The Eight Wonders of Yin and Yang of the Bright Moon in the Qin Dynasty

I can't read a single chapter about South Korea. I'm speechless. It's the weakest country among the Seven Kingdoms. How can it be such a big deal? There are a lot of NB characters described in Tian Xing Jiu Ge. If it's so NB, then how strong is Qin, which can't even fight back when it beats Korea? Can the leading role of Tian Ming dance in the main drama? And let me describe Han Fei: Han Fei "I want ninety-nine in the world of the seven countries!" Wei Zhuang "NB! What should we do?" Han Fei "Let's solve this murder and theft case first." Wei Zhuang "⊙∀⊙! But don't we know who the murderer is? Who else can it be besides those bitches in the night?"   Han Fei "There is only one truth! (ω<)★"   Wei Zhuang "???, Don't we know who the murderer is?"  Han Fei "There is no road race. Why do we need the police to arrest people without evidence?" Wei Zhuang "But even if there is evidence, you can't arrest Ye Mu's group!" Han Fei "I don't care, if I don't do this, how will others know that I am smart! Oops! This case is solved, hurry up and find the next case, there is only one truth!" Wei Zhuang "... So if you solve a case where you know who the murderer is, you can get ninety-nine points from the Seven Kingdoms? I can do it-" In summary, this is the entire content of Tian Xing Jiu Ge, which is extremely nonsense and boring.

Finally, there is a fan who didn't go to South Korea at the beginning to push Yan Lingji down, tease Zi Nu, and deliver the baby to Jing Salamander.

Why didn't anyone ask? Is it a harem book with multiple female protagonists? If I were to ask, wouldn't it make me look like an LSP? Actually, I'm not an LSP. I asked this question for other book friends because I was afraid they would be embarrassed. Is this book a harem? And Concubine Yan can't be cheap anymore, Yan Dan is such a good guy

After reading the latest chapter, I feel inexplicable. The trap was not organized by Lu Buwei alone. There are no people who control the contact. The other famous Tianzi first-class killers just left it alone? What about the killers under Jing Salamander, and where are the other intelligence officers nearby? In the later stage of the net, people were selected from among the prisoners. Is focusing on scaring Lu's relatives as effective as the inexplicable death of a high-level killer in a trap? Wuming doesn't exchange information with Jing Salamander, is he going to die?

The protagonist uses both hands so openly on the battlefield? Forget it, this is nothing. I just hope that I won't be Ying Zheng's dog in the future. I'm bored after seeing a lot of people who treat me as sons and brothers. Perhaps Ying Zheng was positive in history, but from the perspective of people at the time, no matter how you think of the candidates, you must be a cruel executioner. There are a lot of people who wrote that they wanted to join Ying Zheng to help him. I don't know what they think.

The fighting power of the older generation of heads of hundreds of families is too high. The protagonist can fight tens of thousands of troops on the battlefield alone. He has no ability to fight back against the older generation. The combined population of the 7 countries is not enough for a few old guys to fight. The younger generation are all martial arts, and the older generation are all cultivators.

Good early stage! It was almost impossible to look straight at the end. 1. There is no main line. 2. The protagonist disappears at every turn. If a book is written around the protagonist, what does it mean that the protagonist becomes the audience? 3. The plot is bad. You didn't think about the plot and wrote it. You are close to Ying Zheng, you love Han Fei, and you save Li Mu. Anyway, you are capricious, and the same is true for women. Otherwise, you should not describe the protagonist's emotional drama with great color. As a result, after describing it, you wrote the woman to the supporting role. Why write out the inconsistencies?

🤤😅😅😅 I am speechless about this author... Let alone the protagonist's common problem of persecution delusion... The woman is just a forced gift! Then there was a mess, a hammer here and a stick there!

I feel that the author's control of the plot is very blunt. First of all, there is the part where he meets Xuan Jian by chance. He has no problem treating Miss Wei, but Xuan Jian takes revenge and runs to help inexplicably. Without any foreshadowing or position, he offends Luo Wang and the political advisor. What is his appeal? The same is true for the subsequent plot of "Frightened Salamander", which is very blunt and forced to intervene. I just want to know what the protagonist's stance is in doing these things. What is the meaning of this illogical behavior? It's like saying hello to someone you meet on the street, and then running to work for him next time you meet him, and also giving advice to him? Isn't the protagonist embarrassed, and don't they think it's suspicious? I have no relatives, no reason to meet, and no interest relationship, so I want to go through life and death with you? This kind of plot is very senseless, isn't it?

