Qin Dynasty Novelist

The most stupid way of writing is, what era are we in now, still using semi-white classical Chinese format, even if it is used very smoothly, doesn't it just highlight your literary talent? But don't forget, most of your novels are limited to ordinary people who are literate. If it is too high, you will dare to outrun most people. By the way, I also like to quote classics. It's disgusting. I think most people won't read it. So the purpose of this is not only to highlight the literary flair, but also to make up the word count.

First of all, I personally feel that it is very uncomfortable to read such an ancient and in vain writing style. A lot of meaningless stuff is forced in, and there isn't much substantive stuff in each chapter. Secondly, there are some shortcomings: 1. The author makes the protagonist grow too fast, and there is no fun point of defeating monsters and upgrading. 2. Is there an emphasis on highlighting the protagonist's foresight, and is there no point of pretentiousness or slap in the face? 3. Whether you take the road of farming development or not, there will be no sense of accomplishment. The above things may not seem clichéd, but I feel that no matter how they change, the core of online writing is still these, just in different ways of expression. At the same time, the presence of the protagonist and the characterization of other characters are not high enough. What you are writing feels more like a historical narrative than a novel. I think fan fiction is about change, rather than being a bystander. Otherwise, why don't I read the history books and original works? Finally, online writing is a fast-paced era. Even if you will be very exciting later, the lengthy early stage will make many people give up directly. This will inevitably affect your grades and indirectly affect your creative mood. Later, you will not be in the mood to write even if you think about it. Remarks: The above only represents my personal opinion and is for reference only. The actual author is very good at writing like this, come on! Keep it up! You will find that the more difficult things are yet to come!

The second day of dawn saves people from hundreds of families. He also said that they are all chivalrous people. It's funny. What kind of chivalry have they done? Is this Qin violent? Those who disrupt the Qin Kingdom are this group of people. They ignore the people of the world for their own personal friendship. The most important thing is that they still know the consequences of doing so and still do it. Chu Nan Gong could have been killed long ago and left alone. From the time the protagonist came to Qin, you basically didn't change much. It took more than 1,800 chapters to reach the destruction of the city, and Tianming immediately became a giant of the Mohist family. Haha, I don't know how many times I will block the Baijia and Mo family because of Tianming's identity! Later, it is estimated that Songhai→Yu Ji will appear. I liked it before but now I hate it! What you wrote makes me feel that it's almost the same whether there is a protagonist or not. It's better to re-watch the anime and slowly get used to it. There will be enough for you to finish one or two thousand chapters later. How many subscriptions will you have left in the end? Goodbye

The writing is very good. I can only say that the protagonist described is qualified as a Taoist figure. However, as a protagonist in a story with passion and desire for change, I think there is a question mark. I haven't read much, but I have read more than 500 chapters. The plot is in line with the setting of this book. It seems that something has changed, but it seems that nothing has changed. The ending of related characters is ice cold and cool. The interaction between the characters reveals coldness and ruthlessness between the lines. The various behaviors of the protagonist seem to be psychological activities, thinking about helping others and taking practical actions, but also reveal coldness and inconsistency. I don't know what the author wants to express to readers in the full text, but to be honest, I ask the author not to write this kind of fanfic in the future. It's not that I'm embarrassed or a troll, I just think that the author should consider switching to historical facts or war literature. The subject matter should be passionate or intrigue. When I read the author's masterpiece on a bleak autumn night, I felt cold and biting.

After reading Chapter 180, I somehow lost the motivation to continue reading 😅

Fortunately, hahaha, I really like this kind of thing. What kind of woman do you want? Wouldn't it be nice to give women away? Seeing them happy makes me happy.

Qin State, those disciples from hundreds of schools of all kinds come and go whenever they want, and they are discovered and they leave as soon as they want? You can still run away after killing people in the ancestral land of Qin. This is really like reading a book without thinking, and it is really a big water comparison.

