Taoist Master Uncle of Mingyue in Qin Dynasty

He is sloppy and has no Taoist style. He comes from Taoism and falls into quicksand. He has no literary talent in the first place, but he can change it to this. He is poisonous.

The inflatable doll harem novel is not disgusting. What is disgusting is the kind of novel with no single woman but a lot of ambiguous text. You can skip to the harem novel to read it. The protagonist recognizes a woman as his sister, and later recognizes her daughter as his sister to prepare for the heroine. Isn't it bad to be an elder? I can't stand it anymore 😭

Let's talk about the plot of Tian Yan's parents. The author spent a lot of pen and ink describing the emotional experiences and inner struggles of his parents, making people think that they will have a happy ending. However, after writing a lot, his father still died. The difference is that the two confessed before his death. . . Then I spent a lot of words describing the changes in his mother's heart after his father's death. Finally, I used a lot of words to write about the protagonist's responsibility to face the killer with his mother, which made people think that his mother could at least have a good ending that was different from the original work. As a result, after four or five chapters of fighting, his mother still died in the end. . . Then why did you spend so much time writing about him? I have every reason to suspect that the author is just trying to count the words. If this doesn't count, then what does? ? Author, since you dare to write, do you dare not delete the book review and let everyone take a look?

To be honest, it's a bit boring, too bland, and not exciting at all. The plot, characters, and ending are almost unchanged from the original work. So what's the difference between watching the original work? What does the protagonist do when he travels to the past? Be a guest in the drama? Passerby?

The animation of Qin Shi Mingyue was very procrastinating and made me worry. The plot of your novel is also procrastinating. Farewell.

I read the latest chapter, Xiaomeng is out, it's finally out

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Look at the Qin Dynasty, don't all the people like the harem 😏? Add it to your bookshelf first and then read it when you have time.

This specious history seems to be a real drama. There is a mature pawn industry before the end of the Warring States period There is also Taoism, which cannot even be called Taoism. It is not impossible to apply the setting of fantasy online novels, but you can at least add some of Taoism's own "dry stuff". You don't ask for the three holes, or even the Chongxu, Tongxuan, and Dongling among the four auxiliaries. Even the internal chapters of Nanhua are not written as Taoism.

I just received a notification from the system that a new book with pictures and texts will be recommended on August 4th. Does anyone know where the two-dimensional pictures and texts are recommended? How can I not find it.

The early writing was so embarrassing. Why do such powerful people as Ying Zheng and Han Fei ask the protagonist for advice? I'm not telling you, I was so angry when Ying Zheng lowered himself and said that Taoism is the most important thing. Can the eldest brother stop being so childish? How can the character and IQ of an emperor through the ages be such a child's play? The various characters in the book have extremely low IQs, as if only the protagonist's opinion is what they need. They have no sense of autonomy at all. The more they think about it, the more they get angry and angry, and they give up. (I wonder if the author has read Youyou Da Qin? The characters and IQs of the characters in Qin Shi Mingyue are almost consistent with those in the original work. Neither the good guys nor the villains have lost their IQs, and their IQs are online throughout the whole process.)

Cultivation qualifications are very important, but the most important thing is understanding. In the Qin Dynasty, Mingyue Taoist followed Xiaomeng. The protagonist's character was too bad. Also, the author is a Taoist, not Taoist. Taoist practice is possible by relying on spiritual roots, but it is cultivation of immortality. Taoism thinks too much. Taoism talks about maintaining health and enlightening Tao, relying on understanding and fate.

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The neighbor next door picked up a sword to kill people at the age of four, went to the battlefield at the age of seven, commanded tens of thousands of troops at the age of ten, and became a king at the age of 12. When she was 12 years old, Xue Nu was 5 years old. She bought her directly to raise her Marrying a wife and marrying Nongyu, can you believe it

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it when it came to saving people. Give the life-saving elixir to the groom. Taoism does not mean that it is a waste of money. Those who can save lives in one breath must be rare . The hook of one elixir is obtained by Taoism in exchange for hundreds of lives and deaths, so just give it casually? Holy Mother, the IQ of pig's feet is not online, the supporting characters have no vitality and personality, the whole text is inconsistent and extremely poisonous, it's a pity the subject matter

Come on＾0＾~, you wrote well, I support it

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The plot after the protagonist left Tianzong was very strange and awkward. I read it slowly in the first few chapters. After Ying Zheng left, I started to pick up on it. In the end, I finished 30 chapters and finished it in 3 minutes. I always feel that the protagonist has been on the verge of obscurity in the early stage, useless. He neither knows how to use his own strength to do something, but also knows how to use his own power to do something, which makes his sense of leisure useless. As a result, Tian Heng died and Wuming died. In the later stage, all the powerful teammates died, and the burden became even greater. I led two pits by myself and was blocked by a trap. This plot design is designed. No wonder the author complains about poor performance all day long. Many people say that this is the reason why the plot is slow. If the plot is not smooth, of course it feels slow. For example, although the plot of "Lord of the Mysteries" progresses slowly, the plot is smooth and readers are also very comfortable watching it. So the author needs to improve the rationality and fluency of the plot, and the protagonist's IQ must also be improved.

