets". This has nothing to do with Lu Xinghe. It's like Lu Xinghe said I hope I can make up for my regrets, and then Li Jie said okay, I will take over your body, let your family and friends think of me as you, chase the woman you like, and accomplish what you want to do, then you will have no regrets! Is this something that humans can do? ? ? You call taking away everything from others and using their bodies and family life as salvation? ? I can't understand this logic! Your rescue is what drives people into the abyss, right? You see how angry I am. How shameless do you have to be to call this act a rescue? ? ? ? ? ?

It doesn't matter if you skip the world you wrote. The main reason is that I prefer mortals, and your biography of mortals cultivating immortals is inexplicable. The spiritual world has enough resources for body refining, and then you can refine elixir roots or weapon spirit roots later, but it is said that the upper limit of body refining is the late Nascent Soul stage. You can turn to cultivating immortality. When you become a mortal, you will not follow the plot or take opportunities. It doesn't matter if it doesn't do this or that, it doesn't matter if the writing is interesting, whether it follows the plot or not is up to you. Are you here to explore specifically how to make mortals cultivate immortality? , You said you were baffled, but after exploring for more than ten chapters, it turned out to be how to make mortals have spiritual roots. Spend n many resources to get a 5 spiritual root. , If I can't find it, what's the point? Lin Geng said that the setting of Mortal is very important in the early stage. It can be solved in the spiritual world, let alone the fairy world. If you say you want to popularize it, you are not just trying to popularize it. And if you have a higher realm, more resources, and more knowledge, then you can study it. As soon as you start building the foundation, you should go to junior high school. Hey, I didn't go to school. Einstein also had to have a certain amount of knowledge to make various conjectures. You can't do it here, I'm about to start elementary school. Anyway, mortals just write inexplicably.

Do you want spiritual energy to be revived again? ? ? Can't we just live an ordinary life in the main world? ? ? ? I'm really afraid that these spiritual energy will revive, and I want everyone to be like a dragon, and I want this and that. I'm crazy. Can't the main world be just a place to rest and relax?

What are these recent articles about? They are tasteless.