I can't stand it anymore, so I have to complain: First, I started from the preface to the last chapter. After reading it for so long, I was really exhausted. I can't stand it if I keep writing like this. A little Chu Nan Gong appeared for the first time in Two Hundred and Fifty-One Chapter, and he was not dead until Chapter One Thousand Seven Hundred and Sixty-Six! ! ! ! Others were very decisive, either to kill them all, or to save one life for later, but none of them could live as long as they did. I'm really convinced. Second point, I think it's okay to have a harem. But you can write hundreds of words about our ambiguous feelings, which is too embarrassing. What I want to see is Qin Shi, not how he catches girls. Third point, please, can you please stop reintroducing the protagonist? For those of us readers who have read for so long, we already know his personality, code name, and title. Your constant re-pasting in the form of exclamations makes reading really boring. The summary is that it is too watery, and the water has reached a certain height. It is best for you to go back and read your own writing to see if it is verbose. The rest of the journey was not enjoyable at all. I'm really tired. If this continues, I'm really going to give up the book 😒😒

After reading the free chapters, I can't help but admire that the author is really a water king. As a fan of Qin Shi Mingyue, he just described the plots of the original works again and again. The so-called Zhou Qing, the protagonist, feels like he is from the same journey. Except for the protagonist's appearance in a few chapters when writing the book, I don't know what kind of messy plot he is writing. Who in Qin Shi Mingyue doesn't know that Gan Luo finally becomes a star soul? How can you write Dongjun as a monster? No wonder eight million words can't even be considered a high-quality product. Calculating based on the number of free chapters, if there is no change after paying, at least five million words will be lost.

After reading more than 300 chapters, the protagonist suddenly changed his temperament, as if he were a stallion, and there was no sign of the change. And it doesn't match the character of the protagonist in the early stage either.

The protagonist travels back to ancient times to open a nursing home

I saw chapter ninety-five. Other books are about other people's realms being imaginary. Your book, including the protagonist, is all imaginary. How powerful and intelligent you described the protagonist before. What happened when Jing Ke assassinated Qin? If someone is caught and imprisoned without first abolishing his martial arts, the result will be a plot that is popular in TV dramas. Also, where is your mental power and spiritual consciousness? Jishu's blessing is ten thousand meters. I'm underestimating it. Why don't you use the spirit stone to directly find the assassin hiding in the city? Don't tell me that you can't find it. If you can really drag it, just drag it hard. It's hard water. I regret not reading the comments. It's a waste of my spare time.

When I first read Chapter 50, I had two big problems. One was typos and too many words and sentences that didn't make sense. The other was my lack of literary skills. Don't think about using half-written dialogues. I suggest you refer to mysterious anime dialogues. There are also some paragraphs in one chapter that I suspect were written using a novel generator. Could it be that I uploaded them without reading them again after writing them? The problem is obvious.

Just a little less classical Chinese, just chapters and chapters. I'm not here to learn Chinese.

I want to ask, how old is the main character now? The writing is as mysterious as fortune telling, or is he just a kid running around?

The author has never read "Tai Sheng Shui", a Taoist classic excavated from the tomb of Chu in Qu Yuan's time. It talks about the creation of heaven and earth, which is really far from your Xuanqing "Creation of Heaven and Earth".

Yeah, it's very much like "Qin Shi Mingyue"

I want to know if Ying Zheng knows Xuan Qing's identity? If you know, in which chapter?

I felt that the setting at the beginning was inappropriate. There was no paper in this era, and the novel was very long. How could it be spread? How many bamboo slips are there for a novel? I am speechless.

It was okay before, but now it's too slow and watery, and it's already good if there are still people watching 😅

Why is the front part so out of context? 409 Suddenly becomes 412. Where did the middle part go? Why did you spend money to see it like this?

Keep a low profile, we won't drive! Today I encountered another author who was banned. His description was very obscure, and as a result, one chapter was banned. One kid thought it was a chapter error and thought the report was an error, so he clicked on it, and then...