It is recommended that you read the book review before watching. A book friend summed it up very incisively. The nanny of Mingyue in the Qin Dynasty clearly had the Tiandaozong token in his hand, but he was chased by the killer with two oil bottles. Moreover, these two oil bottles were exchanged for the death of several masters, so he just dragged them to write. If there is a plot killing, then it is better to just skip it. Everyone knows the plot killing, but the author has written several chapters, and all of them are for lunch. The protagonist is a spectator the whole time. He obviously has such a good status but does not take advantage of it. The great uncle of Tiandao Grandmaster is chased by a group of killers. Haha, I don't know what other people think.

After reading twenty chapters, I gave up decisively. This kind of plot of a loser pretending to be a slap in the face also appeared. Why not write urban novels and pay homage to my uncle? I have set it up but I can't accept being called that, poisonous! What else is there about Ning'er? Isn't it the original novel? I have to waste my time writing about a lolita. The pre-Qin schools of thought are all about dignity and status. Big brothers have come out. It's really disgusting to write about lolita. When writing about the Qin Dynasty, I didn't have a strong character to write an egg. 🙂 If you like to show off and slap people in the face, go write urban short stories.

I just read Chapter 30. The writing is really watery. The title of the novel is Taoist Master. He didn't show his composure when he should have, he didn't save people when he should, he just watched from the side, and he started to feel sorry for others when they died. . It's like I feel uncomfortable when writing online articles should be fun. I just want to maintain the original plot, spend a lot of time writing a supporting character, and then watch the supporting character die. . The author also asked why your grades have been poor recently and why you have no points. Some people will definitely say that I am a trainee and am not qualified to criticize. Sorry, I have only read Chapter 30 and I can't stand it anymore. Don't tell me that I will write something good later.

Looking at the above, the author's writing style is quite smooth, and the narrative development of the story is okay, but the plot is really poisonous. I don't know what Tian Yan's follow-up development will be like. If she is the heroine, it would be really poisonous 😅 I have a vague feeling that the author also wants to open up the Crystal Palace, as in the Mysterious Empress anime There are so many handsome men and beautiful women. I have read several articles about how Taoists with backgrounds in the Qin Dynasty kept harems everywhere. Without looking at their names, I thought they practiced Huanxi Zen. I thought that there were no scandals among the famous Taoist seniors 🤫. Could it be that Zhu Xi was expelled from Confucianism and joined Taoism 🤤

... This is written like a fantasy novel. There is a sect competition between outer disciples and inner disciples. Someone is dissatisfied with the protagonist, and then he comes out and pretends to be a slap in the face. The disciples are shocked again, and the same routine goes back and forth. This author must have written too many fantasy novels about slaps in the face, and it is too inconsistent! Imagine that the classic slap-in-the-face operation of Douqi turns into a horse appeared in Qin Shi Mingyue, and you will know how inconsistent his writing is! You can create something new, but you can't do it blindly. The writing is completely out of style! You can even come up with the pretense and face-slapping routines. How much do you love writing fantasy and face-slapping stories?

I just want to ask, what is the main line of this book? Moreover, the tragedy is too bluntly portrayed. He calls the person he just met recently as Brother Tian, ​​and then takes care of his wife for him. Finally, he even recognizes his daughter as his sister. There are so many poisonous points that even Shen Nong will be too deeply poisoned.

I can't stand it anymore, even after reading some of the previous ones. If you don't want to change anything, then why are you getting involved? Join in and watch others die, and then sigh. Then you sigh when you watch others die? Are you surprised?

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I can say for now that the protagonist is not strong enough but still has the characteristics of a virgin.

I really can't stand it. They don't care when Jing Sala and the others die in front of them. They don't care when Wuming dies. They care about a few children. The seniority is also messed up. Lu's master calls the male protagonist senior, Lu calls the male protagonist eldest brother, what a mess. He really doesn't have the slightest bit of reputation for Tianzong, and he doesn't have the B-number of his seniority at all, which is a total embarrassment for Tianzong.

This protagonist doesn't feel aloof from the Tianzong at all. He should go to the Renzong. He was given such a high-level arrangement. He went down the mountain before he had even developed his strength. There were not many disciples to follow him to protect him. Ren Xiaomeng had disciples to serve him when he went down the mountain.

The ending is rubbish! Don't you clean up those monsters and monsters? Will Zhang Liang and Liu Ji be killed? Are Europe and Africa not going to occupy it? Will modern industry not develop? Don't you want to plant potatoes, corn, and sweet potatoes? The whole world can't speak Qin language in Qin language? Doesn't the protagonist get a computer to play games and watch movies? In the end, you are not willing to write a few more chapters to summarize YY at the end to make readers happy? By the way, do you want to give your book a final upgrade? You wrote a shitty book! Please write it again quickly to make readers happy! Otherwise, I would really regret spending money to read your book! The ending is so rubbish? Who would like the ending of a couple of heroines with no abilities and no contribution getting married?

In the third chapter, the protagonist's name is Beichen. The protagonist has lost his memory and does not know his own name, but he knows that he is a time traveler, which is a bit contradictory. The protagonist should be given a common name. Using a Taoist nickname as a name feels a bit like looking at a supporting character.