We all went to do business. There was no power at that time. I was afraid that business would be difficult. I just had a big commander to help me. Did the Yin and Yang family know that they didn't take a share of the pie?

Only after reading to the end did I realize that it was about giving away girls, and all the purple girls were given away.

As long as Dong Jun is the heroine, I will watch it, but I will abandon anyone who takes over Jing Sala and raises Tian Yan.

In the Yin-Yang family, your level of prowess is still quite high. Why is it so difficult to explain after you leave the Yin-Yang family? Are you planning to become a leek in the end by making money along the way? People in Jianghu want money. If you just talk about money, what about Jianghu? Originally: a rainy night, a murderous intention, a pot of wine, and a sword. But now it is: abacus, account book, one hundred taels, one thousand taels... No, why can't you write more about Jianghu?

As the plot unfolded, the level dropped a bit and I couldn't watch it anymore.

After teasing, you deserve to be the one to give your woman to someone else.

Eight magical skills? Weird and obscene skills, useful in embarrassment.

To be honest, after watching dozens of them, I didn't understand what the protagonist wanted to do, and there was no main plot. Giving something as important as paper to the Confucians, and giving it just for money, firstly, you don't want to develop your power, secondly, you don't rebel, and thirdly, you said before that you are not short of money. After reading so many chapters, you will find that you don't know what the protagonist is doing?

I can't stand it anymore, the protagonist is a virgin, she has such a double standard. It feels uncomfortable for a selfish person like me

What is this thing in the back? The protagonist's strength is so strong, is it poisonous? Has the protagonist broken through the loneliness in the back? The front is stronger than the black and white Xuanjian. As a result, the latest one written here is almost like covering the sun. You will be cool if you do this.

After reading the book review, I ran out of respect first, combined with the discussion forum, there are a few points, "Sending a Girl", there is no main line, the writing is hazy, yo-yo brothers

I don't think Yan Dan is written as a scumbag. People in the Qin Dynasty have this problem now. The original work is not such a character. His mentor was killed by his wife before he drove her away. If Yan Dan is a very ambitious man in the city, there is no need to drive away Concubine Yan. Wouldn't it be better to keep her as a swordsman? To be able to make the ruthless Dong Jun fall in love with him is at least a nice person.

Tangtang Shuangshou has actually been reduced to a healing skill...

It's too much, too confusing. . I want to write about everything. I don't have my own main plot. The protagonist is just rushing to the scene, showing off everywhere. . . It's okay to say that paper turns waste into treasure. Promoting paper may also better preserve the culture of each family. Paper is easy to hide, but burning books may be more difficult. If the Qin State uses it well, it will be easier to unify the writing. If the Six Kingdoms use it well, it will be more difficult to unify the writing. There are advantages and disadvantages. But when you promoted sugar and wine during the Warring States Period (sugar, wine, soap, and perfume are really essential for no-brainer time travel stories), your brains are broken, your productivity is low, and there is not enough food for people to eat. You are just showing off for the sake of showing off. . . Originally, the Yin Yang family had a good start. .

There is no main line. I write whatever I think of. It's not for power or profit. I don't know what I want to do. I'm not very good at practicing. I just write whatever comes to mind. It's too messy. The Eight Magic Skills are obviously very useful skills, but the double hands have been turned into a healing skill, and the content is quite bland.

What rubbish? The front is fine, but what kind of garbage is behind?

Guys, do you have any Qin Shi fics with good female protagonists? There are so many to read in the starting point that it's hard to describe them all. Please recommend a few Kangkang books.

I don't know what to write either.

There is nothing interesting about this book, it makes the main character a hypocrite

The plot of this book has no main line. The protagonist is just a gangster with no goals at all. He pokes here and touches there. It can be said that the protagonist is simply a martial artist, and the soul of the character cannot be seen. Since you are not attracted by fame and profit, then what are you doing in this world? You just like to cause trouble.

This author has also written several Qin Dynasty novels... You can clearly feel that there has been a significant improvement in his writing style. But the plot is a bit too much! ! Moreover, the characters in the author's works have no souls, just like NPCs... I suggest the author start with the characters and try to figure them out. Try to inject some aura into each character! Come on! !