Because it is really rotten and watery. The protagonist is the younger brother of the First Emperor and the most loyal supporter of the Qin Dynasty. When meeting someone who is anti-Qin, a normal person would want to kill him, but the protagonist does not want to. He wants to capture the person alive and then throw him into a prison or a prison car to go through the complete process. But this is the world of martial arts, so there must be people who rob prison cars, rob execution sites, or escape from prison, so I don't know how many famous scenes like this appear in this book: Xiaobing: Oh no! Someone attacked the prison! Rescued xx! Qin General: Go and report to your lord! Protagonist: That doesn't make sense, I'll go take a look By the time the protagonist arrives at the scene, there are only a pile of corpses of Qin soldiers left. When the protagonist encounters this person for the second time, if he catches him, he will not kill him. He will destroy his sword in front of him and give him a heavy mental blow. Then this person was rescued again, and then found a famous craftsman to make a sword, and then made trouble in the world. This is the third time I met this man. After defeating him, I still refused to kill him and destroyed his Dantian. I thought that you would never be able to make trouble this way. But he will still be rescued, and then find a miracle doctor to refine a pot of elixirs to restore his power. The fourth time... The fifth time... The most dangerous occupation in this book: Qin soldiers guarding captives. Also, Zheng Ge and Li Ji in this book are like idiots. Rebellious thieves from the six countries can find Li Ji to lure people. Someone was crippled and caught by the protagonist? It doesn't matter, just talk to Li Ji and you can fish the person out, even the process of kidnapping can be avoided. There may also be people who want to assassinate the First Emperor. What if they can't get into the Qin Palace? Just ask Li Ji. Not only did he successfully enter, he was also able to bring weapons in! The guards wanted to stop them, Li Ji: I will explain to the king, and then the group went in with great swagger! What's even more outrageous is that Brother Zheng has never blamed Li Ji for these things. They all said things like "It's all the fault of these rebels, my dear, don't take it to heart". In short, this book is like a pot of highly toxic boiled water. Shennong left his footprints here to warn those who came after him.

It's not enough to watch at all. If I had known earlier, I wouldn't have jumped into the trap so early. I really want to tie the author into a dark room. . . Then. . . . Hey hey hey. . . . It's great. You can look at it at any time. If you want to look at it, use a knife to force it. No food will be given to you. Anyone forming a team?

To be honest, I am a Jing Ke fan. Gongsun Li and Jing Ke are a perfect match, and Ying Zheng is just a domineering president.

Shock! Master Xuan Qingzi is the man behind the First Emperor.

Let me correct you. Before the Han Dynasty, the Tao Te Ching was called Lao Tzu. I insist that it should also be the Tao Te Ching, with the Tao Te Ching first. I hope the author changes it

Qin Shimingyue started watching it in elementary school, and now she is about to graduate from senior year. She has watched the anime over and over again. The mystery is getting more and more confusing, and she really wants to kill Naruto. I came across this book today, and I have a lot of emotions. I don't know when the latest season will be released. Maybe I was already moving bricks on the construction site at that time. If nothing unexpected happens 🤫 It should be no problem to survive Shen Leping. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, come on. . The classification of this book is really mysterious. History is the bones and art is the wings 😅. There are also many people in the second dimension. I feel that the results may be better (the younger ones are the most beautiful, I will lick them first to respect them)

My personal views on Qin Shihuang and Jing Ke: In any case, Qin Shihuang's method of unifying the world, driving on the same track, and writing on the same page should be praised. Even the Confucian disciples who criticized Qin Shihuang for his tyranny did not deny this. No one can deny that the Qin Dynasty unified the six countries and eliminated the war. For this alone, Qin Shihuang is worthy of praise and worship. As mentioned before, before Qin unified the six kingdoms, were there no wars in the six kingdoms of Shandong? During the period of King Yan Zhao, the Yan State directly massacred the city after conquering the five capitals of Qi State, and the capital of Qi State, Linzi, was a river of blood. This is even more cruel than the Qin State. Indeed, Qin Shihuang himself made some mistakes when he unified the country, but this was helpless. After all, he was the first person to govern the empire that unified the Central Plains. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty and Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty both had problems and mistakes, but this cannot conceal their greatness. As for Jing Ke, my opinion is that he is a dead soldier. A great chivalrous person cares about the country and the people. Jing Ke failed to do any of them. Worrying about the country, I didn't see it. He didn't care about the people either. Does killing a few Qin soldiers on the roadside mean you care about the common people? At best, he is just a ranger, far from the definition of a hero. Some people say that he is his own hero. He is only responsible for his own interests, and of course he is his own hero. But I think this sentence can be summed up as: selfishness. If a selfish person can be considered a hero, then those traitors and bastards like you in history are all heroes. If someone who died generously can be considered a hero, then the word hero is too cheap. The extremists of ISIS died in style, but who dares to call them heroes. Those who serve the country and the people are true heroes. Jing Ke is just an assassin no matter what. No matter how much the past dynasties tried to clear up this man's name, it could not be denied that Jing Ke was a dead soldier, an assassin sent by Prince Dan of Yan to assassinate Qin. Those who say Jing Ke is great are just from the perspective of a nobleman. Also, Jing Ke went to assassinate Qin and saved their wealth. They should indeed praise him. To put it nicely, he is Yan Dan's guest, but to put it worse, he is a dead soldier raised by Yan Dan. In modern times, a person who assassinates a high-ranking person in a country is called a terrorist, and will be punished if caught. In ancient times, if an assassin was caught, he would basically kill the nine tribes. Jing Ke's behavior is a terrorist and a dead soldier no matter what era he behaves. I really don't find anything outstanding about Jing Ke, just like in modern times no one would cheer for those radicals in the Middle East. If it was not because he wanted to assassinate Qin Shihuang but was sent by Prince Dan to assassinate someone else, then he would not even have left his name, because the merits of a dead soldier are too light. Zhao Kuo was an armchair strategist on paper, but he at least had some merit for Zhao Guoli's military exploits, otherwise he would not have been recommended to lead an army of 400,000. But Jing Ke is basically a knight-errant. Jing Ke used his own life to repay Yan Dan's personal favor, which is worthy of respect, but to promote Jing Ke to the position of a hero like this is to look down on him. No matter in the Qin Dynasty Mingyue animation or in history, Jing Ke never said anything about serving the world. Historically, he said that he wanted to repay Yan Dan for his courtesy. In the prequel to Qin Shi's original comics, Jing Ke told Gai Nie that he just wanted to take Gongsun Li away. In neither place did he say that he was for the world. He understands his position and who he is.

The protagonist is a loser. After reading about a hundred chapters, I was persuaded to quit before it even made it to the shelves. According to the author's description, the protagonist has the first talent (gold finger bonus) and high IQ in thousands of years. One of the protagonist's identities is that of Prince Qin, coupled with the general trend of the world and knowing the future (the benefits of time travellers), there is nothing wrong with the protagonist joining the Qin Dynasty. Yu Qing, as a time traveler, is inherently biased towards the First Emperor, not to mention the status bonus; Yu Li, the general trend of the world is such that the protagonist cannot and does not need to go against the wind and block the car. But none of these can cover up the fact that the protagonist is a waste. The remaining heroes of the sixth generation of the Qin Dynasty are sweeping across Liuhe and unifying the world. The protagonist only needs to stand with the Qin Dynasty. Then based on your own strength, power, and future information (travelers' benefits), what should you do? The protagonist's strength and power are at the top level in the world, but the result is that he is always on the edge of the plot, ob? I just don't dare to change the plot and just follow the plot. Even if the plot change has no impact on the general trend of the world, don't argue with me about the butterfly effect. In the context of Qin Shi Mingyue's spiritual density, the irreversible trend of the world is not just a slogan, and the protagonist is on the side of the Qin Dynasty. Even if it has an impact, it will have a positive impact (the character of the protagonist is not a fool who does bad things with good intentions). For example, in more than ninety chapters, the King of Qin travels, and hundreds of knight-errant warriors and remnants of other countries assassinate the King of Qin, including Jing Ke... Haha, this Jing Ke is just starting out, but the protagonist fails to kill him several times (the protagonist has amplified spiritual sense, just like seeing and hearing, but in the end he can still let him run away?), Obviously he has a lot of strength The protagonist, who is a strong man, kills easily and decisively, but in the end, Jing Ke cannot be killed. Then, Jing Ke, who escaped with his life, rushes back for Li Ji (who is Tianming), and is discovered by the protagonist in advance. As a result, the protagonist does nothing, and just watches Jing Ke and Li Ji. King Qin bumps into... Holy shit, what the hell is this shit? The author really took great pains to prevent Jing Ke from dying. He made the protagonist lose his IQ and also tried to make the readers lose their brains too. Oh, by the way, the protagonist also showed a decisive and decisive side in killing and never holding back in these chapters, haha... It can be said that this is the text version of Qin Shimingyue, but with a dispensable original character added, and this character is really useless except copying some myths and stories!!! The author doesn't know how to deduce the plot, and he can't continue writing without the original plot, so the protagonist is high-strength and incompetent... I read the fanfic just to read the original work again? It's a pity that this novelist's idea came up.